Elf: I Use Science to Deconstruct the World

666. You experimented with the gym leader's wind ball. Others disagreed. The protagonist looked like you are so ignorant. Next time, the protagonist will also let others study your bog jumper. [Awkward laugh]. Moreover, the protagonist is Daigo's younger brother. If he wants a wind ball, he will not do it casually. He has to use another gym leader's [face covering]

In the Pokémon world, you actually have no bonds, and the protagonist is like a personal computer, and the Pokémon are also like personal computers.

If you mess up the mythical beast, a group of baby teams can defeat it.

The protagonist setting is stable, but the classic is a bit lonely. He is obviously Dawu's younger brother. He has already decided to be a stable researcher. The principles are dangerous and there is no shortage of resources. He has just finished two chapters and still wants to take advantage of himself before he has grown up. He travels across regions and around the world, saying that he is collecting research data. In fact, he does not bring any bodyguards, but a slutty girl. He pokes at dangerous things everywhere, makes sarcastic remarks to everyone he meets, and carries dangerous items in his backpack. The protagonist is a modern time traveler, not an aboriginal young master, but he has no respect for people after nine years of compulsory education. When he comes to a gym, he opens his mouth and says, "No challenge", "Waste of time", "I'm here to study your spirit", "Quickly", "Then let's fight quickly", "Pumping the air out of you won't kill you, don't move"... A brainless and cool novel with a classic facial paralysis, the protagonist is always expressionless and has a cold tone. A ten-year-old child "pushes up his glasses" at every turn, and his back is described as such. My suggestion is: it is suitable for readers with a reading age of less than three years.

Although I know what you want to depict, I have a different feeling when I look at it. It's too weird, a bit inhuman, and I want to study other people's wind skills. They are still there, acting like others are ignorant, and they don't know how to say a word of honor with their mouths, and then they start typing. When the imitation column was made, the tuning fork made a sound and it stopped. How could it affect something of such a large size to such a degree? It's okay to be affected by an earthquake, but it doesn't matter if the parts collide wildly. The energy is unstable. The Baby Team made the internal parts of an imitation column unstable [face covering]

Is the purpose of the heroine's existence to turn the researcher into a two-position dance boss? [What] endure it, endure it, I can't bear it anymore, I'm young and greasy, I just need to turn around, I'm addicted to it and can't extricate myself

The description of Pokémon training and relationships is very good. It makes people feel like he is not a useless young man. I'm still a researcher and I don't object to being a researcher. At the same time, we are not blindly advocating science. In order to reflect the subject, it is still embodied. The description of making money and emotions is not particularly ignorant. It's better than any straight-male writing on the market. Fortunately, it can be seen from the article that the protagonist has a little low emotional intelligence in terms of relationships, but he is not without emotional intelligence. Very good, come on!

It's very good-looking, not brainless, the pace is neither too fast nor too slow, just right, and the plot doesn't include cheats for no reason. It's one of the best Pokémon novels on Tomato [smile]

Good guy, I got into my brain by doing an experiment. I forced myself to collect materials from the gym leader's spirits. If I don't agree, I just force v6 Feiqi.

The faint human-machine feeling at the beginning is not bad, and the writing that begins to take shape later [send heart] is really good, but it is still too little and not enough to read. Please update soon [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's not bad. It travels through the original Pokémon world. It's neither urban nor systematic. The protagonist has a good personality (it doesn't look like a human being as written before. Did the iron tree bloom after thirty chapters?). The strength of the Pokémon is okay. So far, it seems (Marmper, Moonbear, Bankelas), it's a tough tank.

It's good to read, one of the few good Pokémon books [Blow a kiss]

The content is very novel, but the emotional line is written too early, which feels weird.

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After reading Chapter 26, I still haven't found the meaning of the existence of the heroine Guang. She yells and drags her down and relies on the protagonist for no reason. From the beginning, the author has not said a word about the motivation and reason why the heroine follows the protagonist. The gorgeous part after that can obviously be a good time to get together and break up. See you next time How about meeting a better me in an interview? The author said that the little girl has no sense of security and has to follow the protagonist to dangerous areas to enjoy the sense of security. What if she doesn't feel safe? Wouldn't she go home to find her mother? Does the heroine just have no parents or mother, or does she have no family or friends? The author puts it The setting of the heroine seems to be just a small pendant. What I saw was the story of a commoner female trainer who shamelessly followed a noble man from a top company to reach the sky in order to hold her thigh. The protagonist doesn't like trouble, and she always has to do this and that for the sake of light. The protagonist The character design is a genius and the system is almost mature. However, the character design of the heroine is too redundant and one-sided. There is no image at all, and the emotional line is inexplicable. It seems that the author is just for the heroine, and the heroine is very deliberately and forcibly mixed. The two people do not match at all.

Great, what I want is this kind of non-qualification. Those who are limited by the qualification card are really eating one after another. Originally, there is no standard for qualification upper limit in the original book. Even the game only mentions individual differences such as individual value and effort value. I really don't know how an infinite creature like Pokémon has limited qualifications.

The writing is very good, and the rhythm is also very appropriate. Some of the original character designs are continued very well, and the setting of the protagonist is also very innovative. In the end, I am looking forward to the protagonist going to the Hezhong area and meeting the white dragon.

It looked okay at first, but the character description of the protagonist and the calculation of data during battles always made me feel inconsistent. Not to mention it has a bit of an AI flavor. The protagonist gave me a robot feeling. Purely rational calculations are not impossible. The problem is that the introduction of a purely rational character into the Pokémon world feels too inconsistent. Moreover, the Pokémon world engages in physics and technology, which is a bit off-topic. . . The protagonist also wants to build the ultimate weapon. . . It always feels weird. In addition, the protagonist is cold and cold, which is seriously inconsistent with the warm style of the Pokémon world.

The content is okay, it just has a human-machine feel.

Great story! The rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, and the growth line is particularly good.

The protagonist is quite human-like, but the plot is pretty good in Tomato. I haven't seen any big poisonous points so far, and the flaws are not hidden. It's good that the Pokémon you tamed also have the author's own ideas and special features. The characters of the Pokémon are also quite cute? The most important thing is that the author doesn't bother to improve his strength, and the evolution is arranged very quickly. At present, at chapter 80, the main players are basically in their final form. Unlike other bad guys who spend fifty or sixty chapters, good guys, they are still playing the Baby Cup, and they are still struggling in the first and second stages. The time traveler wants to be like the author. Although he can't defeat the mythical beast, the NPC wants to run over it. In one word, it's great! ! ! ! ! If you have time travel and have money, knowledge from past lives, and still work hard, wouldn't that be a waste of time traveling?

Generally speaking, the male protagonist doesn't speak like a human being, and the little girl doesn't have big mood swings just because of a few compliments. She even re-wrote this kind of plot more than four times. The rest is okay, and it's worth watching in your leisure time.

Damn it, why is it gone? My Swampert! !

It's good to watch, and the plot is very smooth. One small problem is that the author likes to use the "not... But..." Sentence pattern, and the more tense the plot, the more he uses it. It is recommended to use less. It is really tiring to read, and it will get sidetracked if you don't read it carefully. It also adds a lot of useless reading. . .

It's beautiful but why is it gone? [Cry][Cry][Cry]

Except for the character of the main character, which I personally dislike, other aspects are really good. Unfortunately, this character makes me uncomfortable to watch. I would like to remind those who are watching later. If you don't like the sense of human-machine, don't watch it. You will feel uncomfortable. If you don't feel this aspect, this is a masterpiece.

It's a rare plot. It's very good. I hope it can keep up. Don't break the chapter and don't write too little. It would be a pity if you write too little.

The writing is very good, but the protagonist in the early stage is too human-machine and looks weird, like a pseudo-human being.

It's really good. It attracted me right away without any delay.

Hey hey hey, are you still alive? [Cover face]