Anime Crossover: I Don't Want to Be a Freeloader

It's quite good. Cheng Jiaojun's progressive strategy and the conflict between the superego and the ego are also handled well. It's a rare comprehensive comic. However, this type of article always has a fatal point. In order to extend the plot, more animations are constantly introduced, resulting in too many characters and constant controversy. Therefore, my suggestion is that the style of this book is really good and does not need to be changed, but the world view does not need to be added too much. It is best to have an outline, but if it can be completed at some climax point, it will be perfect. Of course, I am just talking with my words, it still depends on the author's own thoughts. Come on [get it] [get it] [get it] [have planted grass] [have planted grass] [learned] [admire]

I really think it's okay. There are some poisonous points, but I can still accept it. I hope the author will try his best to write it. Also, I don't think you should write too many chapters about becoming stronger in another world.

Finished reading it, it's pretty good. The early stage is better, but later on there are some inexplicable plots without much foreshadowing, and it ends quickly with a lot of holes left unfilled. Shuangwen's logic makes sense, but I can't think about it in detail.

Inside the black long straight, winter horse and yarn, Linlin butterfly, this kind, I really like it, suck it

Looks good, come on, there are already two angels in Yuanzhikong

I want to see Mahiru Shiina

Leave a name for Dongma

Not bad, it's already very good in the world of comics

Why is it over?