Noga's streamlined dragon body swept gracefully across the sky, encircling the human empire's million-strong army all by himself.
Scales made from nanometer-scale memory-metal robots peeled away from his body and turned into a rain of flaming meteor-like bombs that blanketed the entire battlefield.
The four alloy horns atop his head charged up a raging plasma beam that effortlessly sliced through mountains.
What he spat from his mouth was no dragon's breath, but an antimatter annihilation cannon that could erase all things.
What did it matter if he had transmigrated into a dragon beast incapable of magic?
In the face of overwhelming firepower, everything within range was the truth.
“If humanity dares to offend the dignity of dragons, I will answer with cannon fire. I will grant them destruction!”
(Pseudo-DnD, dragon beast from the start, no heroine, decisive and ruthless)
The author will not stop eating people forever. In the later stage, high-level humans will not stop eating people. If they are afraid of being blocked, they can just write "devour them in one bite", which is the abbreviation. If you don't eat it all the time, it's a poisonous point 🤦, especially if the alien beast devours the text
Very good, the angle is quite novel, but the quantity is still a bit small. The protagonist must maintain this ruthless character, I really like it. Supporting characters must not be stereotyped... And for female characters, don't be uniformly beautiful. Write something eye-catching. Don't just look at body and appearance. Write about his life, his values, his beliefs, and his pursuits. Before writing a character, the author must make sure that gender is the last thing established, okay? (The setting of that nun is even better than that of the water dragon) It's not that you can't write these things, it's mainly because others have written too many. Also, the current plot is a bit lagging and too slow. It seems that the protagonist's big goal is to defeat the Black Dragon Lady, but the author did not set a small goal, resulting in the plot having no clear main line and being too bland. Conflict occurs → (crisis) climax → resolution (event ends + protagonist becomes stronger): This is a small stage, and it is these small stages that form the main idea of a novel. There are ups and downs in a novel to keep going. The problem now is that it's too bland. It's like a confrontation between three humans and the protagonist. Humanity has a strong trump card → the protagonist is vigilant and pretends to be defeated and introduces the water dragon → pretends to be a slap in the face, the human being dies → the family learns the news and offers a bounty to the Adventurer Association to fight the Black Dragon Lady (misunderstanding) + water dragon, letting the protagonist play information warfare → the protagonist becomes stronger + a greater crisis → escape (change the map.) This may be a very old-fashioned example of mine, but the formula has not changed. If it is too plain, you will not be able to read the book. Come on, author.
It's a bit like the Black Dragon Codex, but the protagonist's progress is too slow. He should speed up his body modification. It's not fun enough, so I can only say it's passable.
It's not bad. The theme is very novel and there's nothing bad about it. Unfortunately, there's really nothing exciting about it in the early stage. I just rely on a few guns "biu biu biu". It's probably not until the protagonist unlocks the excellent flying ability and adds firepower and turns into a bomber that the fun comes out, so I'll give it a four-star wait and see 😄
A different approach to dnd dragon text, the protagonist black dragon dragon beast starts the game, referred to as black beast 🤭. The system uses biological energy to exchange for modern technology. The lower limit is so low that even a pistol cannot break the skin of a World of Warcraft, but the upper limit is also extremely high. In the future, any nuclear bombs and anti-matter engines can be arranged.
Not bad, but the protagonist's combat power is a bit suppressed later on, leaving no time for development. The title of the book is My Firepower Is Above You. In the book, the protagonist is always suppressed by firepower. The opponent is either strong or overwhelming in numbers. The protagonist's blue bar is never enough.
It's good to watch, and the flow of the plot is smooth and smooth. Even if the protagonist is not strong enough in the early stage, he will make small mistakes and keep an eye out. Later, he will soon kill the creature that makes the protagonist frustrated. I don't feel that it is very good at the moment. The protagonist is shrewd, cruel and vengeful, and will eat people in the later stage. The author is getting better and better as he writes. Although it is a traditional monster-killing and upgrading process, the writing is very enjoyable and logical.
Liangcao, so far it seems okay, but I have a suggestion: the protagonist cares too much about the identity of the dragon, which seems a bit paranoid. In fact, you don't need to care too much about the identity of the dragon. Strength is fundamental. If the strength is enough, the protagonist can even create his own clan.
It still has potential. After all, not many people write this kind of thing, so the sense of novelty is relatively strong.
The plot is not bad, the subject matter is novel and eye-catching, but the data needs to be more rigorous. For example, the level 3 machine gun has 3 barrels with 500 rounds per second. You must know that the 1130 close-in defense gun with 11 barrels is only about 170 rounds per second, but these do not affect the viewing.