[Single heroine + daily sweetness + pure love + relaxation + system]
[This is the story of an old enemy from my past life who became my beloved wife in this life.
Five hundred years ago, in order to complete a system task, Ye Xun took away the Ice Queen's underwear in person, and was successfully hit in the head with a sword.
Five hundred years later, they met again on the Naihe Bridge. The former cold-faced empress transformed into a peerless beauty, chasing him to kill him again.
Ye Xun:? ? ?
This script is wrong!
In order to take advantage, he was coaxing the empress to make a heavenly oath, and he would have to reach a higher level before he could take action.
(With enough cultivation, you can do whatever you want)
Reader comments
It's very similar to the combination of Wang Xiaofeng's two books, faster than Feng tide's, and sweeter than Shuang Yan. The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses faster and is sweeter. I don't know what the main plot is yet. I hope it will be longer. I can write about rebuilding the ice palace in detail. It should be longer. I want to see cars and knives (just don't be)
It's very interesting. It's a bit like The Ninth World. The male protagonist is splashy and the female protagonist is a little tsundere. However, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is faster and there is no curiosity-seeking elder to block it. The plot is okay after reaching chapter 70, but there is no traffic. The author keeps at it! If you write it like this, 9.5 Is definitely worthy! Come on!
I usually only rate good books after reading them. I see the author wants a lot of stars, so I write a book review in advance.
Pure love single heroine + high sugar. Except for the small parts that need to promote the plot, more than 80% are sweet stickers and flirting. The heroine's little tsundere and ambiguous period are also written so well. I am just a love rat. It's so sweet that it makes me faint [blowing kiss]
I hope that after confessing to the heroine later, the hero can tell the heroine Blue Star's secret (it doesn't matter if the system tells him or not) and tell the heroine that he came through time. I think it is very important because from the previous psychological activities of the heroine, it means that she wants to know the hero's past and the things she said to Xia Yao that she does not understand, because loving someone means wanting to know everything about him! !
I wonder if I will write a plot about returning to Blue Star in the future? I am really looking forward to the story of the male and female protagonists living in Blue Star! Just write a little extra story [sending my heart]
Also, don't write too many female supporting characters. I hope there will be less plots that make the heroine jealous. Although the male protagonist is very masculine, I feel sad when I see the heroine's baby feeling wronged.
Although there are imitations and references (I heard that 🍅 is very strict in this regard, is it really okay?), I think this book is more in line with my wishes. I really don't know how the pure dog-licking character got a rating of 9.5. On the other hand, this book seemed very natural and comfortable to me. Since it is said to be a sweet novel, it must be done with as few cuts as possible, preferably no cuts. Finally, I hope the author can keep writing and don't end up like a book I read before [crying][crying][crying]
This is a fantasy fantasy novel that focuses on light-hearted and sweet pets. The core setting is "an enemy in the past life, and a sweet wife in this life." The story begins when Ye Xun deliberately angered the Ice Empress Su Qinghan in order to complete a system task, and the two died together. After meeting again on the Naihe Bridge, they made an oath to heaven and were reincarnated, which started a daily struggle of "you chase me, you tease me". The overall style is bright, full of laughs, and sweet. It is suitable for readers who like to watch the interaction between the male and female protagonists and don't care much about the rhythm of the main plot.
Advantages
The contrast in character design is endearing: Su Qinghan has transformed from a thousand-year-old cold-faced empress to an arrogant little lady who blushes at every turn and is hard-spoken and soft-hearted. The transformation process is natural and layered. Ye Xun appears to be a scoundrel, but is actually affectionate and dedicated. He is eloquent but not greasy, and the interaction between the two is full of sparks. Especially Su Qinghan's various little reactions after being teased - biting his lips, red ears, pretending to be calm, are written vividly and interestingly.
The settings at the beginning are creative: the reunion at Naihe Bridge, the oath of heaven, and the setting that one has to reach a higher level to kill people, which provides a reasonable framework for the subsequent pull. From "pursuing and counter-pursuing" to "getting used to each other" to "heartbeat", every step of the two people's journey is foreshadowed, not forced to give out sweets.
The daily interactions are vivid: shopping for clothes, soaking in hot springs, catching dolls, eating at roadside stalls, watching movies... These daily scenes are written in detail and can make people immerse themselves. The bickering between the male and female protagonists, the little back-and-forth gestures, and the gradually escalating intimate contact are sweet but not greasy.
Disadvantages
The proportion of daily life is too large, and the main line advances slowly: in the middle period, a large amount of space is devoted to daily descriptions such as eating, shopping, bickering, and growing strawberries, while main line tasks such as "resolving the cold wave in the northern region" and "investigating the ascension passage" have been seriously shelved. Some readers may find it dragging on and lacking the motivation to continue moving forward.
Part of the plot is slightly deliberate: Ye Xun's clothes spontaneously ignite repeatedly just to give Su Qinghan the opportunity to buy him clothes. This kind of plot designed to create interaction is interesting once, but becomes routine when used repeatedly. The branch line of matching emperor corpses in the secret realm is also a bit lengthy.
The combat power system is more arbitrary: the sense of existence of the cultivation realm is not strong, and the protagonist's strength is more for the plot. He is strong when he needs to be strong, and weak when he needs to be weak, which lacks rigor.
The supporting roles are thin: Xia Yao, Li Xiaoxiao and other characters are highly functional. Their main functions are to watch, assist, and create laughter. They lack independent story lines and personal charm.
Plot summary
The story is based on the main line of "reincarnation encounter-vow to bind-daily interactions-emotional warming-revelation of past lives-adventure in secret realms". In the early stage, the rhythm is tight and the opening is eye-catching; in the middle stage, it enters the daily sweet pet mode, and the main plot advances slowly; in the later stage, the clues of the past and present life are gathered through the emperor's corpse mission and the Blue Star Secret Realm. The overall framework is complete, but the ratio between daily life and the main plot is unbalanced. It is more suitable for readers who like to "watch two people falling in love" rather than "watch the development of the plot".
Recommended index ⭐⭐⭐half (three and a half stars)
[Covering face] Can you still comment on yourself?
Very nice, come on author
It looks good, I suggest you go directly to the investigation in Chapter 78 [laughing]
If nothing else, this is the happiest episode for hypoglycemic patients.
I just like to read some sweet articles. The writing is really good [Like]
I don't know why the rating is only 6.3, The plot is very interesting
Isn't it possible that the author is still Xiao Chunan? I haven't talked about it and don't know the inner activities of girls.
The book is good, I suggest you not to be too greedy and read it all at once like me [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]
Come on Baonu, work hard to update (actually I just saw it and already gave it five stars)
More points [please ask for more updates]
I've been looking forward to this one all day [full] [full]
Overall, it's very good, but there are too few and it's not enough to read. I hope it can be updated faster, otherwise I will have to keep it.
It feels good. The plot is well detailed and smooth to watch. I hope the author will continue writing [Salute]
It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, 3000 hours of reading guarantee, there is a high probability of a masterpiece with a score of 9 or above, as long as it is not poisonous in the later stage
The author is not good enough [smiles]
You can still cheer now
I feel like the reviews are lacking a bit. Tomato is all about AI flow writing these days. It's a really good book.
Beautiful, very sweet, very funny
So sweet, my heart feels warm
Very nice sweet article
It's pretty and sweet. I want to see the car.
Good-looking. Love to look good-looking.
Very nice writing, not stiff
Nice looking, sweet little article, I like it
Nice little sweet article
Frog Qu is really too sweet
It looks good, no need to say more
It's too sweet, hahaha
Not bad, I just like to see this kind of [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
It's very similar to the combination of Wang Xiaofeng's two books, faster than Feng tide's, and sweeter than Shuang Yan. The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses faster and is sweeter. I don't know what the main plot is yet. I hope it will be longer. I can write about rebuilding the ice palace in detail. It should be longer. I want to see cars and knives (just don't be)
It's very interesting. It's a bit like The Ninth World. The male protagonist is splashy and the female protagonist is a little tsundere. However, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is faster and there is no curiosity-seeking elder to block it. The plot is okay after reaching chapter 70, but there is no traffic. The author keeps at it! If you write it like this, 9.5 Is definitely worthy! Come on!
I usually only rate good books after reading them. I see the author wants a lot of stars, so I write a book review in advance. Pure love single heroine + high sugar. Except for the small parts that need to promote the plot, more than 80% are sweet stickers and flirting. The heroine's little tsundere and ambiguous period are also written so well. I am just a love rat. It's so sweet that it makes me faint [blowing kiss] I hope that after confessing to the heroine later, the hero can tell the heroine Blue Star's secret (it doesn't matter if the system tells him or not) and tell the heroine that he came through time. I think it is very important because from the previous psychological activities of the heroine, it means that she wants to know the hero's past and the things she said to Xia Yao that she does not understand, because loving someone means wanting to know everything about him! ! I wonder if I will write a plot about returning to Blue Star in the future? I am really looking forward to the story of the male and female protagonists living in Blue Star! Just write a little extra story [sending my heart] Also, don't write too many female supporting characters. I hope there will be less plots that make the heroine jealous. Although the male protagonist is very masculine, I feel sad when I see the heroine's baby feeling wronged.
Although there are imitations and references (I heard that 🍅 is very strict in this regard, is it really okay?), I think this book is more in line with my wishes. I really don't know how the pure dog-licking character got a rating of 9.5. On the other hand, this book seemed very natural and comfortable to me. Since it is said to be a sweet novel, it must be done with as few cuts as possible, preferably no cuts. Finally, I hope the author can keep writing and don't end up like a book I read before [crying][crying][crying]
This is a fantasy fantasy novel that focuses on light-hearted and sweet pets. The core setting is "an enemy in the past life, and a sweet wife in this life." The story begins when Ye Xun deliberately angered the Ice Empress Su Qinghan in order to complete a system task, and the two died together. After meeting again on the Naihe Bridge, they made an oath to heaven and were reincarnated, which started a daily struggle of "you chase me, you tease me". The overall style is bright, full of laughs, and sweet. It is suitable for readers who like to watch the interaction between the male and female protagonists and don't care much about the rhythm of the main plot. Advantages The contrast in character design is endearing: Su Qinghan has transformed from a thousand-year-old cold-faced empress to an arrogant little lady who blushes at every turn and is hard-spoken and soft-hearted. The transformation process is natural and layered. Ye Xun appears to be a scoundrel, but is actually affectionate and dedicated. He is eloquent but not greasy, and the interaction between the two is full of sparks. Especially Su Qinghan's various little reactions after being teased - biting his lips, red ears, pretending to be calm, are written vividly and interestingly. The settings at the beginning are creative: the reunion at Naihe Bridge, the oath of heaven, and the setting that one has to reach a higher level to kill people, which provides a reasonable framework for the subsequent pull. From "pursuing and counter-pursuing" to "getting used to each other" to "heartbeat", every step of the two people's journey is foreshadowed, not forced to give out sweets. The daily interactions are vivid: shopping for clothes, soaking in hot springs, catching dolls, eating at roadside stalls, watching movies... These daily scenes are written in detail and can make people immerse themselves. The bickering between the male and female protagonists, the little back-and-forth gestures, and the gradually escalating intimate contact are sweet but not greasy. Disadvantages The proportion of daily life is too large, and the main line advances slowly: in the middle period, a large amount of space is devoted to daily descriptions such as eating, shopping, bickering, and growing strawberries, while main line tasks such as "resolving the cold wave in the northern region" and "investigating the ascension passage" have been seriously shelved. Some readers may find it dragging on and lacking the motivation to continue moving forward. Part of the plot is slightly deliberate: Ye Xun's clothes spontaneously ignite repeatedly just to give Su Qinghan the opportunity to buy him clothes. This kind of plot designed to create interaction is interesting once, but becomes routine when used repeatedly. The branch line of matching emperor corpses in the secret realm is also a bit lengthy. The combat power system is more arbitrary: the sense of existence of the cultivation realm is not strong, and the protagonist's strength is more for the plot. He is strong when he needs to be strong, and weak when he needs to be weak, which lacks rigor. The supporting roles are thin: Xia Yao, Li Xiaoxiao and other characters are highly functional. Their main functions are to watch, assist, and create laughter. They lack independent story lines and personal charm. Plot summary The story is based on the main line of "reincarnation encounter-vow to bind-daily interactions-emotional warming-revelation of past lives-adventure in secret realms". In the early stage, the rhythm is tight and the opening is eye-catching; in the middle stage, it enters the daily sweet pet mode, and the main plot advances slowly; in the later stage, the clues of the past and present life are gathered through the emperor's corpse mission and the Blue Star Secret Realm. The overall framework is complete, but the ratio between daily life and the main plot is unbalanced. It is more suitable for readers who like to "watch two people falling in love" rather than "watch the development of the plot". Recommended index ⭐⭐⭐half (three and a half stars)
[Covering face] Can you still comment on yourself?
Very nice, come on author
It looks good, I suggest you go directly to the investigation in Chapter 78 [laughing]
If nothing else, this is the happiest episode for hypoglycemic patients.
I just like to read some sweet articles. The writing is really good [Like]
I don't know why the rating is only 6.3, The plot is very interesting Isn't it possible that the author is still Xiao Chunan? I haven't talked about it and don't know the inner activities of girls.
The book is good, I suggest you not to be too greedy and read it all at once like me [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Come on Baonu, work hard to update (actually I just saw it and already gave it five stars)
More points [please ask for more updates] I've been looking forward to this one all day [full] [full]
Overall, it's very good, but there are too few and it's not enough to read. I hope it can be updated faster, otherwise I will have to keep it.
It feels good. The plot is well detailed and smooth to watch. I hope the author will continue writing [Salute]
It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, 3000 hours of reading guarantee, there is a high probability of a masterpiece with a score of 9 or above, as long as it is not poisonous in the later stage
The author is not good enough [smiles]
You can still cheer now I feel like the reviews are lacking a bit. Tomato is all about AI flow writing these days. It's a really good book.
Beautiful, very sweet, very funny
So sweet, my heart feels warm
Very nice sweet article
It's pretty and sweet. I want to see the car.
Good-looking. Love to look good-looking.
Very nice writing, not stiff
Nice looking, sweet little article, I like it
Nice little sweet article
Frog Qu is really too sweet
It looks good, no need to say more
It's too sweet, hahaha
Not bad, I just like to see this kind of [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]