Lord on the Mist

It's pretty good. I think a lot of people commented that the protagonist is a bit like a virgin! Later on, I was very harsh towards the newcomers. It was quite real at the beginning. I was unfamiliar with the place. Later, it was normal for me to have conflicting reactions due to upgrading my territory. After all, I did make a mistake. Maybe many people just like to start from scratch!

The broom star has a way of harming his teammates. As long as a new person comes, the new person must ridicule the protagonist, the protagonist must beat him up and let him go, and the new person must have resentment in his eyes [awkward laugh]

It's obvious that this novel is a good book after just one glance, and it's at the top level on Tomato When I read Chapter 32, the poisonous point appeared. Carl did not stand up for the protagonist, but he stood up for himself. This description is to express that the protagonist's thoughts and cognitions are relatively naive. After all, Carl is described so vividly and vividly, and the author cannot have the same cognition as the protagonist. Just describing it like this... Will really make readers dislike the protagonist. On online writing platforms, if you describe the protagonist in such an unflattering or even annoying way, readers will give negative reviews. Don't expect readers to have the mood and vision to appreciate your writing and ideas even if they hate the protagonist. It's like going to a restaurant to eat. Customers won't forgive you for using bad ingredients just because your cooking skills are good. For example, if you use lymph meat for a braised pork dish, no matter how good your cooking skills are, who will like it? If you want to show your writing ideas, you must write about the protagonist's positive outlook, strong ability, high charm, etc. The descriptions used to portray human nature can be used for supporting characters or passers-by.

I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I am halfway through it. I am a little reluctant to read it. It is a very good misty novel. It is not too riddle-like and confusing to read, and it is not too novice and has no content. This one is just right in the middle. The protagonist behaves like I prefer, upright and lawful, but he is not weak and can be bullied, and has his own ideas and methods. It's the kind of person who has a lot of brains, but it's not fat enough yet. I didn't think it was enough when I looked at the word count before, but I'm really short of books and there's not much I want to read. I saw a comment about Holy Mother? I'm interested. Generally speaking, in some novels about the Virgin Mary with dark personalities, I think the protagonist is just a normal person, with a relatively charismatic personality. It's just that it's too early to watch. It'll probably be finished in a day or two, so some people have to wait [ Eat Melon ]

It's pretty good. I saw some people talking about The Holy Mother, but now that I've followed the last chapter, there's nothing wrong with it. The protagonist is a normal person with a conscience, and he grows up step by step. I will continue to read it if it doesn't break down.

Who knows what it feels like to see a six-point novel open and it turns out to be a pre-production of a masterpiece. The whole text is non-toxic, there are no logical loopholes, and the plot is self-explanatory. It feels a bit like a starting point fantasy novel. The author's writing is very good.

First of all, I think the character design of this book is above the standard level. The author is also very diligent in updating🥰This is also the main reason for giving four stars But many of the plot designs are really bad, whether it's Old Hans or the current Aiden. It doesn't mean that you can't write this kind of "harlequin", but the author's plot portrayal is a bit poor. In contrast, the plot design of The Noble Young Master is just right. There is too much plot, which makes me feel uncomfortable, but I like the setting of the author's misty world very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard [blowing kiss]. Later, I will pay attention to the proportion of the plot of these villains. It is not just the current point. 4.17 I can accept the author cheating the protagonist to get XX props in advance to make a comeback, similar to finding an underground altar before upgrading for the second time. I couldn't stand it anymore and was exhausted fighting the boss. I suddenly took out an item and resurrected the boss with full health. Then I explained how I had collected it before and what it meant.

Small conflicts follow big conflicts. The rhythm is very tight and firmly grasps the attention. The settings and combat power are handled well. It feels a bit like a game. I just can't move, my Oriental dialect is a little weird And have you forgotten your inspirational skills? ! [What]

The front part is very surprising to me, mainly the settings, it is really imaginative and novel. But there are also some shortcomings and some poisonous points, mainly when upgrading the territory. But I can understand the author, after all, it looks "very real". In the early stage of the monster invasion, there was internal fighting, and then it turned to "unity" in the middle and late stages. I understand the author that you want to use this conflict to better express the protagonist's character, so that the protagonist can undergo a transformation, and then just integrate the camp personnel, kill a nasty ghost, and then the camp will completely belong to the protagonist. I know you want to write like this. But just because it is "too real", some parts are not grasped well, so it looks a bit poisonous. In fact, I feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid, but in fact, he behaves like a normal person. Anyway, it feels neither contradictory nor contradictory [face covering] I have read 100,000 words so far, and my imagination is still very attractive to me. I will continue to read it. Still worth seeing Saw this sentence: Before I knew it was time for me to give it five stars, I was bullied among the lower-class refugees. Even my original name, "Cat", was ridiculed as a little cat. Until he broke the limit of agility, broke the necks of those who mocked with his own hands, and changed his name to Lion..." The author is too delicate [cover face][cover face][cover face] I have seen the latest chapter (285) so far, and I haven't found any major poisonous points. The only two poisonous points are that in the first two defensive battles, each time during the third wave of attacks, at the critical moment of life and death, I was still flirting, humoring, and not watching the scene. . . The rest is pretty good, it looks like it has at least an 8.8+ Score (it's just not cool enough, otherwise it could be 9+) (It's not exciting enough. Sometimes it's a bit frustrating to watch. For example, around chapter 260, both at level 2, there were a few very powerful people fighting pig's feet. Although they all won in the end, and it wasn't revenge afterwards, but victory on the spot, the pig's feet were very difficult to fight, and they looked a bit blue and thin, which was not satisfying enough)

The writing is very good, but it is not considered to be the best work among the Lord-type texts I have read. Some people say that the protagonist is more like a virgin, but I don't think so. What the protagonist shows is completely human reason. In the face of the unknown and confusion, one person cannot go far alone, so the protagonist's approach is very reasonable. And the protagonist doesn't sympathize with people randomly. And the subject matter is very novel, so you can read it with confidence. I hope there won't be too many harems, the upper limit is three. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and not end it. [Punch out][Top post]

There is no perfect novel. No matter how good the novel is, some people will criticize it. Even Jun Zheng Ping has been criticized. Come on. Reasons for five stars: 1. The setting is novel among survival novels. Second, the male protagonist is the Virgin? Doesn't one have to be extremely egoistic to be considered not to be a Holy Mother? The male protagonist is a clearly differentiated person, a growing person. And the Holy Mother is already a gag in the book. (The protagonist was oppressed in the early stage, which is very reasonable. (If you can refute me for any unreasonable points, I apologize.) The protagonist resists? Under the conditions of not killing each other according to the rules, not knowing the details of others, and living in an unstable environment, how can you resist? If the resistance is successful, does it mean that you will be criticized again? Third, as a free novel, the quality is really good. (If you don't read many novels, you may never read them again) Fourth, there is currently no female protagonist and no clear emotional drama. Fifth, respond to the question of giving a woman to the male protagonist. A literal send-off, no emotional development, no harem (so far) except for that physical contact that was a bit naughty. 6. When I read a novel and see signs of poison or poison, I will be patient and read on. If it is poisonous, I will spray it directly.

I recently found a book that is very clever and refreshing. There are so many articles and fifty chapters that I wish I could become a demigod. The protagonist of this book is still growing up. If you slow down, you can prolong the journey!

This book is really beautiful. It's very similar to the one from Lazy Bird next door. (I personally like lazy birds). This book by the author is really good. Kind of like the game survival. Except when fighting the rat boss. There are too many emotional descriptions and it's a bit awkward to watch, but the rest is very good. Of course, we can understand this plot, ordinary people are not born with this. Change takes place through experience.

Why don't you ask about the new member's talent? Didn't Bernie ask about the protagonist's talent when he first arrived? Hans also has talent, why don't you ask the newcomer?

This book has no shortcomings at all. The only shortcoming is that it is written in this fast food era. Perfect, the supporting characters are all vivid. The plot is fast-paced and all the villains are human beings. Pig's feet can stick to their true heart and bottom line in the future, and they are truly strong. The protagonists and supporting characters all have growth trajectories, and their personalities are not the same from beginning to end. It's a pity that in this impetuous era, few people can calm down and really read a book.

I read Chapter 83 in the afternoon. In this sea of ​​tomatoes where Xiaobai is just looking for fun, it is really a masterpiece. The reason why I left a message is because the results and scores are not worthy of such content. At least in my opinion, in terms of writing ability, plot arrangement, and characterization, it is better than most works, but it has not set foot on the path of having its own traffic and a wide audience.

It's okay, but there are a lot of pitfalls. Talent? Almost no one mentioned it. Contribution points are exchanged for things and production? Basically eliminated. Obtain career information? Related operations are required. So how did this raven archer obtain this profession? Does the archer raise crows? It feels more like a druid. Maybe the magic system was referenced later. Wait, it feels like many settings are one-time designs that can be thrown away after use. The ways to obtain high-level professions are also confusing. Overall, I heard it was novel and the book was pretty good.

It's actually pretty good. It's very interesting and the logic is online. Some people say that the supporting characters are always dissing, but what can you do with just those few people in Fighting Giant Rats? If you really like to read enjoyable stories, just change it to another one. At least the logic of this book makes sense.

It's a high-end product, and it's really well written. It's both humane and not lacking in iron-bloodedness. Although it's a bit holy, it's very popular. I think it's okay. And not only the holy mother, but also the iron-blooded one dares to fight and fight hard. I think it's great! ! ! ! Update soon!

It's really good. The setting is novel, the pace is moderate, and it doesn't count as poisonous. This is a growth-oriented protagonist. You can't just travel through time and you are still an ordinary person in front of you. If you travel back through time, everything will be forgotten. What's wrong? When you traveled back in time, there was an old grandfather, or your body was taken away. Everyone has a process of growing up, and this can't be considered poisonous, right?

The writing is very good and creative. It feels a bit like the book "Lords of the Heavens" from the starting point. It is very beautiful and the writing style and creativity are good. The protagonist is not too invincible or brainless. It is very enjoyable to read. Good luck to the author.

So far it's pretty good. The plot can give people a sense of expectation. There are no logical loopholes or low-level mistakes where the protagonist has invincible combat power. The character of the protagonist is also wrong. He is not a brainless virgin, nor is he too extreme. It is in line with the public's expectations.

The setting is like a stronghold to fight monsters and survive, which feels very good. It's getting worse and worse. There's a quarrel between gangsters at the end. I'm here to see the plot and the struggle to survive, not to see who wins in the quarrel.

Five-star reviews for the first 50 chapters. There are obvious traces of AI editing on the writing. In terms of imagination, it is similar to the starting point of Lazy Bird, but it is obviously much better. The plot reflects the growth of the protagonist. At the same time, not a single character is okay.

I think it's pretty good. Except for the early stage, which is a little awkward, it gets a lot better later on. I don't know if I'm used to this style. I don't understand why it's only six points. The plot is quite interesting. It's a good Western fantasy novel. I think the flaws are not concealed. I think a score of about 8.8 Is more appropriate.

Physique represents the body's ability to recover from injuries, its ability to resist and heal from disease, its efficiency in physical recovery, and its ability to resist and adapt to harsh environments. Strength represents bone density, muscle density, tendon strength and explosiveness. Agility represents the upper limit of nerve reflex arc, body balance and coordination, shot and step frequency, such as the number of steps and the number of attacks that can be effectively run with both feet in one second. Strength plays the role of the burst of recoil, not the frequency. Spirit represents mental stress resistance, abnormal state resistance and adaptability. On the magic side, spellcasting ability and strength must be added. Perception represents the insight into abnormal environments, the ability to mislead judgment in communication, and the ability to ambush and outflank the enemy and provide early warning. Charisma represents whether words and deeds can win people's trust, inspiration, leadership and so on.

Beautiful and wonderful [sending heart] I personally like Western fantasy or Grammar novels, which can witness the step-by-step process of a young man growing from an ordinary person to a leader with charisma. Author, please write

The writing is quite to my liking. The protagonist is really good at keeping the bottom line. Although some people say that the protagonist is so bad, I can only say that I have read too many cool articles. Who will not make mistakes? The protagonist is not an omniscient and omnipotent god. It is really good to do this in this cruel world. At least I think the protagonist is really a very kind person. I recommend it personally.

A very good novel, the pace is well controlled. I would like to make a small suggestion, that is, I feel that the setting of the later part is a bit swallowed up by the previous part. What about everyone's talents? As a camp director, shouldn't I know more about it? There are also contribution rankings, weekly settlements, etc. If there are too many people in the post and it is inconvenient to write for everyone, then you can write about the system changes, but you should still inform them to make the post and post more reasonable.

Come on, you will get better and better. But you have to remember that you must ensure the quality and don't offend the official. Many novels have been blocked, so be careful when writing. And there is. Keep updated