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Are There Any Lobotomy Companies That Have Traveled to Other Anime Worlds?
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Are There Any People with Moon Counting Abilities in Other Worlds?
I want to read a book similar to "The Moon Calculation Star Iron, Angela's New Life".
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Ah Ah, Is There Any Book About the Moon Plan? It's Best to Travel to Other Worlds.
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Are There Any Yueji Fans? Many Books on the Bookshelf Have Not Been Updated...
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It's okay, overall it's relatively easy (can't it be easy to have the power of the leader), but the power of the leader is not shown much later, and it focuses more on the emotional aspect. The disadvantage is that the author pays too much attention to emotion, and there is a lack of logic in order to promote the plot. Anyway, I can't imagine Galion falling flat on the ground. There are also a lot of worries in Wuhun Palace despite being basically invincible. It's okay to just treat it as daily sweet water.
It's pretty good, but I suggest you go if you want to see the tuner's transcendent emergence. The tuner here can only be said to be a time traveler with more consciousness, and does not have the super-stress-resistant Riddler of Galion and the attitude of overcoming all things.
There are certain flaws, especially regarding the majesty and indifference of the leader himself. It can be said that he has the appearance of a lock but no inner traveler. The mystery that belongs to the leader has also been replaced by sensibility. After all, the image of the leader itself contains mystery, arrogance, elegance, wisdom, etc. These authors did not reflect it well (but the influence of Qiu Shi's personality cannot be ignored), and a certain logic was lost due to excessive emphasis on emotion. However, considering that the author's current description of the plot is vivid and has excellent points, it is recommended that readers should not directly substitute the protagonist into the original lock, but the time traveler with the same name has the power of the leader, so that the protagonist Qiu Shi's character will not be affected by the tear caused by the inconsistency with the original lock's image, because at least in my opinion, they are really not the same person (the proportion of Qiu Shi's character is still too large) However, it is understandable that the author chose this subject and made certain modifications. If it were based on the character of the original work, it is estimated that Suo would not take the initiative to contact the characters in the story (except when necessary), and the plot of the story would be difficult to develop. Most of them just watch everything in the world with a fun-loving mentality, and the author's writing of the story itself is worthy of praise, so I leave 4 stars
If you are here, the author, there is a surprise in Chapter 25. The Ruined Library seems to be a stand-alone game.
OMG tuner 😭😭😭😭😭
Douluo Dalu + Moon Plan, I've wanted to watch it for a long time
Teacher, I find that reading the two books you wrote makes me very comfortable.
I like it, I hope the author can keep making more updates
After reading it overall, I feel a slight sense of stability. The writing is really good, at least in my opinion. Come on, author, don't stop updating (›´ω`‹)
For me, there are only two words: Haokang
I look forward to continuing writing. There are too few books of this type.
The plot is very exciting and fits the monthly setting very well.
I really like Teacher's book [crazy]. Except for the slow pace when I first arrived at Wuhun Palace in the early stage, it's really exciting. Come on, Teacher! Please give me more updates [Admiration]
Come on, great author
Hello, I like lock mom
Here comes five stars. Come on author
Good looking, no doubt
That's right, that's the right way to write it
The tuner of the world is planning to retire at the moment [laughing evilly]
I just read this book in the morning and saw it in the afternoon. It's very interesting [like it]
The pace is a bit slow in the early stages, but overall it's great
It looks great, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. I just hope that I won't be banned or have my updates interrupted (wiping away tears) Boss, come on! Boss, I support your reputation! !
It's nice to watch, I really like watching this kind of thing*^o^*
It looks good, no need to say anything!