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I love Otome! So well written! ! But aren't they all labeled Otome? Why do some people say that the heroine [face covering]

The writing style is very good. It's rare to see this type of writing writing Odai stories. However, I still suggest that the author Baobao delete the comments about falling in love with the heroine in the comment area. It destroys the sense of immersion. Obviously there was no such comment when I read it before🥲 Please add your rating, it's very well written!

During the serious tasting of Otodai-san, the characters are very three-dimensional and very attractive. I feel jealous because of this secret poke. The comment section and review section praised me thank you for liking me🥰. It has a strong sense of immersion, and the world background is also very wide. It is delicious😋.

After seeing half the passion, I quit and gave the teacher a review of this book! It's really, really written so well! ! The teacher's firm stance on Odai made me feel particularly at ease. . TT Who are you and why are you so good at writing! The martial arts style Otome Junyo on Tomato is really, really cool. I'm so lucky to have encountered this work by my teacher. His writing style is delicate and his skills are very strong! The portrayal of many female characters in it is awesome! ! The female characters are three-dimensional and distinct, I really like them! The plot is also very well written, and the martial arts style is very rich and pure! It really has the feeling of grudges and grudges in Gu Long's works! Like! ! ! The emotional scenes between us and the male protagonists in the article are also very interesting. Sisters who like gravity-type dog men must not miss this book. 😋😋 Teacher Ju knows how to write it. It's too good to praise it. All in all, goddess, I really love you so much 😭😭😭Follow me forever! ! 🥺🥺🥺💕💕💕🔥🔥🔥

I have to give this book a thumbs up. The plot connection is very smooth and vividly outlines the undercurrent of the Jianghu forces. The characters are three-dimensional and multi-faceted, not flat. Each character has its own arc. There is no stereotype or scrutiny in the portrayal of female characters. They may be older or younger, they can be ruthless, ambitious and intelligent, and have their own pursuits; the male characters do not have any uncomfortable "manliness" - everyone is simply a normal person! (In some way). What makes me very comfortable is that the description of the character's appearance is an effective line drawing. Unlike many people on the market who blindly describe characters as "beautiful" and "handsome", the description in this book focuses on the details of the character's temperament, skin color, hairstyle and clothing. Then the must-see part is the emotional line. At this moment, the big dog's dampness is not very obvious, but the aura of the palace is inexplicably revealed, while the small dog has an extremely delicious hidden inferiority and growth tolerance, accompanied by the unique clarity and a little publicity of young people. At the same time, some other men are also very delicious, such as Lan Jiu. Appreciating everything. • In short, I can see progress with the author's last book (which has been removed from the shelves but luckily I added it to the bookshelf). Each book has its own interesting points, and some things are in the same vein. The plot rhythm is very refreshing and not sluggish, and it is not aggrieved at all. Not much to say, tasting is in progress⋯

The delicious taste of Otoyo! I thought it was 1v1 at first, but then I realized it was 1v2 (even more delicious!) The writing is also delicious, the rhythm of the plot is well grasped, and there is no heart-breaking plot. The female characters in it are particularly good, many of them are powerful and have status, which is super cool! This style of otome novel is really rare and very delicious!

Needless to say, it's awesome🤩🤩Lu Changfeng, we like you! Author, we love you! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I read only thirty chapters and rushed to comment, the writing is so good I cried to death 😭😭It is so well written that it is better than most of the writings I have read and the characters have full and three-dimensional personalities. Oh my god. . I'll wait until my drawing skills improve and I'll draw fanfics😭😭 I couldn't help but touch it a little during my evening self-study. I'll post it here after coloring it🤩🤩

The writing is really good. It's hard to imagine Tomato's writing being so good TT The content feels a bit heavy. It would be nice if "my" name appears less frequently. Sometimes I feel there is no need to call my name. Five-star support first!

Yummy, yummy, yummy! ! ! ! Three delicious dishes are enough to show my high praise for this book! ! ! My martial arts dream reached its maximum at this moment , it may be a bit slow in the early stage because of the preparation. The emotional line between the male protagonist and us may be written lightly. After all, our situation is where we can't show special enthusiasm for the male protagonist. But later when we go out, we can relax a little. The teacher's emotional line is very awesome. The male protagonist was like this when he was young. We are jealous of each other, but our male protagonist who has traveled through time is said to be at ease. We are exactly like an old couple getting along. The older a man is, the more mellow he is🤤🤤 Then when he looks at his younger self, he is jealous and sulky. That is called a fragrance. Boss, boss, our Miao man will not lose, right?🥲🥲We really can't add him as the male protagonist in the future. Come in😭The tsundere man won't lose, boss😭The sense of immersion is also very awesome. I really recommend everyone to read this book. Boss, do you dare to make another one directly? It scares me to death😭Because we are the protagonists, many people in the book have a different kind of emotion towards us (not love, but friendship, appreciation), and we ourselves are also very It's awesome. It's so cool. Don't look at the low rating. It seems that the rating is low because it has just been released. I sincerely recommend everyone to take a look and be sure to see the back. Boss, boss, can our relationship lines be more detailed? I want to post with this husband ✧⁺⸜(˙▾˙)⸝⁺✧

Super delicious www. All the Oto girls are here to eat! !

It's shocking and delicious. I personally don't read martial arts novels very much. Female channels basically don't have the same type of novels, and male channels... They have too many interesting content. The writing style is very delicate, and the chivalrous, heroic, youthful spirit and carefreeness between the children in the world are just right. Even if the emotional line is put aside, everyone in it is worthy of savoring. "I" also belong to that kind of smart person who is particularly alert and everyone thinks highly of "me". The settings of the puppy and the big dog are also very novel, shocking and delicious. The interaction between the two people is particularly interesting. The puppy is still a boy and is still attached to "me". The boy's love is very young, sincere and passionate. As a big dog, he has the feeling of an old married couple and a touch of a human being.

Full marks! Must be full marks! It's been so long since I've seen an article with good writing and a well-arranged story. The descriptions are also clear and restrained. The characters are still sharp and rich despite such restrained writing. I originally wanted to praise my master for portraying an ambitious woman very well, but the writing style is unconventional. On the contrary, one really has to admire her ability to adapt to her ambitions from her arrangement. After watching this, I just want to praise each character, each one is well portrayed. And the full text does not have the greasy feeling of today's writing, but has a simple and simple Jianghu feeling, which is very worth reading! It is too short but I still want to read it😭 I am very curious about how the last two will try to stop me from going home. Even so, I still hope that I can go home successfully in the end. After all, I miss the mobile phone network and ordinary life. Haha, the Jianghu in the book is still too complicated and tiring.

It's been a long time since I've seen a martial arts article on Tomato, and it's still an Otome article. This article really surprised me so much! I think the plot inside is very smooth and natural, especially in the shaping of the characters. The sense of freedom that belongs to the world of pleasure and hatred is very movingly reflected in the text. I especially like the author's creation of various female characters in it. Each one has his own personality style. The author's outline is simple, but the portrayal is very vivid. It makes me fall into the quack again_(´ཀ`" ∠)__ There are also group portraits. I finally see this kind of non-embarrassing type! ! Who knows, ah, ah, ah, ah, author, I love you [blowing kiss], you must keep writing, your writing is really good (forgive me for my poor words)

It is definitely at the ceiling level among similar works. The writing is unique, using line drawing to easily outline the characters' images and emotions, and is completely unconventional. There are thousands of female characters, each with their own charm, and the plot rhythm is well arranged. I read the other two articles by the teacher. There are no requirements on the subject matter. Readers who like dramas and pay attention to logic and writing style can read it. They are all very good.

It's so delicious, so delicious, all Otoshiro sisters should seriously taste this divine text! It's very good. Both big dogs and small dogs are very delicious🥰🥰🥰. The author's writing style is also very good. The writing and plot are very smooth, taking into account the plot and sweetness🥰It also made me eat the fine chaff🥹

The writing is so good, the writing is strong, the setting is rich, and the martial arts style is purely translated into the Otome novel. The author has a firm stance, and the Otome sister can eat it with peace of mind. Also, the male protagonist is a gravity type + canine type + older/younger boy, and there are meta elements in the mini-series, which is very cute! Anyway, everyone come and see this, it's really beautiful [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The writing style is very good and delicate, and I can't help but sigh that Otodai has such delicious rice. The beauty of white space and point-to-point expression are very suitable for martial arts themes, but without losing the emotional tension. The writing style may seem light, but in fact, love is as heavy as a thousand pieces. It is different from the style of Dakai Dahe, and the writing is not overdone. The overlapping rendering is very restrained, but the turmoil between the rivers and lakes, the complex emotions driven by interests, the love and hate between people, the cherishment, hatred, patience and youthful spirit are vividly displayed. Moreover, I really like the women in the novel, and their life and death, love and hate, joy and tears.

Very well written! You must continue to write. I will keep up for updates. The heroine's character is very good, and the big dog and puppy are cute. However, I feel that the heroine's emotions are a bit depressed and too bland, but in short, it is very beautiful! ! !

So pretty! ! ! ! I really enjoyed reading the description of Changfeng's psychological changes🥺🥺Like a dog, I clicked on the introduction and discovered 1v2! ! ! I was not very interested at first, but I got excited after watching 1v2😋😋I want both, because we have the advantage. By the way, I feel that the writing style of the author's wife is really good. Every character is very vivid, just like the writing style of magic and romance that I once read. It is so well written... Tied in one go! ! Our Otodai-san's food is really good! ! ! So cute! ! ! I really like this continent😭😭We really feel like an old married couple, it feels so sad. Xiao Lu fights and fights, is young and knows how to act coquettishly and show weakness. Mainland gives me a feeling of brokenness🥺🥹 Standing there looking at us with wet eyes, I have already started to feel distressed. No matter what, they are both my good babies and my wings! ! ! Every time I get along with the mainland, it feels a little painful (a touch of sadness), but in fact, some people are full of ideas, and 1v2 is still too delicious (sorry) to be jealous of yourself😋😋😋 —Also: the plot is also very interesting! The rest of the characters are also very three-dimensional. Xiao Lu's cousin and aunt😭 as well as Hall Master Xue who works hard on his own, the hot-tempered Miss Tang and Chen Ling are all very vivid. So well written. Looking forward to the follow-up plot! ! ! The author's writing style is excellent and the imagery is very strong. When writing about a group of people discussing matters, everyone has their own personality characteristics, and you don't feel that they are all homogeneous and unrecognizable. You are so good at writing! !

It's a good read. When I read the latest book, I discovered that I had read another book by the author before. It really gets better and better with each passing day. There are many life-like details, which can create a sense of atmosphere with just a few strokes, and the development of the story is also clearly explained. Looking forward to subsequent updates!

I'm so happy... It's so beautiful that I almost tied it in one go! ! This is the first time I read a Yixiang novel with a martial arts theme. This is the group portrait I want😭 While traveling around to punish evil and promote good, the world is about gratification... When I watched martial arts dramas in the past, I was envious and longed for the protagonist group to experience so many sincere feelings and do so many meaningful things. Now we are also one of them TT The teacher's writing style is also very mature, especially good at describing some images (I am not very good at describing orz), and the female characters in the book are all very well created... Regardless of age, background and position, every female character has a vigorous and upward energy. It is really good. I will choose this book as the antidote to my life🥺🥺 Finally, I would like to talk about two dogs🥺🫳When there are big dogs around, I really feel very at ease. It is the kind of peace of mind that says "Great, Lu Mingyuan, we are saved", followed by heartache... His strength can protect us and protect our loved ones. I don't dare to think about how he survived alone in his last life when he was not full of wings... That's enough, little Lu, I feel sorry for you💔 I want to turn into a hen and give them both a fluffy and warm hug.

The writing is amazing! ! ! ! ! The best in tomatoes! ! ! And she can also write martial arts otome, which is awesome! ! !

QwqA rare martial arts style Otome. I really like it. Every woman has a multi-faceted feeling. QwqqqqThe writing is really great.

Sophisticated writing! If you are interested in writing, this article is full of flavor. It can be seen that the wording, sentences and plot are carefully arranged by the author, and the character creation is also excellent. It is excellent! The plot is very smooth, there is no nonsense or stupidity, the charm of the characters is not just spoken but needs to be seen by the readers themselves, and the plot is also very gripping. As a substitute novel, it is of course important to the shaping of the male protagonist. It can be said to be sweet and sour, with an excellent taste. Don't miss it if you pass by, come in and take a bite! [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

The sense of immersion is very good, I really like the portrayal of women in it. No one can refuse Puppies. The only shortcoming is why the author can't update a hundred chapters a day for me to read😭😭😭I feel helpless after reviewing the review.

I think it's pretty good. In fact, at first I thought it was the same as the old plot, with Xue Suxin being a pure bad person, and others like Ruoshui, but later I discovered that was not the case at all. They were all women in that era who were growing up and climbing up, whether for themselves or for the people behind them. And I think the male protagonist's character is very good, the kind that can understand unfinished words and talk to each other without having to speak. , But the ability to express one's feelings to each other can be said to be very rare, and the ability to reduce unnecessary conflicts and contradictions. Before this book, I can basically say that I have never seen such a male protagonist in other books. I also like it very much. Also, I found that the author especially likes to describe the chest features of Lu Mingyuan when he grows up. This male mother is very delicious. Of course, the puppies under the age of 3 are also very delicious. What attracted me to this book was not only the character traits and abilities of the male protagonist, but also the endless power of the female group portraits. This book always has a clear goal, and it is not just about falling in love. I think having a career is also very good, and I never forget to go home or waver from beginning to end. All in all, it is highly recommended (of course, except that the author is a little slow in updating) and worth reading🍺😎

The author's writing is very good! The sense of immersion is also quite strong. Sometimes a line drawing is just right! The plot is both sweet and sour, and it's a rich reading experience! Moreover, every character has a brain, and the plot progression is quite logical. The most important thing is Lu Changfeng's cuteness! ! ! ! Cheerful gravity puppy boy! ! ! So cute. (The author is very conscious, and the female characters are diverse and lively. It's very reassuring to read (o^^o)♪) Senior Sister Ruoshui, I'll give you a kiss! There are so many great female characters! Great shape! Recommended, B does not explain to 666, author, teacher, you are my goddess.

What a delicious pure substitute... It's very good, the sense of substitution is very good, and my wife's writing is superb! The little foreshadowings are also well rounded out, the plot is tightly paced, not procrastinating, and looks smooth. It's a must-see for pure Dai Yi.

It's so beautiful, the writing is fluent, the language is concise but the immersion is very strong. The characters are very smart and have their own personalities. Especially the girls [send the heart] are strong and soft at the same time, like water and sword. I am looking forward to the next plot development! I really want to see the expression of the puppy when he sees that the person next to us is actually another version of himself hahahaha

I was attracted by posts on other platforms. I have read more than 50 chapters so far. I feel that it is very well written. I also like the design of other supporting characters and the shaping of the world view. There are very few second-person Odai novels, and there are even fewer non-short stories that are good. I support it with five stars. I hope the author will continue to work hard! In addition, can you look forward to other stories about Lan Jiu, Xue Suxin, and Ruoshui [Sending Hearts]