Shall I Fake an Alien?

It's quite good. The author's creativity is greatly enhanced. One obvious problem is that the characters are a little too tool-like and the routines are too repetitive. Basically, someone appears for such and such reasons, which leaves no impression or characterization on me. The routines are mainly very simple. The aliens do something, and then the people on earth are shocked and shocked, and then what happens. I feel a little tired after watching too much. I hope the author can develop some different plots in which human civilization communicates with Proxima Centauri civilization or other alien civilizations. Secondly, another problem is that time is very vague. After reading it for a long time, I was basically not sure how time passed. As for the science part, there is not much to say. After all, it is not a professional study of science. Another problem is that the writing is a bit AI-heavy. Some paragraphs and dialogues are obviously used for reference at a glance. The author may revise it slightly. But among tomatoes it can be considered average. The writing is quite good, I would like to give you five stars for encouragement. Forget it, let's change it to four stars. Many parts of the entire book were written by AI at first glance, 400 years ago or that 400 years ago, and the author didn't even make changes. Other authors would at least use AI to make corrections manually. This problem is really serious, and I hope the author can correct it. [Eat melon]

It's a very interesting and novel behind-the-scenes article. It's the first time I've seen it, but I like it very much. Maybe it's because it's not a spiritual revival, but a pure science fiction article. Let the earth see the protagonist's design 400 years ago, which gave people a sense of shock. However, the humans on earth were not afraid or discouraged. Instead, they cheered up and began to learn and develop backwards. It gave me the feeling of reading a novel, and I felt that both the earth and the protagonist were making progress little by little. I hope that the earth in this article can go further and look further, and stand on the shoulders of giants to go further.

It is a rare science fiction novel. Civilization No. 2 Reminds me of the theory of long-lived species and short-lived species. Only those who believe in the future and future generations will make long-term plans. We cannot wait for one hundred or two hundred years, but we can start laying the foundation now and hand over the future to future generations.

This book is not a cool novel, nor is it pure science fiction. It has a sense of rationality like a civilization. It does not have the darkness of traditional science fiction, nor does it have the fantasy of an utopia. This book will only make you seriously think about it.

I finished it in one go, it's really good, and today there were 5 updates in a row. I have never seen so many more. As long as you keep reading this novel, I will definitely follow it to the end [angry] [angry] [angry]

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but after reading it for a long time, I can find a few minor flaws. First, the portrayal of human beings is too simple. For example, when humans first learned about the existence of aliens, I wonder if their attention should only be on how advanced their technology would be, and they would immediately overtake those who thought of learning. Second, after humans learn this news, what they do is a bit too similar to what the author himself would do. In other words, the form is too formal. . Childish, and very stereotyped. For example, when I read about educational reforms, I think the author should read more books about society. Third, the motive is unclear and too far-fetched. To put it simply, I feel that the logical combination is a bit too much in many places, and the assembly is forced. But of course, this book has many advantages, but in terms of its description, it has already surpassed many articles on the market. These are just the parts that need improvement on the way to writing! I will continue to read it, so I decided to give it four stars. I hope the author can keep improving. When I come back another day, I will give it five stars.

The earthlings in the article can clearly see the micro-expressions of aliens from hundreds of light years away, and they can also kiss each other. It's like a live broadcast and it's so cute [blowing kisses]. The repeated descriptions unique to AI are also very good, readers will not miss the key plot at all [Like]

There is a relatively big bug. Is there something wrong with the timeline you set? You can't launch a satellite today and then have the space station go up on the second day, the space elevator on the third day, the space factory on the fourth day, and the miniature models on the fifth day. I mean, the time interval is too short. There are also some technical descriptions in it that you are too ignorant. Hundreds or thousands of high-power laser generators are integrated into a space the size of a basketball and use water as coolant. How much space can water occupy? How good can the cooling effect be? Moreover, simulating a gravity-free environment in water is also problematic. If you want to simulate it in water, your volume must be similar to the density of water. If it is larger, the simulation will be incomplete and gravity will still affect it. If it is smaller, it will float upward and there will be an additional buoyancy force. Or simply, if you add a submarine function to the prototype you built, then this project is a bit too redundant. Later: Your article was definitely written by AI, right? Time travel has come out. You observe a basin of water here, but you say that 400 years have passed and the purity has not changed. You don't even bother to write and change it yourself. Then you can just extract all of your book and put it into AI to write it. Why are you still waiting for you to write it? Again: The creativity is pretty good

Tomato is a rare high-quality novel. Although some parts are a little brainless and illogical, the writing style is good. These parts are often easily overlooked and do not affect reading. I enjoyed reading this novel. Highly recommended

This is a book about how humans are no longer lonely. The indescribable feeling is wonderful. It was a good book, but the style changed later and I couldn't get used to it, so I withdrew it. Goodbye.

The plot is very bad, not that it didn't move me, but why did you write 20,000 words on a small plot point? It may be more than that. I know this is a very shocking scene, but in reality you were shocked for so long, which is fine for me. But in the novel, you were shocked for more than 20,000 words? The key is what are these 20,000 words written about? Observe → marvel → reflect → perform some kind of action → observe → marvel → reflect → perform some kind of activity. I wrote almost four rounds in this order. In the middle, I inserted a lot of comments from netizens, famous people, and online bloggers, and compared our past with theirs. I was a bit expecting there to be any special content in the middle, so I did not use the "quantum reading method", but it is recommended to be used selectively. The character is very S. For the character of the protagonist, well, I personally don't I like it very much. Of course I know that other people may like it, so this one can be skipped. The logic is not perfect, but it doesn't hurt. After reading it for a long time, I found that the author didn't seem to use AI to write, which is very rare. I looked at the number of chapters, and there were a lot of words. It was very praised. In short, it cannot be said to be a Jiahao read. But if you really want to read this novel, you must practice extreme patience, or you can quickly filter out the key content by reading ten lines. I made a mistake in one place. I didn't fully use AI. I accidentally made a typo when I was typing. To be precise, it should be because I was a little distracted when I wrote this comment.

The reason for giving four stars is that the writing style of this book is much better than the deepseek garbage that is widely available at present. However, the phenomenon of dividing each short sentence into a paragraph appears too frequently, and the "not... But..." Sentence structure that often appears when commenting on certain abnormal phenomena has a claude flavor. The scientific level can be considered as soft science fiction. There will be some mistakes occasionally but they are harmless. One star will be deducted in this aspect.

It's been a long time since I've written a review. This book is difficult to review. It's not suitable for readers who are looking for intense excitement. It has some AI, but I don't think there are any serious problems. If you don't have the motivation to continue reading after reading more than ten chapters, it is actually not recommended to read. There is nothing overly passionate or intense about this book, and it even reminded me inexplicably of when I first read "Walden". The language was bland, but I could just keep reading. Generally speaking, this is a story about human beings, when facing the creations and beliefs of other civilizations in the universe, looking down at the origin of civilization itself, and looking up at the Milky Way. (At least that's part of what I've read now, although these creations were made by the protagonist) After mentioning a few more words, the anchor of the protagonist's existence for the readers is still a little weak. As a non-tool protagonist, the protagonist stays in the house all the time, which will make some readers feel a little confused and helpless, and have the idea of ​​why the protagonist is sleeping again, and the readers have no detailed concept of the overall timeline. Why not try to design a detailed timeline, directly define a year, and then let the protagonist go out and feel the changes in the social atmosphere in the neighborhood. Moreover, it is best for the protagonist to have a certain growth line, which will make readers continue reading and make the novel more interesting. (Of course, it may be that I haven't read the end yet. If so, just pretend I didn't say it)

The problem in the early stage is that Che Lulu always talks back and forth, and one thing is repeated over and over again, but the touching and romantic feeling of science fiction and starry sky is not bad. In the later stage, there are too many aliens, and they all come out at once, which dispels the mystery without maintaining the strong character, although it is not as good as in the early stage. It's repetitive but it also makes it boring. Behind-the-scenes sci-fi articles are indeed very rare, and there is no substitute. It seems that I only saw this author writing. Overall, it is not bad. The new work is more mature and better-looking than the old work, but the old work has been discontinued... I hope the new work will not be updated.

The idea is very good, but the routine is too homogeneous and I hope it can be changed. I also hope that the author will pay attention to the common problems of AI and the contextual incompatibility and some logical problems.

OMG, the rating is so low, please help. I think AI is pretty good, as long as the author puts in the effort to revise it, and with so many words in each chapter, it's very user-friendly🎄◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞🎄, which is very friendly to students who are about to start school and make up for their homework. Listening and supplementing at the same time can also trigger meditation.

Excellent AI-assisted text. But the flavor of AI is still very strong

This book's imagination and subject matter are quite good, but there are too many dialogue breaks in the middle, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. I barely read Chapter 50. The protagonist is a bit too idle as a behind-the-scenes character. Presence is also low. The main thing is that the dialogue has too much nonsense. I hope the author can write well. Then I guess this book will still be very good. Come on.

It's pretty good, although it's an AI article. But overall, if the author has this kind of imagination, he can also give it three stars. However, the repeated bathtub can add another star. It's mainly about imagination and it does teach something.

This book is a bit difficult to review. The writing above is really good. Although the writing format is different from the novels I usually read, once I get used to it, it feels quite interesting, like a record book. And the scenes where tens of thousands of people went there were so well written that I was moved to tears. This is why I gave it such a high rating. However, the later articles obviously overlap with the previous ones and include AI, so there are some small holes left unfilled, such as exploring the diplomacy of civilization. But actually it doesn't have that big of an impact, at most it's a little regretful. But in the end, you have to give your blessings and sprinkle the flowers.

The author is great, really. I graduated in 2010 and now, let alone physics, you asked me to think about the physics knowledge in junior high school. I have to think about it for a long time. Now I only think about pressure, and then what? What is atmospheric pressure? If I had to explain it, I would have forgotten it. There is only this concept. Fixed thinking, a very strange but normal thinking. The more you learn, the easier it is to forget the basics. For example, ask what time it is in English. What would you ask in elementary school? What time is it? So, what about subject, predicate and object in junior high school? Do you know what the time is? When people forget what they have learned. I think that leaves intuition. When water flows downward, things will fall, and heat will conduct heat. This is not the wisdom of thinking, but the intuition of people after realizing it. Intuition hidden deep in memory. For example, if you see a suction cup hook and it falls off, the seal is broken. When cooking something, if you hold the spoon and feel the heat, that's heat conduction. Is this fragmentation and then splicing the story together? Science fiction should not be about displaying knowledge or showing off one's ideas. It should be to lengthen, amplify, and push the causal chain of intuition to the extreme. See the world with your own eyes, use the simplest principles, and write the quietest, most advanced, and most unforgettable science fiction.

The writing is good, and at least it can touch people emotionally. The points are deducted because of the shortcomings of science fiction, and there are many problems.

To be honest, is the author just playing lglr?

This is a soft subject, don't take it seriously when reading it

It can only be said to be AI, but it looks comfortable, so I encourage it with four stars.

Very interesting behind-the-scenes story There will be a lot of boring stuff later

Although it is a bit boring at the end, it is a fine novel, if you can read it.

A very novel behind-the-scenes article, I finished it in one go

It's okay. I found a book that I can read among the piles of tomato fertilizers. It's very in line with my taste. Five stars.

Not bad, come on, author