Opening a Breakfast Shop with Her Baby, the School Beauty Actually Wants to Be a Stepmother

Overall, it's okay. The image of the male protagonist is actually good, but the fact that he and his ex-wife have never been separated is a poisonous point. However, the existence of the female protagonist makes it impossible for her to remarry, which creates another poisonous point. Secondly, the psychological description of the heroine is quite normal. After reading that the author has written several books on Family Love➕Cooking, I guess she hasn't turned a corner yet. This is what Tomato says. Try not to have any poisonous points in your book, and even if there are, readers must be able to accept them, otherwise the results will definitely not be good. This book can be said to be the author's masterpiece, of course not if the author continues to write. In short, at least the author put a lot of effort into handwriting and it is not AI, and it is relatively smooth. It is just a matter of strengthening the writing and setting processing.

It's okay, I just don't understand why we are already divorced. Why didn't we tell our family and kept it secret all this time? Wouldn't it be even more explosive if we found out later?

When will I get my certificate from my junior sister? And break up with your ex?

Very good article about raising children, five-star praise, keep up the good work

It looks good, but why not update it?

It's really good, and the prices are normal, unlike some food articles where the prices are extremely high, and the hero's daughter is also quite cute.

Looks good, please update more

Very good, a really good father really cares about his children. I hope the rhythm of the emotional drama can be faster.

I stayed up late and watched it for two hours. It was very interesting and heartwarming to listen to it.

It has a sense of life, the image of the male protagonist is better created, Xiao Youyou is so cute,

It's okay. As a book during the book shortage period, it is considered to be the best.

How can it be so easy to make money?

Nice book, recommended

I hope it gets better and better [smile]

Come on, hit new highs

I really like the book you wrote

Feeling good so far.

It's very well written, I hope the author can keep updating it.

The writing feels average, but it is closer to life. I envy this kind of life when I read it in the front. Let's read the back.

It makes me so jealous ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I also want a beautiful wife [cry][cry][cry][cry]