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After editing the article, I enjoyed reading it very much! Teachers with three-star ratings should read the first version, but no matter how much I like the novel, I still have to criticize it😋 ①Simulation At present, the heroine of Chapter 68 has experienced three simulations in total, and the third simulation is in progress. The first simulation of the heroine accumulated a lot of capital for herself, the second simulation gave the heroine a bigger map and enemies, and the third simulation of the heroine's "development period" is here! Got six new Major Arcana cards in a row! Every time I think the heroine is exposed, the direction is completely different from those routines hahaha. I have seen in many novels that if the heroine goes too smoothly, there will be a setback, but I didn't see too many setbacks in this novel. It just stole the Major Arcana😋 The third simulation also revealed a lot of foreshadowing and more plots. I never thought that the heroine would get along peacefully with Huai Gei. I am a "protagonist supremacist". In my opinion, characters other than the protagonist are actually dispensable. However, Huai Gei's image transformation is too out of the ordinary. Maybe it was not serious in the first place. It's just that I have a "strong" filter. At present, I don't think the heroine and Huai Gei's peaceful coexistence will have much bad influence. ②Character Coming, coming! Here comes the key point that is most likely to attract people and make people feel boring! I can't quite tell the heroine's character, but if I have to describe it in one word, I'd say - ordinary person. It's just a very ordinary kind. You will accompany your best friend in the simulation for the first time, and you will be taken care of from behind. There will be no such thing as "I don't owe you this simulation anymore" or "We are still strangers after the simulation". Sometimes when I see this, I really want to ask - do you really treat the simulation as the real world? The heroine makes the distinction very clearly, but she doesn't think about "this simulation will make up for it and you won't have to worry about it anymore when you go out to reality". But she will not be soft-hearted towards her enemies, even if there is no enemy in reality, if the facts in the simulation are really revealed, the heroine will really not survive a day () A very ordinary character without any special characteristics, it can also be said to be a personality. Nowadays, many protagonists have to be labeled as selfish, all villains, and bad actors. I don't mean to say it's not good to watch, but I feel tired after reading too many stories with the same formula. It would be great if the author could make the heroine more full and distinctive. ③Writing The author's writing style can only be said to be quite satisfactory in my opinion. There are some inconsistencies in the plot. In the first simulation, the heroine didn't realize that the flight bag Z&Y was made by a time traveler. Only after following her for the third time did she realize it and said it was "too obvious". When I saw this, I actually felt a little unable to complain. There is a lot of repetition in the description, "holding a scepter" I have already seen on four of the Major Arcanas. Changing a word or two to keep the same meaning is a bit new... But one of the teachers in the grading was right. The most common description of the heroine was "not talking." After searching for "not talking" in the full text, the most common description for "not talking" was three times in one chapter. One chapter is 2,000 words long, and three repeated descriptions appeared... ④Theme Very novel! In fact, I read this book when it was about 20 chapters ago. The beginning was also very boring at that time. I don't know if the author edited the beginning, but I was able to read it more than before. The author is also working very hard to revise the article based on the ratings. Try not to leave any loopholes while the number of chapters is small. These are the points I can think of at the moment. If you have any other questions, you can ask me. I will reply when I see them [blowing kiss] But everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. If you can't get it, you can just quit~

So cool! The strong ones are all women! Perfect! There are no insulting words for women!

I can vaguely see the shadow of cyberspace, but the problem is that the logic is not rigorous enough, the pace is medium, and there is no sense of urgency, so it makes people care more about logic issues. Just like the presidential palace, don't they have some precautions? If anyone like the heroine could get in, the consequences would be serious. Secondly, I felt that the heroine was not cautious enough. She just ran out of ideas in the simulation after knowing some information. She felt that she didn't do much homework and went straight to the Presidential Palace. It is conceivable that the people inside are so powerful, and they are definitely not defenseless at all. If the heroine wants to steal it, she relies on the invisibility potion, but this invisibility potion is not very difficult to buy. People with some influence may have it. Wouldn't the people in the Presidential Palace be defenseless? It is also obvious that the heroine is not capable of stealing. Overall, the golden finger is quite appropriate, but the feeling of excitement is still lacking, because the golden finger does not fully play its role and is a bit like a decoration. I wish I could put more effort into plundering talents. Emm, there are many positions that don't make sense. I feel like the heroine uses potions more often than talents. The pharmacy is the heroine's biggest golden finger. It's obviously unreasonable. Such an important and dangerous potion can be bought on any street. I thought how the heroine's crisis was solved [face covering] But it turned out that I just bought a potion on the street and drank it and everything was fine.

The rhythm is very comfortable, and it feels particularly suitable for watching in the sun and with a slight breeze. I just watched the simulation for the first time. The protagonist has a light feeling, there is no particularly heavy plot, and it is plain and a little warm.

OK, this book is also very awesome. The description of emotions is very delicate, and the heroine's character is also very optimistic. She looks very comfortable [Sending my heart]

The plot is heartwarming, the heroine is strong and hard-working, and it's beautiful to watch.

Five stars for the imaginative plot, but the writing is a bit lacking. I won't give it three stars because the book is too cool and I'm afraid it will get burnt. The author's explanation of the setting concept is not clear enough, and he basically relies on subsequent additions in the comments. Then some plot conflicts appear a bit deliberate, and it feels like the plot was suddenly inserted at a later stage. Other problems are not big, but the segmentation problem is really annoying. Although it is a small thing, overall I feel that it affects the reading experience the most. The author likes to use poetic narrative, and deliberately pursues small paragraphs where paragraphs are obviously not necessary. The most important thing in online writing is to tell a good story. When telling a story, it is deliberately divided into short paragraphs. Whether it is poetic and beautiful is one thing, but it does affect the continuity of the narrative. If it is suddenly divided into paragraphs in the middle of the sentence, it will feel like it is interrupted by the visual reading effect. It's a common problem among novice writers at the extreme level - authors who write a lot of top-notch cool articles generally don't have this problem, because they blindly pursue crude slaps in the face. ——Those who hate the best and like to write daily growth stories often deliberately use this poetic narrative style to pursue beauty in order to highlight the warmth and tranquility. However, if it is too much, it will appear to be a bit mid-range or affect the continuity of the story narrative. If you just started reading online articles, you wouldn't feel anything. But now that I've read more articles, I can't bear to see the flaws in the narrative method. I will continue to follow it. I feel that the imagination and the author's attitude towards the story, and the protagonist's pursuit of growth are in line with my taste. Hope it doesn't get messed up.

It's very exciting, every experience is different, the protagonist becomes stronger every time, and the life choices are different each time, it can be regarded as a sim. The relationship between the protagonist and the friends she knows makes me teary-eyed, and it is very well written [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's very beautiful, the setting is very good, and it feels like an upgrade flow. It's very refreshing to watch and it's instantly tied. There are also many outstanding female characters in the article. I look forward to the further growth of the heroine. The author will give you a lot of work and update it. It's not enough to read.

It's so good that I tied it in one breath. I will add this book to my daily update list☺️The heroine of this book is very tough and rational, and she won't flinch when it's time to take action. The simulator cheats are not restrictive like other novels. The cheats are generous and refreshing. I'm very satisfied with the heroine getting stronger all the time. Her relationship with other characters is also heart-warming. I like it and look forward to the update🥰

The early game was pretty dull, but it started to get interesting once I got the cards. Maybe the logic is a little inconsistent, but after all, it is an imaginary fantasy world, so aside from this point, it is still very interesting to watch. After all, the subject matter is very novel and very rare [Sending Hearts] Some foreshadowings were also revealed later. A pure body is a person who has no magical roots at all. Without the root, there is no talent, no attributes, and no bias. This kind of physique cannot be cultivated, but it is precisely because of emptiness that it can accommodate any power, and a pure body naturally has the power to suppress evil. There are thousands of good-looking books, but if they don't suit your taste, I'll change them [gift] I haven't read the revised story yet, and I've been following the original plot. Although it is not bad, after the author listened to the suggestions in the book review, the dialogue between the characters often has blank spaces, making it difficult to tell who is speaking, and there are also some problems with punctuation. So much so that it's a bit confusing. Apart from this point, the plot is still online. There are still pitfalls in the logic, and there are no inconsistencies... But I don't know why, maybe because of poor traffic or book reviews, the author has not updated it as of May 7th until today.

What's good is that it's different from previous life simulations. It's not just a few fluttering sentences. The heroine needs to complete it over and over again. The heroine is getting stronger and stronger. I am looking forward to the future development and hope to receive more surprises. I liked the first simulation the most, it was very realistic. Later heroines did get stronger and stronger, but I always felt like something was missing. It's actually exciting, but it doesn't have what attracted me in the first place. All I can say is, I hope this story has a perfect ending.

It looks great, good luck to the author! [Laugh]

In the past, the simulators I saw only read text. This one is a real experience of a lifetime. It feels very practical. It is the first time I see this. Every day is better than the day before.

Well written, Hui Hui simulates Hui Hui Butterfly Wings. The overall feeling is okay, but the combat power collapses very quickly. But what extraordinary novel can't collapse the combat power? Haha, a good story is the king. Great support from the author.

Super good-looking, Western Fantasy ➕Simulator, the heroine is decisive in killing, brave and resourceful, highly recommended [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I have only read a dozen chapters, but I think this novel is very interesting and has a very novel setting. I really like it! I think the writing style is average, the heroine's character is very ordinary, without any special feeling, and there are many loopholes.

I like the heroine and my best friend, they have a great relationship [blowing kiss][laughing][sending heart][love]

The front is just good-looking and super friendly to women. But Chapters 78-81 are simply wonderful. Especially the sentence "No one quits, and no one wants to quit." In just a dozen words, he expressed the sadness and helplessness of the invaded and the tragedy of "the cliff behind them". These dozen words were understood by the Chinese people in the past, and also by the Iranians who are now surrounded by war, because if you retreat, you will die. I think, without Jin Peiyan's simulator, this war would have been their end, right? But without the salvation of the God Card, perhaps the final outcome would be for the entire continent to be occupied by demons. Oh, and also, when Huai Gui assassinated Jin Peiyan before, did you think they would fight to the death? As a result, we can also become friends. Very nice.

Very beautiful, very touching... Very warm, very happy, with a touch of happiness that is warm and warm, like the bath water heated by the sun in the summer when I was a child, just right, like soaking in the sun. It's so beautiful. I can't help crying when I see this. It's so beautiful! Ww Ah, what I am talking about is the emotional description. I really like this kind of delicacy. I won't express anything else because I haven't seen much of it yet, but I really like the friendship between the heroine and the mermaid. Of course, I feel like they are family 😌

It's good-looking and delicious, and there are many female characters. Most of the characters who appear are women, ranging from the major leaders including the Demon God and Archangel Gabriel, to the escorts and soldiers, as well as the latest appearance of the new force Snake Mother and her followers. The protagonist becomes stronger again and again in the simulation, the map continues to expand, and more and more forces appear. I am the protagonist, and the protagonist has never experienced anything like being caught off guard or unable to do what he wants. As long as he keeps working hard, he will become stronger and stronger.

A particularly good-looking girl named Wuwen! ! The writing style is not particularly exaggerated, it creates a feeling of peaceful destruction in the simulated war, and the characters of everyone in the article are also very interesting! ! Looking forward to continued updates٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و

Not bad, cheers for the author

It's great. Don't let the plot and characters collapse. Let's keep our heroine strong like this. Boss, hurry up and update it. I've already kept up with the big army... It's not enough😫

The setting is interesting, the writing is average, and the writing style is unique. The plot is a bit messy and there are quite a few bugs. I don't know if it's foreshadowing or if it will be filled in later. Summary: It looks good, you can take a look✨🤓

I clicked in by chance and I didn't expect such a big surprise🥰 The writing is good, there is no messy nonsense, and the main plot is smooth and not laggy. It feels like it took me a long time to read it, but it turns out there are only a dozen chapters. Is there so many words in each chapter? Please give me more updates, a conscience newspaper. ( The subject matter is novel and the angle is great. The simulator is not monotonous like other ones that are limited to training to improve strength, but has plots and emotions. Anyway, it's a good read and I hope this book becomes popular🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

This is the first time I read a book of this type. It is very novel. The heroine lives with her good friends, and there is a kind of light happiness. I like it very much. It is the first time I read a book and I feel this kind of light ordinary and unusual happiness [Like]

Very good😋, just such an ordinary life, although I have only read the fourth chapter🤫 Because it's a new book (does 64 chapters count as a new book? There is no rating yet🥴So please rate🤫🥴

Come on! Just write according to your own wishes. Don't make random changes when you see bad reviews. If there are really mistakes, correct them. You must have your own judgment and feel, and don't be too tired.

Very good, very good looking, hope to keep it up. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]