Reincarnated Dragon: My Firepower Is Greater Than Yours

The author will not stop eating people forever. In the later stage, high-level humans will not stop eating people. If they are afraid of being blocked, they can just write "devour them in one bite", which is the abbreviation. If you don't eat it all the time, it's a poisonous point [face covering], especially if the alien beast devours the text

Very good, the angle is quite novel, but the quantity is still a bit small. The protagonist must maintain this ruthless character, I really like it. Supporting characters must not be stereotyped... And for female characters, don't be uniformly beautiful. Write something eye-catching. Don't just look at body and appearance. Write about his life, his values, his beliefs, and his pursuits. Before writing a character, the author must make sure that gender is the last thing established, okay? (The setting of that nun is even better than that of the water dragon) It's not that you can't write these things, it's mainly because others have written too many. Also, the current plot is a bit lagging and too slow. It seems that the protagonist's big goal is to defeat the Black Dragon Lady, but the author did not set a small goal, resulting in the plot having no clear main line and being too bland. Conflict occurs → (crisis) climax → resolution (event ends + protagonist becomes stronger): This is a small stage, and it is these small stages that form the main idea of ​​a novel. There are ups and downs in a novel to keep going. The problem now is that it's too bland. It's like a confrontation between three humans and the protagonist. Humanity has a strong trump card → the protagonist is vigilant and pretends to be defeated and introduces the water dragon → pretends to be a slap in the face, the human being dies → the family learns the news and offers a bounty to the Adventurer Association to fight the Black Dragon Lady (misunderstanding) + water dragon, letting the protagonist play information warfare → the protagonist becomes stronger + a greater crisis → escape (change the map.) This may be a very old-fashioned example of mine, but the formula has not changed. If it is too plain, you will not be able to read the book. Come on, author.

It's a bit like the Black Dragon Codex, but the protagonist's progress is too slow. He should speed up his body modification. It's not fun enough, so I can only say it's passable.

It's not bad. The theme is very novel and there's nothing bad about it. Unfortunately, there's really nothing exciting about it in the early stage. I just rely on a few guns "biu biu biu". It's probably not until the protagonist unlocks the excellent flying ability and adds firepower and turns into a bomber that the fun comes out, so I'll give it a four-star wait and see [laughs]

A different approach to dnd dragon text, the protagonist black dragon dragon beast starts the game, referred to as black beast [laughing]. The system uses biological energy to exchange for modern technology. The lower limit is so low that even a pistol cannot break the skin of a World of Warcraft, but the upper limit is also extremely high. In the future, any nuclear bombs and anti-matter engines can be arranged.

Not bad, but the protagonist's combat power is a bit suppressed later on, leaving no time for development. The title of the book is My Firepower Is Above You. In the book, the protagonist is always suppressed by firepower. The opponent is either strong or overwhelming in numbers. The protagonist's blue bar is never enough.

It's good to watch, and the flow of the plot is smooth and smooth. Even if the protagonist is not strong enough in the early stage, he will make small mistakes and keep an eye out. Later, he will soon kill the creature that makes the protagonist frustrated. I don't feel that it is very good at the moment. The protagonist is shrewd, cruel and vengeful, and will eat people in the later stage. The author is getting better and better as he writes. Although it is a traditional monster-killing and upgrading process, the writing is very enjoyable and logical.

Liangcao, so far it seems okay, but I have a suggestion: the protagonist cares too much about the identity of the dragon, which seems a bit paranoid. In fact, you don't need to care too much about the identity of the dragon. Strength is fundamental. If the strength is enough, the protagonist can even create his own clan.

It still has potential. After all, not many people write this kind of thing, so the sense of novelty is relatively strong.

The plot is not bad, the subject matter is novel and eye-catching, but the data needs to be more rigorous. For example, the level 3 machine gun has 3 barrels with 500 rounds per second. You must know that the 1130 close-in defense gun with 11 barrels is only about 170 rounds per second, but these do not affect the viewing.

It's okay, but it's hard to comment on the kobolds [face covering]

It's quite good. I started watching it with Ben Wu as the heroine, but the content is quite rich.

It looks pretty good, and its combat power and restrictions are very reasonable for now. Why does the plot include a battle between kobolds?

Finally, humans were not allowed to escape. What I had seen before was basically the classic story of being teleported away through space, and then being surrounded and suppressed and forced to start a life of escape. Finally, someone took a more decisive action.

The eunuch is victory

The writing is very good, why is the score so low?

It's okay. So far, there are no poisonous points. I haven't seen any statement about not eating humanoid creatures. This should be changed.

Not bad, has great potential, and is currently non-toxic. The writing is pretty good, but why don't many people read it?

Not bad, very good

It's okay, so far it's still good food.

It's okay. It's still a bit cool to watch.

The subject matter is good, but I just have to focus on writing the main character. Every time I watch Kobold, I jump to watch it because I don't want to watch the Kobold plot.

Great, I like it so much, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's a very innovative book, and it won't be beaten to death with a stick.

Okay, okay, it's rare to find something creative and with a reasonable plot.

The full level is only level 30. Your power system is not very high. Low magic?

It looks good and suits my taste well\(//∇//)\

It looks good and the protagonist is not picky about food

He has brains and his writing is pretty good.

Not bad, nothing poisonous