Hogwarts, Starting from the Goblet of Fire to Create the Ley Line

So far, there's nothing wrong with it, and the writing is pretty good, but it's just the main character's name, and sometimes it always becomes Jack.

There is something new, the protagonist is not childish, they don't fall in love in elementary school, and the beginning is great There are a lot of concepts in the back, the combat power is a bit stacked, and the main line is too slow. Let's take a look at something new.

It's really well written. Plot conflict. The protagonist's performance is powerful, and he looks like a great magician at first glance.

Rhythm: 8 points, tight rhythm and smooth narrative. Plot: 9 points. The protagonist's goal is always to promote the development of the Magic Network. The series of variables caused in this process are written wonderfully by the author. Character: 8 points, no obvious OOC, the character of the protagonist is also very distinct, a chaotic neutral version of Fang Yuan, invincible but not omnipotent. Setting: 8 points, a mess of sewing, but the effect is pretty good. Overall: 8 points, I love watching it, the cats are cute.

Don't say anything, even if the AI ​​article is understandable, it deserves recognition

Magic cards are not necessarily Sakura cards. They can also be Magic cards. It is better to say that Magic cards are a more universal form. The setting of deep dreamland is very interesting

Good looking, novel angle, unconventional

Very creative and beautiful

It's well written, but the title of the book should be changed.

Awesome, but will you return to Asia to develop in the future?

There may not be so many cliche plots, but the later duel cards are really good.

It was the first time I saw the prophecy of Grindelwald. In the process of researching new things, the protagonist caused various world-destroying disasters, the coming of the apocalypse, and the Cthulhu incident. In comparison, Grindelwald and Voldemort are just small fights.

Holy shit, I actually found a book about the main character of Ravenclaw that was not written by AI. I'll give it five stars first and take a look. The original Dumbledore was a candy lover and liked all kinds of weird sweets. But he doesn't have a sweet tooth, he doesn't have a sweet tooth, he doesn't have a sweet tooth! Can the fanfic stop writing about Dumbledore adding five sugar cubes to his cup? Isn't it funny to randomly change the setting of the original work? There are even a bunch of people in the comment section who have never read the original work making bad jokes. The setting of the magic card feels a little inconsistent, but it is not unacceptable. Magic Network is really bullshit. Egypt in the back is completely ruined and in a mess.

I think it's okay, but I'm a little confused about it, so it's okay. I just finished catching up from 0 and saw the reminder.

Have you finally opened a new book? It's still a magic-first style book. It's a good read and I recommend it.

It's so exciting, so inspiring

Look at the situation behind

The scientific research protagonist is pretty good too

Good looking, watch more if you like

Very good, there are new ideas, keep up the good work

It's okay, there's something new

Masterpiece Very eye-catching

Great hp fanfic

Watch to pass the time. You can write a book quickly when you have nothing to do. When you have something done, you can write it quickly.

The word "" is used a lot at the end of the sentence.

Very nice, has my own ideas

It's not quite suitable for my type. I don't understand anything about the Magic Network.

Very good, why is the rating so low?

The plot is okay, but I feel like I shouldn't finish this book.

Wow, I haven't had this sense of adventure for a long time.