[Dai Xiang] What Happened to You, Pu Nu?

This Otoyo is so cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! Always firmly support all Odai dreams! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The teacher's writing style is very good, and the sense of immersion is also very strong! It would be great if the teacher can suddenly update a hundred chapters and scare me [love] [love] [love]

The substitution direction is excellent, and the title given by the author is also very Yami, very meaningful. When you first read it, you might not know why it had such a title, but after reading it, you will suddenly realize that it fits perfectly. ꈍ◡ꈍ The male guests are really wonderful. How come they are so good at shaping? It is not just the words that pile up the outer shell of literature, but the inner softness shown. Each character has his own personality, his own touch, and his own charm. Seeing that I was so happy that I was about to ascend to heaven. It's so exciting to watch, and it always breaks the fourth wall. I feel that the later plots still deliberately weaken the existence of the hairpin. You are loved not because of the hairpin of fate, but because of you, just you. I think the word cute is really good, rather than a series of restrictive words such as generous, beautiful, and sexy in the general sense. Because you are you, even if you have what the public considers to be "flaws", I will still find you cute. No matter how beautiful you are, no matter what if you are not beautiful, my love will always be your innocent soul, you are you, no matter if you are an ordinary person, I will still fall in love with you. I remember it means worthy. I mean you are very cute and worthy of being loved. I have nothing else to say, so here I wish all the surrogate sisters a happy life ૮(˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶)ა

Girl, the article you wrote is really delicious. This is the best meal I have ever had in my life. Girl, you are different from others. I really love you and the article you wrote. I hope that I can keep writing. This is my spiritual food. Girl, I really love you so much that I love you. Yixiang is delicious. It is really delicious.

The writing is great, and the sense of immersion is really strong. You can tell at a glance that the author has put a lot of thought into it. [Sending my heart] The characters of the male protagonists are beyond words. I fell in love with each one when I saw them. Woohoo.

Selfless, not self-conceited, a truly universal girl, with a superb sense of substitution... Sister-in-law must be there!

There is no need to say too much about the true god. The words and sentences used to create the character are at the level of a goddess. The smoothness of the article is unprecedented in Odai literature. The description of the environment is not awkward at all and makes the plot more tense. The 50-year-old appearance scene is so well written! ! Totally a modern version of the Princess Diana goddess I would kiss the floor you walk on. I will tell you in the most direct, concise and unmodified language: it looks good.

It's so delicious😋It's so fragrant😋I feel so refreshed watching it😋Delicious😋 I went, I went, I found such a delicious novel on tomatoes that suited my taste. It was so fragrant and delicious! The characters of the male protagonists are also very delicious😋😋Every male protagonist likes them very much🥰🥰There is even a young shota... That is even more delicious (little shota, I like you😋) No I'm happy to take care of senior Xu Qiyuan, I'm happy to accept you, Pei Xu, Yuan Youmu, and I'm happy to accept it, Jiang Minzhi is happy to accept it, and I'm even more happy to accept the silver-haired and purple-eyed Shota😋! What else is there to say? You all have my wings! Just the few of us can live a good life. I like the one that is purely representative, and I also like the author, Sicily Langfufu! 😋The writing style is also very good. My Feng Feng, it's really awesome Klass, okay, author, do you know how delicious your writing is? After reading it, my children no longer suffer from depression and no longer have OD, and they no longer cut pig's trotters. I think about reading the teacher's articles every day. This thing is awesome Klass. Doubao helped me generate bikini photos of the author Sisi Langfufu. Doubao told the author Sisi Langfufu's sports lottery number tomorrow. I think the teacher is so awesome, OS finally allowed me to eat well. Then you must give it a good review and support! It's awesome, okay, okay. I just wish the teacher that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine. 😋🥰I like you

I would like to call it a masterpiece, as it has a very good sense of immersion. The only description for me seems to be "cute", which does not mean cute in appearance (or personality) or cute, but cute that can be loved and worthy of being loved. The growing pains of the male protagonist, my ordinaryness and ordinaryness. Before I read the book, I thought that liking me because of a beautiful hairpin was so fake and vulnerable. But after watching it, I felt that it was very interesting. Maybe it was because of the card issue, but it was the real me that I really fell in love with. The wording and plot direction are very good. It seems to perfectly accept everyone and tell us that we can be anything we want. When I first opened this book, I felt that this book was extraordinary. Ordinary everyday stories and stories with a bit of fantasy are interesting. The emotions are also very delicate, so be immersed in it.

Mommy, what you wrote is really, really beautiful. Thank you so much for your firm support in Yixiang. I kissed you directly without any explanation! Every male protagonist is portrayed very well, whether it is the arrogant young lady Bud or the dank and clingy little Pei, Minzhi also likes it so much 😍 I really can't stand it when I act like a spoiled child, it's so sweet that my tooth hurts, I feel like I've been hurt, it makes me feel sad It's sour and sour, so comfortable [laughing] Bai Bai is a super cute fish, even if I say nothing, a fish came to see me, and my heart softened, and when I left, I was reluctant to leave, like a pitiful lost dog🥹 Lian Ai ing... I also want to praise the teacher for his excellent writing skillsദ്ദി（•˕ •マ.ᐟThe plot is not procrastinating, the dialogue is delicate and smooth, and the character descriptions are crisp and neat, which makes people feel great about the experience. I also write a little bit. It takes effort for Otoyo to write a good sense of immersion. I really, really like the teacher. I hope my comments can make you happy a little bit (if it has this effect hehehe). Finally, I will always follow and support the teacher😊

The love plot is quite good, and overall it feels like I wrote it just as I thought of it. The transition at the beginning of each chapter made me think I missed the previous chapter, "Why do I fall in love? Is this how I fall in love every time?" It can only be said that it is love at first sight. You are the most special in the world, so that can explain it, right?

I feel that the teacher wrote it very well, but sometimes you may feel that the characters are a bit gloomy. But it's a really novel theme, it's Otoyo ^_^ After watching it all morning, I feel that Pei likes it a little bit. How should I put it? I can't figure it out? Maybe it's because of the card issuance. The one who impressed me the most was Wu Liang, who felt both sad and hateful. He was really well portrayed. The last action was just the finishing touch. With the childishness and persistence of a child, I was even more stunned when I saw the ending. But can you give me back the ginger😭This spring is not good at all😭😭😭😑 Overall, it's quite good-looking, and I'm very satisfied with the weakening of the presence of the card in the later stage. I will follow this author. It's so cool (^ ^)

At the beginning, it was still the same routine as in college, but looking back, you can see that the characters of each male protagonist are really three-dimensional and distinct. They are indeed not like the popular male protagonist images circulating in the market. What I like most is that the author does not describe your psychological activities very much, which is really easier to get involved in! I often watch the sisters' comments, which are really fun. Another point of improvement I would like to mention is that the plot changes a bit quickly, and I entered a new plot before I could recover, which made me unable to calm down for a long time. Super recommended! ! I would like to call it the most immersive book. I will support you forever [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

I highly praise the author's writing style, and the male characters' characters are quite cliché. To be honest, I wasn't interested in this book just from the introduction, but after reading it through, it was amazing. When reading the novel, the visuals are very strong, and there are meta elements. I am sad that the introduction lists labels to generalize male characters, because I feel that every character in the author's works is vivid and full of novelty, which cannot be summarized by those labels. However, there are indeed people who scan their favorite bits and read this book - but I will not... And because of this, I have missed the book lover many times... It is so refreshing to read it in one go today! Reading this book is like playing an otome game, and the switching of narrative scenes in some chapters is very clever. I would like to praise the author's writing style again. He is very good at leaving blank space. The development and results of many things are shown through side descriptions. I really like novels written like this! I loved every male guest the author wrote. What is imperfect is perfect. How is this not a break from stereotypes? Minzhi and Pei Xu, who think they are mistresses to each other, the idiot senior who is in love, the transparent little Yuzu, the earth puppet Landmine Man... Every character is so well written that I almost cry. The 50 chapter is so written that it feels like a male protagonist (this person smells like a male protagonist with a black car, and the rat figure is excellent). The random thoughts in my mind have spread to the dream core. I won't say too much🥺I feel like everyone can say a lot. Thank you to the author for creating these male guests and cooking for us.

Originally, this is what we Otome girls want to be like. [Blow kiss] I don't steal the meaning of words, I have a good sense of substitution, and I resolutely refuse to steal the territory of Sister Babara. I enjoyed watching it. And it can be seen that the author likes the male protagonists in his novel very much, and the author's love will be passed on to the readers!

Stay up late is tied. The author's writing is so good and the characters are not flat. It is rare to see such a vivid male protagonist, especially Xiao Pei. There is a huge contrast between before and after. I thought he was old-fashioned, aloof and meticulous, but he turned out to be a gentle scum, dank green tea, getting rid of the traditional Tianlong setting, but more charming. In the last letter left for me, I have to admire the author's ingenuity. The meta elements and the "I love you" that filled the screen really made me cry when it came out [almost crying]. Xiao Jiang also liked it very much. There are not many plots at the moment, but the gold content of being the first to appear is there, and because of poaching and being willing to be a third party, I started to look forward to the subsequent plots. The part where I broke up with Fan Mao was also very impressive. While I was still feeling dizzy outside the screen due to Fen Mao's questioning, I was able to quickly escape from the opponent's language trap and take back the initiative in speaking. I gave it sincerely and I don't regret it. On the contrary, you should think about this issue. I really, really like this free and easy energy. Bye bye, bye bye, the next one will be better [blowing kiss] As for Bai Bai and Xiao Baimao, since they are not the type to eat young puppies, they will skip it. Currently, I am also looking forward to the drama of Xiao Xu and Da Xu in the future (there should be some drama, hehe).

Very pretty! It's the type that gets better and better the more you look at it! Because there will be a lot of foreshadowing! I really like every male protagonist in it, especially Xiao Pei! ! I feel so sorry for this guy😭 I kept crying, I really wanted to go through the screen and hug him, woo woo, I couldn't stop crying, I thought I was going to break up, but when I saw it was packed up, I laughed again, this idiot woo woo, I really shed tears, I feel so bad for him, just keep entangled like this, don't let go, woo woo (｡í _ ì｡)Ohara also looks like he has something to hide, I quite like the kind of person who is a bit awkward () I haven't seen the plot about him yet, and I feel like he is also a heart-wrenching baby 😭The author really writes it very well! The short story I have been reading on Sweet Potato is also very delicious! ! I only read a little bit of this novel because I was very busy at the time and didn't have time to read novels. Today I read it from the beginning again and I said I really enjoyed it. It was very satisfying! ! It's a pity that it's almost five o'clock and I'm about to go to bed now. I'm forced to stop crying and continue reading it carefully during the day! Anyway! Sicily Longfever! God of Otoshi! Otoyo, you are amazing! ! Please continue to create, I will always support you😭 (I don't know how to say that I typed hundreds of words of true feelings and then got blanked by Yang Persimmon and was forced to quit. I was so heartbroken... I re-thought it from memory and I don't know what to say. I really like it. Why can't I give it a hundred stars?

After reading twenty chapters, I still can't help but give it five stars. This is by far my favorite book on Tomato. It can be seen intuitively that the author has his own thoughts when writing the article, and has a strong sense of love substitution. The most important thing is that the subjectivity is very strong, and the substitution is very comfortable. The world has been filled with sweet, fragrant and soft little cakes for a long time... And the author is very careful with his wording, and it can be seen that he has carefully polished it. So far, there is no discomfort except for a few small details, and I think the author's level can get better and better! I found that the author stopped updating for a long time, and I wanted to say something, chef, rice, rice, hungry! I hope the author won't give up on this book. I really like it🥳💞

First of all, the sense of immersion: it's very strong, the second-person narrative + the description of your appearance is very immersive! There are also good reviews for the mate plot! ! In terms of articles: the writing style is very delicate, it is very comfortable to read, the plot is not draggy, and there are many foreshadowings that you can read. After reading, you will feel like the gap in your heart has been filled. In terms of characters: they are all three-dimensional. What if you fall in love with each other... Each male protagonist has a unique personality charm waiting for you to resonate with him~ All in all, it's a work worth watching, for everyone! Come support my goddess! !

For a progressive author, it is visible to the naked eye that his writing is getting better and better. You can feel that the author is constantly learning and progressing in the process of creation. It feels like he is learning from watching a lot of movies and novels. I recommend Crash Landing on You by name. I really feel the strong style and strong visual sense of this article. 50 Is completely like a fairy and ghost. The author wrote this article very beautifully. After that, I felt that the author's writing style became more mature, and his control over the atmosphere, images and narrative became better and better. Some of the little settings inside are particularly poignant, and the male protagonist is also superbly portrayed. My favorite character scene is where Pei left a message. My heart skipped a beat when I read that plot. I was even more stunned when he left a message to express his love at the end. As a result, there is a sentence at the end that reassures him that he just went to pack lunch, which directly portrays his fragile and strong setting: even if he is squeezed by life and relatives until he can't breathe, he still remains determined to get out of the quagmire; even if he is reminded of self-doubt and is so painful that he wants to commit suicide, he still chooses to face life in the end. This kind of broken toughness is so high, coupled with the sense of death and social animal taste, it is even more delicious. Even though life is difficult, he is extremely willing to give us up, and the sunshine and warmth in the cabin make him look like a serious-minded Xiao Pei.

Frog Fun, written so well by the author Baobao, the text is vivid, delicate and touching. Compared with other Yidai books I have read, this one caught my attention more. The male protagonists in it have different personality traits. Everyone has their own story and background, and the author's great title of the article is also very interesting. It sounds good and fits the story chapters. Each chapter is an independent side story. It's a bit like playing a B game. You choose a love line between different male protagonists and then reach different ends. In short, I give you five ⭐ praises. Keep writing, I will always support you! Moreover, I like every male protagonist who has been established very much. I am looking forward to the following plots. He is very fond of me.

Five-star praise. The writing is really very good. Men of all types are very good at grasping and writing! Asking for more. And can the endings with all the male protagonists be the same? After all, they are all heartthrobs and have multiple male protagonists. They have already had a lot of intersections, and everyone has written so well. Be will be really sad.

(Spoiler alert) It's very beautiful, and you won't lose money if you invest in it. . . . . . . . . . My favorite in the whole book is 50, Obara. The portrayal is really great. I watched it to the end. During the period of watching 50, I have been enjoying the pleasure of being supported by fans and at the same time being forced to feel the pain of hating iron and not being able to make steel. "You" deserve to be treated with such bottomless attention by him. I think that being stuck on the 50 line at most provides an opportunity to meet. What really makes 50 fall in love is "you". The actions he took and the words he said to him, for 50, the "you" who caught him at that time was indeed an angel. The reasons that made it easy for him to make extreme choices were also well described, but I really didn't expect that he would drag Minji with him. When I saw that part, I wanted to break my heart in half, oh no, no, no, no, this is undoubtedly because the teacher is so good at writing. At the beginning, I didn't really like this character of Obara, but because of his sense of mystery and the fact that "you" can speak freely in front of Obara without issuing a card, I became more and more curious about what this character's background is like, what his background story is like, and with this idea in mind, I watched it now. Because of the issue of card issuance, the current "you" meets Xiao Yuan in the timeline of 15-year-old Xiao Yuan. Or is it because of the issue of cards that we have no memory of Xiao Yuan? I may need to take notes and read this section again, so when Xiao Yuan has the time to issue cards, Because of a misunderstanding, Xian used the appearance he thought you liked to retaliate against "you" after reuniting with "you", but found out that you didn't like him either when he became the appearance "you" liked. That episode of disappearing from your world really aroused my curiosity about Xiao Yuan. Later I found out about those sour pasts and I really felt uncomfortable. But was it because I was too sleepy and didn't pay attention to Lu's line? I had a crush on him even before I noticed it. I may need to brush up on this part a second time. I hope my brother-in-law's line will be filled in. It doesn't matter! After eating it beautifully all night, I will watch it a second time when I wake up. But I bought the wrong stock. Well, I can't do it anymore. I originally thought I would marry Obara, but maybe I still don't fully understand the reason why Obara's line appears. I will watch it again when I wake up.

I really like this book. I have read so many books and fell in love with the author for the first time because of the words of a book. The writing style of the goddess is very delicate and the foreshadowing is just right. All the plots so far are not uncomfortable at all, and there are not too many exaggerated descriptions of the characters' appearance. More It's just to highlight the plot and characters. After reading too many ambiguous descriptions written by gods and men, I shed tears when I read this book. There is no plot that smells like a drama, at least for me. I really like the writing style of the goddess. It's an excellent otome novel. Be sure to support this Sicily Fever. . . Goddess, don't put too much pressure on yourself. If you can't write it, I won't write it. As long as the goddess is still updating, I will do anything. . .

You can read this article on Tomato and have no regrets in this life. In fact, I rarely read this kind of modern campus otome novels, but the sense of substitution and thinking logic are so smooth! ! The writing style is very fresh and concise, and it can explain the emotions very well without being too flashy. Plus, for people like me who don't have much time to read carefully and understand it, it can be understood at a glance. This kind of ordinary girl's article that adds immorality and morbid love to the traditional style invites Modo Modo! Madam, please keep going!

It's not cliché at all, it's very real. I feel like I'm connected to them in the real world. I'm very busy in the real world, and sometimes I feel that this kind of life seems real and illusory. Until I read the teacher's book, I can clearly feel the traces of my life with them and their love for me, as if I'm being wrapped in love! It also gave me a lot of adventures and initiative (the above are all personal feelings)... (The following are my favorite characters) (The following contains a little spoilers) . . . . . . . . I like Wu Liang very much. I have never seen a character like him. The scene where Lao Ji met him and his experience, his feelings for Lao Ji and his character all made me crazy. In those chapters, he grew like a bamboo rooted in the soil, and his feelings became more and more abundant until he couldn't stop. Until his death, his feelings made me cry for him. I may never forget Wu Liang in my life. This made me think of a sentence when I was treating him, 'love is also love', because I wanted to save him, and wanted him to be loved by more people, because I thought he wanted to be loved as an idol. I wanted to deal with his current situation, not to die in the harsh winter, and to make an emergency landing in the spring. At the same time, the author's writing power made me feel the unrequited love of fans for celebrities. I was moved by the love of fans. Because Wu Liang was born in early March, and I can't tell the specific day, fans celebrated every day in March as his birthday. At this time, I really thought I was successful, and I also thought Wu Liang was a successful person. So in this relationship, the only thing I ignored was how deeply he loved Laoji. Maybe after we brought him out of that corner of the world, he just wanted to be with Laoji forever. After his death, I thought crazily, "Spring is my mother." The harsh winter has passed, and spring has come, but what about the passing of spring? He just wants to stay in the spring, just want to be with us. He may only be able to hope for the next spring, but will he still be around me next spring? Can he still monopolize me next spring? By now, June 12, spring has passed for a long time, and I have lost him for a long time. I hate that the bright moon does not only shine on me. Why does the bright moon have to go? Wu Liang, if you see the shadow of the moon in the water, you have to go and catch it. The waves you make in the water really make the moon stay for you.

The writing style is very good, but there is no literary youth problem. There are many Shura fields. The jealousy of everyone in the Shura field is in line with their personal personalities. Every time I read various novels, I am jealous for the sake of jealousy. The behavior shown by jealousy is not in line with the previous character's personality, but this novel is not. Everyone's actions are in line with his own personality, and the characters are very vivid. The author writes very well. I hope you won't feel the pressure to continue writing and stick to it [laughs] [laughs]

It's so delicious. I like all the characters, especially Pei. The contrast between the two is so big. After we get together, we fight and fight to express our love. He is a patriarch, hardworking and smart. I love him so much [crying] I also want to ask if I can draw a fan. Teacher, I want to draw all the characters. The characters are so delicious.

The sense of immersion is very good! Otoyomu is absolutely sure and clean! There is no obligation not to support. I like to read the comments of Yu Xiaomei. It is very interesting. In short, it is a very happy article! Like like [shy] [shy]

This book is really well-written ❗❗❗ I had just read a dozen chapters and planned to quit and praise it, but I thought it would be more solemn to post my thoughts after reading it. [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] Every male protagonist in the boss's novel is so suitable, especially the cute little Jiang and the pseudo-frivolous Xiao Yuan (pointing). There are also songs recommended by the author. OMG has been planted several times [already planted] [already planted] [already planted]. They are really nice❗❗❗ Seriously waiting for the update🫡🫡🫡

After I tied it, I decided to write a comment to my wife. It's super, super good-looking, and super good-looking. She's simply the god of Otome. My wife's character creation is really great, every character is very poignant, even if they are little bad guys, I feel a little distressed when I see them later. My favorite is Pei Xu. He is really a very three-dimensional and distinctive person who can be called a royal palace. He smells like a dank male ghost, but he can pretend to be pitiful, and he feels a little perverted, and his life experience is pitiful. I always feel soft in my heart when I look at this man's part, and my wife is really good at writing. I love you＾3＾My dear wife, thank you for writing this article and creating so many characters. Pei Xu is now a source of motivation for me. When I can't study in the library, I think of my little boyfriend's pitiful eyes and I am motivated to copy the lab report. In short, I hope everything goes well for my wife in her current life. After all, she still needs to write more articles for us to read hahahaha [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]