Warhammer 40,000: I Don't Want to Be a Can of Slaanesh

The canned betrayal is quite interesting, the part about the Slaanesh warband is written in a very hammer-like way, and the expensive priests and priests who become battle brothers are also quite interesting. I hope to maintain the basic base of being people-oriented and not investing in Chaos. There aren't many words at the moment, so I can't get enough of the meaning out of it, so I'll have to save up and read it again.

Seedlings are worth raising. The writing can be read and the story can be told clearly. It is said to be a canned Slaanesh but in fact it is very un-Slaanesh, and even more loyal, not consuming food 💊 loves to be clean and unites to take care of the brothers. At present, the protagonist's golden finger is a powerful psychic power that can help the brothers expel the influence of chaos. I look forward to the day when the protagonist will lead the battle group alone.

So far, the characters have been well portrayed. There are not many chapters in the new book, but the plot is very interesting. It is neither mindless nor dark and cruel in pursuit of the so-called Hammer flavor. The subject matter is also very interesting. The protagonist is a recruit of the Chaos War Gang of Emperor's Sons. He protects his fellow recruits surrounded by sexual abuse and perverts. The biggest feature of this book is that it is very interesting to write. The extremely gravity of emotions in Warhammer is indeed not found in other Warhammer-themed novels. The shortcoming is also obviously the slow pace. Kanade, although I don't think this is a big problem. After all, I don't really like short and fast novels. After finishing the exciting points quickly, there is a flow of stories. What I am more curious about is whether the path the protagonist is looking for after leaving the war gang is curve loyalty or returning to the empire. But it seems that no matter which path he takes, it seems that he will try to rebuild the emperor in the end. The emperor's gene seeds and implantation transformation technology seem to be impossible to obtain whether he is independent or surrenders to the emperor.

The protagonist has a sense of eldership, which makes people feel warm when watching it [laughs][laughs][heartfelt]

I'm very happy that Tomato actually has a pure Warhammer fanfic with a more dark library flavor. Due to the limitation of the platform type, fast-paced and exciting writing, it is actually a bit difficult to write well a world view that requires delicate rendering and foreshadowing and suppression first and then expansion (and suppression accounts for 99%). For those who can hack libraries, the frequency and obviousness of the author's cheating are even a bit excessive (no critical ridicule). The tone of Warhammer is grimdark, so if you are too eager to please the platform audience, it will lose its flavor and become a cheap fast food with a different world view. The result will naturally be that readers will forget about it after reading it and be drowned in the overwhelming tomato content. I hope the author sticks to his original intention. This is a pot of stew that needs to be simmered slowly. Only after patient polishing and precipitation can you get the true taste. Although some audiences who are accustomed to fast-paced and refreshing articles will be lost during this period, real money can stand the test of time. You must believe that the audience that truly belongs to you will become more and more. Finally, it is my personal selfishness. In fact, I really look forward to the deep collision and conflict between the protagonist and the fallen original body and clones. After all, they are the seeds of []! Family comedy (tragedy) is an integral part of the game and must be savored!

Wuhu, to be honest, I didn't have much hope before reading it, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly written. The author has brought out the twisted creative feeling of the British a little bit, but it is just in line with the physique of domestic children and will not be too intense. The shortcoming is that it is a bit flat, and it is difficult to mobilize emotions in the plot. The cool novel has the way of mobilizing the cool novel, and the same goes for the hammer novel. The cool points of the hammer novel lie in faith, will, unyielding, and belief. The author has not shown any bright spots in this aspect. The Warhammer Journey next door does a good job in this regard, especially the plot of writing about mortals, which is completely worth learning. The distortion of chaos written by the author is still a bit slight, and it is not exciting enough, causing the overall plot to become flat. If it can be improved, it will be great, but if it cannot be changed, the current writing is still very good.

Male mothers are great, male mothers are wonderful. . . The author must never stop updating! It's been a long time since I've seen an article that suits my taste like this ദ്ദി (⩌ᴗ⩌ ) The protagonist is simply on the level of Bai Yueguang. Now he is waiting for the final betrayal, and a group of gravity male ghosts look helpless and furious ꕤᴗ ᴗ)♡

It can be watched by outsiders, it is a slow-burning game, the plot is steady and steady, and it clearly explains why Warhammer does not recommend time travel. This is the first time I've seen a chaotic start. The protagonist is a scorpion beauty and a male mother type, and she is a straight-shooter! The mystery of his identity is also very interesting. He thinks he is a human god, and he has great hope of making dumplings! Looking forward to a wave!

This book is quite good. The protagonist seems to be a kind and gentle elder. It gives me a feeling of Emperor Zhaolie. There is no more truly noble phoenix than this. The plot is also reasonable. I don't see any particularly serious bugs. Five-star recommendation!

Very nice! I hope there is no CP and no heroine

The author writes really well! ! It's really not easy to find a book of this quality on Tomato tt... I particularly like the character of the protagonist, and the description is also very realistic - I hope this kind of fairy tale will not stop being updated! ! ! (Kneel down)

It's a rare can of Slaanesh! There are no messy system cheats. It is very comfortable to watch. Five-star praise (*≧∪≦)👍🏻 It's just too little. Please update me quickly.

It exploded! ! Brotherhood! Emotional but not lustful (slightly colored seasoning) Boss's skill in baking this book will leave a fragrance on the lips and teeth, fragrant but not greasy, so that it will be hard to forget, I hope Boss will go well and be safe! I just want to savor it a few times after it's over (actually I've already been saying it back and forth hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe))' must stay famous forever! ! ! ! ! !

The Emperor's Love is dedicated to old artists who insist on ancient hand-rubbing. This is the first time I have read the Hammer novel from the perspective of the Chaos warband, and the writing style is so exquisite and realistic. I really like the descriptions of moaning and sighing at the gate. The fighting is also unexpectedly artistic, and I even thought it was an ancient dragon. The protagonist feels very big but the combat power is quite well controlled. The comment section is very interesting. I hope you can stick to it. As long as the plot line does not collapse, even if the pace is a little slow, it is a very promising book.

This is what I want to see. It matches the darkness and depression of the original work, the exquisite characterization, and the complicated settings. It can be seen that the author really put his heart into the design and read the information. Moreover, the emperor is indeed my favorite legion. I like to watch the villainous mouth and teeth, but I really hope that the teacher can have a good ending (although it is unlikely, but the protagonist must beat the teacher to the teeth in the future), but I also want to fight with the teeth, I want to see the blood flowing into the river, and I want to watch chop chop chop chop chop (no) It's so exquisite. It's the death of hope in the novel world. It's great. The score is low, I feel it should be at least 8.5, No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, it's hard to see Enki for a minute now, the author will update his mouth quickly.

In fact, it's quite good, but the pace is very slow. When writing emotional scenes, it's a bit like a female channel (I can't tell, maybe because of the character of the protagonist). At present, it seems that there are no shortcomings except the slow pace. The five stars give the author some motivation.

I think it's pretty good, the plot is very reasonable, and the gravity system between the duty corps is so delicious, and the character of the protagonist, a male mother, is also very good. She seems to be very gentle, but she actually has her own opinions. So far, I have only caught up with the plot of being kidnapped by Douya. The author is too slow to update later. Please add more soon.

There is currently no trace of AI, which is regarded as a conscience in Tomato. The writing and plot are excellent. Even if it is placed at the starting point for a fee, a group of people can watch it. At present, it seems that the author does not have an outline. As for the future plot, my opinion is that I hate chaos, but I can't stand the corruption of the empire. As long as I avoid these two points, it will be good [smile]

Highly recommended. The protagonist is so reliable. He is like a mother. He leads a group of fighting brothers in the cesspit of Warhammer and tries his best not to be like maggots in the dung sea. Thank you! Loyalty! [Cry][cry][cry] I look forward to this update every day. It's not enough.

It's a good movie, with a lot of dark jokes, and the exciting battle parts are also interesting. I really like the character of the main character, Asasi, who is smart, smart, and very charming. The writing is quite fluent, and I have the desire to read it. It seems that there are not many books in pink and black cans. Don't stop reading. I must finish reading Kouya. Wdfk is a truly well-crafted State Banquet. I want to update it every day so I can't sleep (just kidding). The plot and character creation are really to my liking. My heart has been led away by the group of cans with complicated ingredients under the protagonist's hen wings (not)

It's good to read, and the author is really good at writing about Warhammer heroes. It is still rare that the empire and chaos do not stand, and the plot does not collapse. I wait for the author's update on Tomato every day. Our Slaanesh canned food can be saved too [licking screen] By the way, when I was playing Rogue Trader, I felt that the plot of Commorragh was a bit outrageous. In the middle of the game, I saw that the author was planning to take up the background of Rogue Trader of Commorragh, and there were conspiracies and so on. Fortunately, it landed safely [face covering] The plot that followed the teacher Can Guan was really well written. The author is talented in writing character arcs (make more of these characters who are so talkative and cute [crying]!) I look forward to the farming plot in the future [send heartfelt]

Well written and articulate! ! ! Full marks for creativity 💯, the plot is moderate and not procrastinating, the writing is very non-obtrusive, the characterization is very detailed, and the protagonist also has a very charming personality. It is very refreshing to watch the protagonist change the status quo like a hook little by little, but it does not have the abrupt feeling of changing for the sake of change like ordinary refreshing novels. In this gloomy world, Enki shines directly into the lives of the people around him like the morning sun, and he is so severely redeemed! There is also my favorite part about gravity. What I want to see is this mouth and teeth! Such a good novel, your brother, the reader, must strongly support it. I hope more people will read this book, and I hope the author can keep writing.

I know the setting of a Warhammer novel very well, I know where the boundaries are, what the Four Gods are and the boundaries of their powers. What is commendable is that the author is not as hysterical as other Warhammer fan authors, is not crazy, does not make jokes, and is not so silly that he is drooling. In this regard, he has surpassed 90% of the fans. I personally suggest that you break away from the original Emperor's Sons war gang as soon as possible and take people out to work hard as soon as possible. Not to mention grabbing a planet to develop on your own, you should at least have a frigate of your own. Whether it is disguised as a ship-based war gang or a war group, it is really not possible to work for the Rogue Traders.

It's a very good book. I was pulled to read it by a friend and fell in love with it. The author worked hard to make up for the setting and the writing is heart-warming. The protagonist is a male mother, and it is a rare canned rebel. It is purely handmade and the writing is better than most authors! It's our favorite dumplings, and the male protagonist is a succubus. The story has been perfectly written with the characteristic flavor of Warhammer, which is so natural that it makes us fight to death. The author also pays great attention to his health and balances reality and writing. I hope it can be completed normally. We will always support you!

Don't let Rogue Trader's game settings overwhelm the main focus. After all, the character design is mainly focused on "Slaanesh's warband transforms into undivided chaos." Too many game settings (and the foreseeable plot of Grand Inquisitor Kalkaza) will turn the novel's look into a game manual. To be honest, as an RT, the look and feel of Octavia is a bit poor. The direct addition of the merchant (Winster Kyle) seems to be the default line of Khorne, and the vampire next to him is not there. It turns out that there are no descriptions of political commissars and thugs in Comoros. In fact, political commissars can completely replace the niche of the current team (Mortal Auxiliary Officer of the Astra Militarum). Political commissars can be whitewashed (liberal route) in the later stages of Comoros. Xiao En obviously wants to go (free), and thugs can do dirty work as (alien white gloves). Instead of creating an rt for the mortal plot, it is better to directly use the NPCs in the ppt. To be honest, the current character design of Octavia is very much like a standard setting tool. I know that the author wants to incorporate RT elements to make Enkidar's smooth development (source of wealth) traceable. However, this is also the same problem mentioned before. It relies too much on the game settings. I hope this problem can be improved in the colonial farming in the next chapter. However, the flaws in the plot do not hide the flaws, so keep going.

It's rare to see this kind of description starting from the details. The characters are handled very well. Except for revealing the protagonist's identity too early, everything else is very good.

Although it is a classic plot of a high-dimensional soul traveling through time and becoming a god, considering the background of Warhammer, there is really no way to survive without becoming a god, but it is still well written.

As an old reader who started reading this book when it first opened Chapter 1 and re-read it several times that day to see if the author has updated it, this is really the best Warhammer fanfic I have ever read. I also like the male and female character of the protagonist. The atmosphere in the gang also feels very good. I really hope that this book will continue to be written, but the words of the author in the last chapter that I have seen make me very worried about the author's safety and whether the book can continue to be written. I hope that the author can continue to write, and must hold on! [Cry]

I like it so far. As a novice writer, I was really surprised to be able to write to this level. The plot was smooth and smooth without any abrupt twists and turns. The relationship between the characters and the subtle emotions between the characters were also well grasped! The writing is good, I hope the author will write better and better, and have a happy life! And this is the only way for me to understand the canned Slaanesh. The author must continue writing! ! ! ( ⁼̴̀ .̫ ⁼̴́ )✧

It's probably not an AI article. The writing style is fresh and reads smoothly. The protagonist, Jar, is a normal person who has used the Emperor's gene seed. He should later leave the war gang and establish his own business.