Elf: I Asked You to Be a Magic Pill, and You Went to Flirt with Zhulan?

First of all, it is not the urban + college entrance examination + qualifications + aristocratic family defense routine. Secondly, the story is interesting

It's the first time I've seen Pokémon stories that are both funny, curious, and romantic. It's quite novel, but there are too many romance parts, which makes the Pokémon scenes feel a bit lacking. I'd rather have a slower emotional pace, and I hope there are more Pokémon scenes. After all, this is the romance part of Pokémon stories. It's embellished, and the main character's sexual span is too big. From the fun-loving person in the early stage, he has become a passionate man, which is a bit unacceptable. But after all, it is the author's new book. I still hope that this book will prosper [please update] (if the author writes love stories, he will definitely be popular, and the emotions are very delicate) romance, romance

A very funny Pokémon novel. It's a pity that it's a new book, but it's definitely a good book with potential. Funny Pokémon novels should be full of joy like this. The emotional line of multiple heroines is Sirona in the current chapter, which can be regarded as an interesting pair of happy enemies. Love should be like this sometimes, it doesn't need to be touching. Looking forward to the Shura Field in the future [laughing evilly]. As a follow-up, Sirona's confession in Chapter 79 is simply a masterpiece. I can only say it is wonderful. Beautiful, love watching. It's a pity that such a good new book only has a score of 6.9. I have to push. But you can't let a good book with potential get just this point. However, when I was reading the book, it was written about multiple women, but the author changed it back to a single woman. Anyway, it looks good, no need to say more.

It's so good, but the description of the protagonist's fighting talent feels a bit awkward, but the writing of the heroine, whether it's daily life, plot or emotions, is very good. It's considered to be the best among Pokémon fanfics. I saw that the author has updated it to more than 100 chapters and describes the protagonist's journey through the Pokémon world. However, the protagonist is in a state of amnesia. He always thought that the locals established bonds and integrated into the world. Unlike most other fanfics, which are cold and incongruous with those who travel through time. The uncomfortable thing at first glance may be that the protagonist feels a little crotch-stretching. The crotch-stretching here is not something else. I just feel that the protagonist does not need to write about how awesome and powerful the victory is like other authors. It is just that the author's description of the battle is not so exciting. Most of them are abstract. Seeing too much victory will be boring, but exciting battles are sometimes more popular. However, the author's writing is really good, and the emotional description of the heroine Baicai is also very exciting. Come on,

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Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Confucius and Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Songzu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who can't read it without being amazed? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the rhetoric is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only find a moment of peace. Otherwise! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be held up to the sky again and again, so that the whole world will know it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? --Not enough! Across the rivers and lakes, on the rivers and lakes, is this book enjoyable? --Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

The characters are good and the plot is not boring. There are many love scenes in the mid-term

You write well! The author writes like this, although, but, because, those seven years of relationship really make people burst into tears! This is love, infinite love [crying][crying][crying] A very good author. Although it is a new book, I see that there are many people reading it. Come on, please update more. Good job. Be energetic. Don't lose your share. Seize the opportunity. When the number of words increases, the content expansion score will reach nine. As long as there are no major changes, according to the current writing method and continuous updates, I feel that it will basically get a score of nine or so.

I really found a treasure. The author is Hexagon Warrior. His daily writing is very warm and heart-warming. The character of the protagonist is not bad, the battle is not bad, and the main plot is okay. He has dug some holes, such as the black alpaca. There is no boring and overly dark conspiracy theory (there is a book about licking the blood of Thunder God to enhance the electric energy for me to read) Exhausted, what is the difference between the bloodline of cultivating immortals), and there are no candy class levels. The levels in the game are adopted, but it does not affect the viewing, it is just intuitive. There is also a single female protagonist Zhulan (running in both directions), and finally it is in line with the animation and slightly cleverly combined with the atmosphere of the game. The summary is that it has discarded my key points and hit all the points that I like. Full marks. The author should not be a eunuch. Mainly after reading it for so long, I realized there were no comments. I wanted to contribute to the author because I was afraid the author would die [rolls eyes]

The relationship with Pokémon is really well written, a light and funny travel article. It's a little different from other Pokémon articles, but it's a good article if you read it patiently!

The protagonist is like a magic pill coming into the world, performing various tricks, such as sweeping through low-level elf gyms with the help of high-level elf and his identity as a newcomer. Or use your own "extremely civilized" way to destroy ancient cultural relics and rescue Gengar. However, from his series of performances, it is not difficult to find that he is an extremely gentle person. Whether it is towards the Pokémon he is responsible for feeding at the doctor's house, Miss Cabbage, or the doctor, his actions always show a delicate and gentle side. Of course don't forget that he really is a magic pill In those plots that make you laugh, you can feel more of the warmth between people and between people and Pokémon. This feeling reminds me of Teacher Lu's elf fanfic (What's more interesting than funny fish is the warmth hidden inside) So yes, this is what I want to see. I know you can see it. Why don't you update it quickly? One page a day. Who can read it?

It's a good book, needless to say, it's not like those old-fashioned Pokémon books. The author has written a protagonist with his own style and charm, stay tuned and look forward to the plot (ps: I found a small amount of plot in a lot of memes, hehe)

It's so interesting to write. It's completely different from those cookie-cutter homogeneous novels. It has the right amount of darkness while retaining the innocence that Pokémon should have. The plot design is not too rigid and can be self-explanatory. The main reason is that the author is too addicted to the Internet and writes nothing but jokes.

The content of the book is well written, but the setting of the synthetic beasts is still a bit too uncomfortable. After all, I think the Pokémon world is also a kind of utopia. Although it is not perfect, it should not be something that makes people crazy. I hope the plot of the synthetic beasts will be over soon. Also, the author writes very well. Come on, five stars.

The writing is okay, and the protagonist's personality is very consistent, unlike the editor's ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

It's very beautiful. The author has his own style. Whether it's A Xiang's growth or the relationship between him and Zhulan, they are all written so well! I hope there won't be any interruptions in the future and I can write a million words. If possible, the author can learn from Teacher Lu's book and combine animation, special chapters and games. [Please update]

To be honest, I haven't seen such good fairy tales in a long time. It is basically the world of Pokémon but incorporates modern elements, but the presentation is not out of the ordinary. The character of the protagonist looks carefree and funny, but in fact the emotions are very delicate. And each Pokémon of the protagonist has its own role. The emotional aspect is also very well written. It is not mindless from the beginning. From the stranger at the beginning to now, he gradually likes it, which makes people feel comfortable to watch. Praise. Finally, I rarely write reviews for people. The reason for writing this review is that I hope that I can continue to read this book in the future. Of course, I also hope that the author will read more soon hahahaha.

This is a rare and good book, and it is unique among Pokémon books. I have only read two such books so far, and this is the second one. It makes people feel like they are really communicating with a living Zhulan. It is not a mindless novel, but a flesh-and-blood, real Zhulan and the protagonist. It is much better than the characters in the original Pokémon plot.

It's a pretty good Pokémon novel. The protagonist's sexy moves and a lot of jokes in the article are quite funny. The author also writes the main plot and the emotional line with Zhulan quite well. It's really awesome to make Zhulan fall in love with the protagonist in 90 days. Now that I have read Chapter 194, I can clearly feel that the protagonist has grown a lot in combat. Overall, I highly recommend reading this book, but the only drawback is that the author updates it too slowly [laughter].

A good book. It's rare that the main character is a special chapter. As long as the writing at the end is not too bad, it's worth reading.

The writing is quite abstract, and the protagonist gradually improves. It's interesting.

It looks very smooth, it's a very good article.

A good book, if you like comedy and ghosts, you can read it. The pace is slow and there is no specific format, level, skills, etc. It is very novel. But I have a question. I went to school at the age of 10 and graduated at the age of 15. Suppose I graduated at the age of 15 and returned to the present 7 years ago. Even if I think that I would be the same age if I traveled to the past, Zhulan would be breaking the law, right? [Laughing]

It's really beautiful. Except for being a little short, there's nothing wrong with it.

The author's narrative skills are very good, the story frame is complete, the foreshadowing is clever, and the plot is advanced layer by layer. The emotional portrayal is real and moving. Both the plot conflicts and the detailed descriptions are very good. I still have an aftertaste after reading it. It is a novel that I would like to read again. I sincerely recommend it.

Gold and silver, good memories. Come on author

The writing is good. Laoden is very Pokémon-like. This book has the potential to become a hit.

Is this one really okay? That is to say, it is quite novel. Also, in the introduction, when does the Silver Conference start? The author's description is very short, and the strength of the protagonist has not changed in chapter 40, right? It was at this level before Chapter 40. It can be slow to warm up, but it is a bit slow, but it is quite interesting to watch it on a daily basis [face covering] Well, I've been reading for a long time. Although it's weird to post it every morning, but, should I say it, pure love comes first [please update]. At that time, it happened to be paired with the song "The Two of Us" [face covering] "Too long, too long...", Which is very good. Well, I hope the author will get stronger and stronger. I am preparing for the high school entrance examination. I will take care of myself first. Come on, author.

The characters are vividly written, and it's rare to find a novel that doesn't write the protagonist as Jiahao

It looks good, and I feel very comfortable watching it so far₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪