The Villain in the Book, Killed the Male Protagonist Long Aotian at the Beginning
穿书反派，开局杀了龙傲天男主
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Is There Any Book That Turns Enemies into Wives?
Looking for Two Male Leads! ! ! Double Strength! ! Exciting! ! !
Please recommend, I really have no books to read! ! ! ! !
Shuangnan Has No More Masterpieces. If You Don't Accept It, Come and Argue!
Two Men + Two Strong Men, Really Double Strong Men, Full of Sexual Tension
Dress up as a Villain and Hang Out with the Hero.
Two Male Masters of Cultivation, Double Strength
I would like to read a book similar to "My Days as an Alchemy Cultivator". It's a bit suspenseful and gives me goosebumps. It's really good. The data is too poor. The author changed the introduction today. Hahahaha. It's heartbreaking and funny. Look at the kids. You can't stop updating.
Please Shuangnan, Funny, the Best One Who Can Laugh Like Maggots
I want to read a book similar to "Infinite Flow: He is Beautiful, But Too Bad He Has a Mouth".
Is There Any Male Protagonist Who Falls in Love with the Villain? I Really Want to Watch This Kind of Plot🌚️
Cultivation of Immortality + Double Male + Double Strong + Genius + Are All Chief Disciples
I want to read a book similar to "The Little Junior Sister Is Clearly Super Strong, But Is Overly Dumb (Yijian Xinghedu)". Ahhhhh, I found out that the strong female + the senior senior brother in the Immortal Cultivation Center and the other senior senior brothers are all having a good time! ! I love Shuangqiang! There is no status difference!
No More Good-Looking Shuangnan? Please Feed the Child Some Fine Bran...
The writing is so good😭 Children won't pick it (but don't push it anymore if it's like the one who writes about the memory of your brain😣)
I Want to See a Normal Double Male Lead, but I Don't Want the Male Lead to Be Soft and Waxy (Sad)
I want to read a book like "Inexplicably Transformed into a C-Level A-lister".
The Two Male Protagonists Who Cultivate Immortality Can Make People's Eyes Brighter Again and Again, Don't Let the Writing Style Be Awkward
I want to read a book like "Stop chasing the hero, you will be unhappy if he dies".
Shuangnan, Shuangqiang, Shuangfengbiao, Belt Feeling, Pulling Feeling
I want to read a book similar to "Thriller Game: Crazy Criticism of Big Bosses and Others' Beautiful Ways".
The Two Protagonists Have a Tendency to Be Sworn Enemies. They Even Kiss Each Other on the Lips and They Don't Even Say They Are Familiar with Each Other.
I want to read a book like "I fell in love with my mortal enemy and the whole internet went crazy (Starry Night)".
The Title of a Mortal Enemy Is the Best for Cultivating Immortality.
Do You Guys Have Any Quick Travel Stories About Cool Beauties and Handsome Gangsters, Like This One?
I want to read a book like "Quick Travel: A Crazy Host Is Forced by a Cold-Desirable Beauty".
Rival Literature. in the Early Stage, They Were Purely Rivals, but in the Later Stage, They Gradually Fell in Love with It.
Is there any story about mortal enemies? It doesn't want to be about mutual secret love or a one-sided plot that has been planned for a long time. It should be about pure enemies in the early stage, then gradually falling in love with each other as they get along, falling in love and killing each other, similar to "Are You Sick?"
Are There Any Normal Bisexual Men Out There? Please, Sisters.
Don't be the kind of person who describes your appearance as if you are as beautiful as a fairy. Be more normal, I am easily embarrassed😗, and don't be the fast food love like cooking instant noodles😘Thank you!
Two Men, Cultivating Immortals, Not Master and Disciple. I've Read Too Many Articles About Masters and Apprentices, and I Don't Want to Read Anymore.
Are There Any Stories with Dual Male Protagonists and Long Aotian Type? I Really Want to Read Them Recently😭
Isn't There Something Amazing About the Novel About Cultivating Immortals? I Want Two Male Protagonists! I Want Two Male Protagonists!
Cultivation, Double Men, Double Strength! Double Strength! Double Strength! !
Are There Any Stories About Two Male Cultivators, One of Whom Is Long Aotian🥹
Want Two Men, Be Strong, Fall in Love and Kill Each Other
The kind of people who have no feelings at first, but then fall in love with each other and kill each other because of some things. It needs to be tense and it will be very exciting.
(Disclaimer: I am not a human computer, I just prefer to comment like this) Positioning: Upgrade flow + dual strength + two-way redemption Content: The writing and plot are both online. It has a strong male video flavor and a complete world view. The foreshadowing mentioned in the introduction has begun to take shape in the chapters that have been updated so far. The theme of "destiny" is destined to not be simple in the follow-up plot. I look forward to the author's exciting follow-up content [Blow kiss] Characters: ① Protagonist: "Mu Feng ! And the contrast is quite big. When I was reading, I kept going back to the introduction to double-check who Gong was. Haha, Xiaojiang is really cute [laughing and crying] ②Supporting characters: Due to the limitations of the current chapter, there are not many supporting characters. There are some who show off, and some who are pretentious. Personally, I feel that they are in line with the atmosphere of the book, but is it really okay for the spiritual pet to be bald [face covering]. What interests me more is how the author will handle the creation of Jiang Junyuan's "confidante" character. The two characters that have already appeared are the senior sister Ye Ning, who is as gentle as jade, and Hui Zhilanxin, who loves but does not entangle; the formation wizard Su Qingwan is witty and cunning, and fights wits and courage with the protagonist. Both of them are independent and sober. Let's set it up as a big hostess `▽´๑)۶ Summary: Although the pace of the first few chapters is a bit fast and has some shortcomings, the concubine is so obsessed with pleasing me that the native dog said "I love watching!!" (´▽｀)ノ♪ Also, is the author reading this? Very good, still watching! The child is starving to death! I want to update (whispering) 2026.3.1
The boss wrote it so well😋😋There is no inexplicable backlash between boys and girls, there is no emotional pull to deliberately lengthen the front, no one is suppressed and aggrieved, only one can quickly understand one's own feelings, and take the initiative to confirm the relationship with a straight shot after an accident. Mu Feng 99, young lovers 99, always support the two strong! Although I was very angry that the bad mouse ate the protagonist's first fruit, I was relieved when I thought about it and thought that the fruit was not actually obtained by the protagonist after a lot of effort, and it was not unique. Otherwise, I would have been really angry. And the role of mice is really great, it doesn't hold anything back. Anyway, boss boss, your writing is so cool😋😋
The two of them have saved my life just by standing there. It's been a long time since I've seen two people whose characters are both stable and I like them very much. Mu Feng is one of the few people I've seen in Yangshizi who is really cold. There is no deliberate description but his character can be reflected in every word. The same goes for Jiang Jun. He has a clear distinction between love and hate. He has a playboy side and a serious side. What I like most is that both of them treat each other seriously. The double strength is great. . . Evenly matched is the best. . It's not enough to watch at all. This is the first time I am so eager to follow a series. . . I really want to travel directly to the end. Sir, I will always support you woo woo woo Jiang Mu99. Is Jiang Mu happy? .
The plot writing is online, the emotional line progresses very quickly, and it feels like it should be a medium-length novel. I particularly like the two characters! Jiang Jun has a strong sense of humor and is sometimes very delicate(?) In his youth, and has the image of a casual and carefree young man. Mu Feng is decisive in killing but a little clumsy emotionally (especially towards Jiang Jun). Both of them are types with low moral sense. The only drawback is that it's painful to scratch your head and wait for updates every day! I'll eat it all over again when I'm free!
Really super pretty. The relationship between Jiang Jun and Mu Feng progresses very quickly. Although it is a bit abrupt, it is easy to get along with each other. Senior sister Ye Ning is also very good. After discovering Jiang and Mu's feelings, she let them go without getting entangled. However, Jiang Jun's treasure hunter rat is bald. This is the first time I have seen such a unique spiritual pet.
It's nice. It's nice. I haven't seen any curse words so far. It's not a mom's boy or a girl. It's a real rivalry. It's a real fight. It's cute even after becoming a young couple. It's cute. But the process of Mu Feng's falling in love is too fast. It's a bit abrupt. There's nothing substantive. It's a bad feeling. How can you fall in love with someone so quickly after staying in the apocalypse for so long? I don't have any worries and I can use my spiritual power as soon as I cross. There are no words or scenes described in the introduction. Just those few words where the two of them hacked each other, it was a bit of a waste of expectation. Overall very good
I go, it's so beautiful, not only are they two strong men, but they also have a complete world view, and they have strengthened their strength through career training. It's so cool, and their emotional lines are not abrupt at all. I really don't think their emotional lines are fast. From the beginning, they were on guard against each other, to later they saw the essence of each other's souls, to falling in love with each other, and trusting each other. , Defenseless, and I really like the character of the protagonist. One has a high coolness and can follow his own will, with a good harvest of strength and emotion. This sense of control and the courage to act, while the other is a soft-spoken but kind of protagonist who refuses to admit defeat, wears bright clothes and rages on horseback. They are attracted to each other and pull each other! ! That's it! Perfect match! ! Jiang Mu 99! ! ! I really, really, really like this way of strengthening one's own strength while taking care of love. I am not addicted to love, but I can have someone behind me to accompany me on the road of continuous advancement, so I am no longer lonely. I'm really looking forward to future developments! What is the origin of this master? Is he just a supporting character being played around by the protagonists at will, or will he grow up later on? I'm still looking forward to it. Is this book halfway through? Tiandao seems to have compromised? Are there other conspiracies behind it? OMG so looking forward to it! My lord, this is so beautiful! ! ! _(:_‖∠)_It's great
Although the plot is a bit abrupt, the best thing is that the characters of the two people are great. The old enemy is the wife. The old enemy is the enemy in fate. The fate of meeting and killing each other. The author really wrote out the feeling of the old enemy. It's awesome.
It's okay, the logic is clear, the characters are vivid, and there's a sense of life. It's rare for me to read a Qing Qing Shui Shui article. This article is very interesting, but it's a bit short. I hope the author can write more!
So far, it seems to be okay, the characters are very good, the plot is online, the IQ is online, and the author has great potential. But there are also some shortcomings. For example, the past mentions of the two protagonists are very one-sided descriptions. At least I cannot empathize with them. I only know that they were miserable before. There are also some parts that are always brushed off, which gives me the feeling that the protagonist becomes stronger all of a sudden, which feels a bit fast. There are also two protagonists, the characters are very good, but they feel that there is no growth (maybe they lack inner thinking). For example, in the time and space turbulence, they have language and actions, but what about the heart? Aren't the two protagonists worried that they will die? And I personally feel that the two of them have tried their best to survive from the past, and their desire to live should be relatively strong. They cannot give up their lives easily just because the other person is dead. Instead, it is more in line with the characters to take a gamble and keep both of them alive. All in all, the author has no basic problems. He has great potential to produce better content quality. Don't abuse it just for the sake of sweetness. Control the rhythm of the plot and put some effort into the protagonist. The quality is absolutely nothing to say. Of course, if this was just a purely sweet article, it would have passed the test. [Send heart][Send heart]
I like the characters very much, both of them. I have seen a lot of time-traveling and cold experiences, but the inner activities are too rich. The cold tone at the beginning of this book is successful, but there is just a little more pride and possessiveness later on. Now that I have reached chapter 44, I will continue to read it. If it is not good, I will change the score. I have caught up with the progress, and the rating remains unchanged.
It's very good, the logic is online, the writing is good, the character creation is excellent, and the action is not sluggish. I feel very good after reading the whole book. The plot develops a bit quickly, and the characters' emotions change quickly. Most of the sentences in the introduction are not shown. I wonder if it is the plot that only occurs after Tiandao makes several killing moves. The expectation in the introduction is too high, so I was a little disappointed that I didn't see some sentences that made me feel happy when I read the text. As for the subsequent speculations, the part serialized now does not deviate from the theme of resisting fate. There should be a confrontation with the way of heaven in the follow-up, and there may also be repeated backtracking. The character of the protagonist Jiang Jun is sunny in front of outsiders but has the greatest interests behind his back. He is hot-faced but a loyal dog in front of Mu Feng. Mu Feng is cold-faced, cute, arrogant, venomous and has a hard-hearted tongue. He was indifferent to everything before he fell in love. He is not easy to judge after falling in love and is possessive. In summary, both of them are a little bit wet. In fact, only a few of the supporting characters are highlighted. Ye Ning is a very gentle and reliable sister who has a good sense of proportion. The character creation at the end of Chapter 47 is even more amazing. Su Qingwan is brave and resourceful. Other bad reviews. Both of them are great heroines when they are released. Leopard and Leopard Cat's opinion: It feels like the two of them are like heavy rain and crops. The crops need rain but there is too much rain and the crops drown in this water. The crops refer to cats and cats. The heavy rain refers to Leopard and Leopard. The rainwater refers to Leopard and Leopard's love for Cat. This love is too much and too heavy. Cat and Cat drowned. It is also mentioned in the text that Cat should have killed Leopard and Leopard before the thunderstorm of heaven came down, but Leopard and Leopard couldn't let it go. The heavy rain falls on the crops and does not get into the sludge. Even though they know that Leopard has seen the dark side of the world, they still want him to be less exposed to it. Leopard is intoxicated in the gentle embrace of Leopard (actually he is confused by the fragrance) and gives more love. This is a closed loop.
Hahaha, after eating so much shit on Tomato, I finally found a great book😍 I'll give you a review as soon as I'm tied 😋 The characters are very good, the plot is online, and the writing is good! Maybe it's because my little Taiyang suffers from too much high-cold attack🤓When I'm reading, I always reverse the positions of Jiang Jun and Mu Feng😇 os: Is it true that no one thinks Jiang Jun is delicate? Mu Feng gives me the feeling of being cold on the surface but actually a dank male ghost. In Jiang Jun's words, he looks like a cool little sun on the outside, but in reality he is a black sesame glutinous rice dumpling. Anyway, it's quite interesting😋😋😋 After watching it intermittently for two days, I found that the more I tasted, the more delicious it became! But I'm a little curious, where is the second mistress who snatched things from Mr. Mu Fengjiang in the secret realm? Will we meet her in this Kirin secret realm☺️I'm really curious about her follow-up 😉 os: I really want an author to reply! 😋😋😋I will be very happy to get it! ! ! I will always follow the author!
I am super. I am super. It's so pretty. I love it. The old enemy is awesome Klass. The rival is awesome Klass. Beanbao helped me generate bikini photos of the author. It's so touching. The plot is not procrastinating. Everyone has a distinct personality. They are all good babies. I'll go. It's delicious. So delicious. I finally struck gold
Gaga, I like this character and setting. I support you a lot as the author. You must make it to the finale😭 The process of Mu Fengxian's attraction felt unnatural.
It's quite good-looking, full of youthful spirit, the writing style is funny, and it has a male-video feel. Generally speaking, the pace is fast and the writing style is neither new nor awkward. Beautiful 👀❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤ ️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤ ️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ It's so cool. Men are menstruating and women are going crazy. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. It's God and it's my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, jumped, and danced tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water❤️❤️❤️
This book was just a taste of this book [shy] but after reading it, I felt that the characters were very good for my xp [Adoration] [Adoration] and the bumping between the two people was so exciting. The cool thing was that Mu Feng, who was aloof and lusty, was the first to understand. Jiang Jun, who seemed to be a fool but was not enlightened, was also quick to do something between the two. After reacting, Mu Feng went against the routine [Shy][Shy] Oh my God, it was so exciting [Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry] The plot is pretty good, and it is more suitable for impatient readers who don't want the pace to be too fast. To sum up, the contrast is better and just right. Friends who are more picky about the pace can try [Blowing Kiss]
It's really good to watch. The relationship between the two people is not sluggish. They have distinct personalities and are very lovable. There are no bloody misunderstandings. The author's writing made me feel close to my heart. I like it so much [Learned it] [Learned it] [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]
In fact, the character design and the handling of this "classic" plot are not bad, but the emotional line feels a bit weird, and the attraction is a bit abrupt, and I think this kind of character should kill many times, but the interaction after they get together is also very interesting [Send my heart][Send my heart]
This book is very enjoyable to write, and the pace is relatively fast, but the emotional line seems not to be handled very well. I didn't understand the early emotional line. Can the author give me a rough summary of their early psychological journey [crying][crying][crying]
The setting is very cool, and the ambiguous writing is super touching, but the emotional description is a bit not very good. The emotional development of the two people is not very clear. I can't see the two people's heartbeat points and emotional changes. And has this level of strength been written somewhere? This description feels that the golden elixir is particularly strong, but it does not describe the level of ordinary people, but overall it is good, you can watch it
The plot is compact, the characters of the characters who appear are very expressive, and the fighting is also quite exciting. However, the relationship develops so fast, I thought that the emotional line will not come out until later.
The character design of the protagonist is good. Mu Feng gave me the illusion of a patron saint. It's cool and touching. The cat protects the leopard very well. The interaction between the two little ones is also very good. Jiang Jun becomes slimy after he becomes wise. They are a bit like the saying "Behind every little sun there is a crow." "Pitch-black guy" Although I don't know if Jiang Jun is really Little Yang, but the way of getting along with each other where you kill someone and I hand you a knife really suits me. Mu Feng, your uncle dotes on his father. Just looking at the introduction, I feel that it will be very knife-like in the back. Also, it is too short. I am tied woo woo woo [please update]
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, it's so fun to love and kill each other! ! ! The awakening is quite early, but it's not rushed, it's very beautiful!
Nice! ! ! Already tied! The writing is very smooth, at least I had the patience to read the whole story. The plot is novel and not so popular. However, Mu Feng's emotional explanation jumps too fast and I feel that the explanation is not detailed enough. Maybe the author wants to rush the emotional process, but it is a bit rushed. It is still very interesting to pursue these words without thinking. I can only say that there are great Confucian scholars who argue for it. Regarding Mu Feng, the explanation is not detailed enough, and the understanding of him is based on the surface. Therefore, it may be just right for the author to lay out Mu Feng's emotional fluctuations. Anyway, it is quite interesting. If there are no particularly sudden changes later, I will just follow the serialization state.
It's very exciting from the beginning. It's rare to see such a particularly decisive protagonist. I usually get scared when I see time travel and don't know what to do. But our Mu Feng is different! Just go up and give the future Taoist companion a sword. When he saw Mu Feng first falling in love with Jiang Jun, he still didn't understand why a very cold person would fall in love with a very straight wood. But when you see it later, you will understand why. Jiang Jun is really a very good person. The subsequent plot is also different from many books. The protagonist does not cause his partner to lose his memory because of his self-righteousness. Both of them are very selfish people and do not want the other to fall in love with anyone. Later, Mu Feng became more and more lethargic, Jiang Jun committed suicide again and again, and waited and searched for 10,000 years. The young couple is really miserable. They want to be happy! !
As of today, I have read them all. I really, really recommend it. This is really the best book of the year that I read on Tomato. I have never written a review before, but I couldn't help but write a long paragraph about this one [almost crying] Note! ! ! ! The following contains spoilers! ! ! ! ! ! ! Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooww ways...~~~~~~… This book is really unique. The characters of the protagonists are very novel. Mu Feng's coldness and Jiang Jun's freshness are really unique. In addition, almost all the other supporting characters are chaotic and evil. The protagonist is also very clean and straight away cured my mother's heart. Ye Ning's ability to hold and put down and her gentleness hide the knife Gu Qingyang's uprightness yearns for the strong Ye Chen is greedy for life and afraid of death, but still struggles to value love and justice. There are also some very vivid villains: Qin Muyou, Qin Er, Ling Feng, Ling Wei, Su Qingwan, and demon saint Bai Jinyao The mythical beast Qilin, Fengwu Fengxuan, and those heavenly chess players Hey, every character is really vivid. Moreover, the author really writes a very good worldview, a complete writing style, and a good grasp of the rhythm. It is very good to laugh when to cry, and it is very good. And each story is very complete, The first encounter with the Lingzong, the love affair in the secret realm, the Holy Land assessment, the sword selection in the Holy Land for seclusion, the attack of the demons and becoming a prisoner (it was very impressive to find one), the chaotic space flow to Xijing City, the trick and abduction to prepare the secret realm, being trapped in the illusion and returning to the apocalypse (this is what touched me the most), straying into the Kirin trial, and the script transaction with Feng Xuan. There is no such person in the world (I cried to death), and there is only one person who can be reincarnated for thousands of years... This book is very realistic, but not cruel, and thoughtful, yet very relaxing. And you can even learn a lot, including the names of mythical animals, social skills, writing skills, new character types... In short, in short I really appreciate this book [laughs] This is what I think is the best double-male fairy tale right now.
This book is really good, not only for the plot but also for the writing. It should be one of the books I have read on Tomato in the past few years and found it most satisfying. The characters of the two are very good, and the two strong characters are really tense. And in the plot, they also grow up together. This really pokes me. Nowadays, many immortal cultivators are written like an assembly line. Mu Feng's character design is really special and touching. I rarely see this kind of character design in Tomato. I can only say that the author is awesome. I also want to ask the author a question, why can't I find this book when I want to post a post on the forum?
It's so exciting. In most novels, when you dress up as a villain, you don't want to fight against the protagonist. Anyway, you have to hide or be nice to the protagonist. This one is different. If you go up, you will do it. If you can't beat it, you will die together. I feel so happy when I read it. And their emotional line, I can only say four words: be brave and do it. Mu Feng likes it, Mu Feng gets it! Little Couple 99 [Sending Hearts]
It's so good-looking, so good-looking. It's been a long time since I've seen such a normal novel where the two male protagonists are about the same strength. Who knows that all I see online every day are abnormal relationships, but I just want to see something normal...