Hogwarts: Creating the Magicnet, Starting with the Goblet of Fire

So far, there's nothing wrong with it, and the writing is pretty good, but it's just the main character's name, and sometimes it always becomes Jack.

There is something new, the protagonist is not childish, they don't fall in love in elementary school, and the beginning is great There are a lot of concepts in the back, the combat power is a bit stacked, and the main line is too slow. Let's take a look at something new.

It's really well written. Plot conflict. The protagonist's performance is powerful, and he looks like a great magician at first glance.

Rhythm: 8 points, tight rhythm and smooth narrative. Plot: 9 points. The protagonist's goal is always to promote the development of the Magic Network. The series of variables caused in this process are written wonderfully by the author. Character: 8 points, no obvious OOC, the character of the protagonist is also very distinct, a chaotic neutral version of Fang Yuan, invincible but not omnipotent. Setting: 8 points, a mess of sewing, but the effect is pretty good. Overall: 8 points, I love watching it, the cats are cute.

Magic cards are not necessarily Sakura cards. They can also be Magic cards. It is better to say that Magic cards are a more universal form. The setting of deep dreamland is very interesting

Don't say anything, even if the AI ​​article is understandable, it deserves recognition

Good looking, novel angle, unconventional

Holy shit, I actually found a book about the main character of Ravenclaw that was not written by AI. I'll give it five stars first and take a look. The original Dumbledore was a candy lover and liked all kinds of weird sweets. But he doesn't have a sweet tooth, he doesn't have a sweet tooth, he doesn't have a sweet tooth! Can the fanfic stop writing about Dumbledore adding five sugar cubes to his cup? Isn't it funny to randomly change the setting of the original work? There are even a bunch of people in the comment section who have never read the original work making bad jokes. The setting of the magic card feels a little inconsistent, but it is not unacceptable. Magic Network is really bullshit. Egypt in the back is completely ruined and in a mess.

It was the first time I saw the prophecy of Grindelwald. In the process of researching new things, the protagonist caused various world-destroying disasters, the coming of the apocalypse, and the Cthulhu incident. In comparison, Grindelwald and Voldemort are just small fights.

Very creative and beautiful