Mint Lemon Tea

It's very sweet. I haven't finished it yet. It's a bit boring in the early stages, but it becomes very interesting in the middle stage. When writing about the male protagonist's tone of voice, I often describe the male protagonist's calm speech as if the weather was nice today and he had dinner this morning. Too many expressions of this description can seem a bit boring. In different scenes, the male protagonist's words are all very calm expressions and descriptions. I think the tone can be appropriately changed. Different scenes have different moods. There are also many repetitive descriptions and expressions in other places, and I hope to improve them in the future. There are just too many girls who like the male protagonist, and they all have vicious images. There is a chapter in the previous chapter where two girls are verbally competing for the male protagonist, and the female protagonist is also present. Personally, I feel that there is a bit of female rivalry. I don't like this plot to avoid lightning, and the male protagonist is shaped to love the female protagonist more. There are really too many adjectives. One-third of the description in one chapter is filled with adjectives.

The author's writing style is really great! The writing is also very delicate. The environment, language, and psychological description in the article really make people feel that the male and female protagonists have deep thoughts, rather than just talking about love. Some of the sentences are rich in the feeling of a miracle doctor and philosophy. It is really well written!

The classical novel about world affairs that has been on the bookshelf for a long time is very interesting. I always felt that the narrative was too slow to read. Now I have experienced some trivial things in life and opened it again, and I can understand the worldly feelings and life wisdom hidden in the stories of parents.

The tide enters the day (Jiang tide & Chi day) This romance novel written by the author is really good, the writing style is very good, vivid and detailed, it is a sweet campus story, the male and female protagonists go in both directions, the two have a talk, the plot is not procrastinating, it is very interesting, anyway, the author writes very awesome Klass, it is very enjoyable to read 😳😳 I hope the author will update more😆

Well, I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very delicate and very good. The overall book carries the emotional line very well. I really like reading this sweet little article! (*^▽^*) (=^▽^=)!

This is different from the many romance novels I have read, and is very common on campus. , But this is the first time I have seen such reality. , Although some plots are a bit coincidental. But the author's writing style is really hard to fault. Although it is not very luxurious, the writing is very smooth and excellent.

To be honest, I never thought that liking someone could be described like this. When Jiang tide and Chi Zhou didn't realize that they liked each other, the author's description was very detailed. It didn't feel like a description. He integrated himself into the character and felt it for himself. I can't describe it. Moreover, the author's writing style is better than I expected. I don't understand why it only has a score of 6.6. I hope the author can better utilize his talents. I will always support the author, come on!

Come on, the author is very good-looking I hope there will be more chapters and it won't be unfinished. I'm going to take pictures slowly. I really like this book! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Super pretty! Real!

I love this sweet campus article!!! >V<