Chaebol Qingmei Is Chasing After Her? Now I Don't Like You

It's okay, but the author doesn't pay attention to lightning protection, such as writing the kind of heroine in ancient times who was caught and wanted to molest, and then came to save her before she succeeded.

[Like][Like][Smile] It's okay, but the main character's phone is always out of battery. . .

After reading this, overall, I think the choice of the male protagonist: (Selected) The arrogant lady's emotional line will be more difficult to walk. The protagonist has confessed and been rejected. No matter what the reason, the result will not change. The routine is probably "the male protagonist keeps getting better and the other female protagonist's relationship development makes her jealous". The difference in status + rejection, this line is difficult to walk, and she has to answer "Do you like the previous one or the current one?"; Asano, the loser (not worth choosing), I don't understand the feelings of the loser, but the male protagonist has seen famous scenes in person, and then fell in love with the male protagonist without any development. In my opinion, she is a god, as if the protagonist owes her, this line must first answer a question: "Why do you like it? And if you liked it before, then what does it mean to fall in love with someone else at the beginning?" At present, I think Xia Chuankui (the one chosen above) has the purest emotions and is the most suitable for the male protagonist. She has life-saving grace + similar experience + Bai Yueguang. I have nothing against this routine, because we all know that this will happen naturally, and she coincides with the time when the male protagonist awakens to his past life. In a sense, this is the first emotional line of the male protagonist, but every author will not focus on describing it in the middle and later stages.

The writing is quite interesting, it is a common routine, but the highlight is that the author's writing style is very good, and he can express the characters and personalities. The relationship between the protagonist and his childhood sweetheart is very interesting (and the cat) The shortcoming is that there are too many gods (those who look down on the protagonist) in it. Can the author just clean up and deal with these gods [laughter] I can't do it anymore, why are there so many mindless plots and gods in ancient classics [staring] [smiling]

Let me make a comment. As a person who has been involved in light novels and comprehensive comics for many years, this book must have some poison. Basically, there is a small poison in about 10 chapters, which is normal. What does it feel like to me? If he created a cool novel, he didn't get it. Click on it, you know, if you write a normal novel with the theme of RB, he is not well portrayed, the characters are not eye-catching, and sometimes they are even too annoyed, but considering that it is a tomato, the overall evaluation is about 6.8 To 7.3, And it is edible.

The writing is not bad. The plot, world view and characters are written like a Hong Kong and Taiwan idol drama combined with a Japanese light novel. More dialogues are used to fill the plot. The passages of the Hong Kong and Taiwan idol dramas make some plots more classic. At the same time, because there are copied passages from the official document, this article will most likely write about entertainment. The underworld princess in the introduction has not yet appeared (it can't really be that little girl who is 80 years old, right?) The author has quite good control over some small details of the environment, and he really puts his heart into many small ingenuities. Finally, there are some things in this article that may make people who don't often watch Niqing very disgusted. These settings are very common in Niqing, but they are difficult for domestic readers to accept. For example, the loser in the introduction is actually a loser who competed with other girls for other men and failed. The little cutie who is redeemed is actually her father who passed away early, xd+ sold her mother, she is broken and still in her 80s, the traditional Japanese light pace is slow and you reveal the bad situation in her family in advance, readers can basically accept it, but the reading environment of Yang Persimmon is a bit impatient, and quite a few people will think this is highly toxic, because after the author revealed this situation for so many chapters, this little cutie has not yet been fully redeemed. If you can accept these typical Japanese minor problems, you can still read this article.

Good. . . . Why do comments have to be 5 words long before they can be posted? [Anger]

It's well written, and I quite like the character of the protagonist.

I think it looks pretty

I feel very good. The author's writing style is also very good. I also want to ask how many female protagonists there are in @. [What]