Arknights and the Children of Midnight

The writing is very good, the Midnight Lord, peeling the skin for decoration, and the shameless cloak. You can try to get one later. You must persevere. Author It looks great and I think it has great potential.

The Midnight Lord's sadness at Loli Pass is vividly described

Overall, it's pretty good. It can be seen that the writing and narration are well-written and well-detailed. I didn't give it full marks because I think the only bad point, and the one that I'm quite dissatisfied with, is the shaping of the protagonist. The great purge of the aliens and the traitors who colluded with the aliens during the Great Far Era was in full swing. As a cold-blooded Night Lord, a Terran legionnaire veteran has long been formed in his long fighting career. A set of codes of conduct and style based on Legion tactics and traditions should not be too tolerant or benevolent to these demi-humans, and Grand Astartes is still more or less a very typical and common part. Not to mention the distant dark and ignorant 40k period, or the glorious 30k period that believes in the truth of the Empire. Grand Astartes is still prevalent, but I don't see this in the protagonist, or too little. In addition, I know that the author should have more or less intentionally substituted the famous lolicon theme of Prince of Crows, but in fact not all Night Lords have this trait, and this point reflected in the article is very abrupt. Why and why is he only so kind to Ellie and not tepid to others? Ellie doesn't do anything special in the article. This kind of differential treatment makes people very confused. In addition, there is basically no so-called love among Astartes. So in summary, I have never been able to figure out this issue. What does it really mean [face covering] Putting aside this poisonous point in my opinion, I think the rest can be said to be a pretty good work. Of course, I think this poisonous point may seem small, but it brings some fatal problems that affect the perception of an important part of the protagonist's characterization. Of course, some people will not think so, and some people I would think that since they are all time travel fanfics, it is acceptable for Warhammer characters to be less hammer-y. This issue is a matter of opinion. I think that since we are going to write about the Astartes, we should put more effort into studying and polishing the narrative about the Astartes as much as possible, so as to keep it close to the setting of the original work. I haven't played it before and don't understand it, so I can't comment.

Author [crying] I have read every one of your books! The writing style is very good [Sending my heart] As long as you persist, there will be a complete story line and it will be a good book starting at 8.5 [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The description of the Night Lords needs to be improved [Thinking] Now it seems that the protagonist is like Sun Wukong who was crushed under the five-finger biscuits. How can he be threatened after living for such a long time [face covering] I hope he can do something serious, don't be afraid to kill the plot characters

Good book, if you Warhammer demons want to see the Warhammer in your heart, please go here. The protagonists in the book are not the lunatics who throw themselves into chaos. For example, the "normal people" in the Terran War just use fear as a weapon instead of fear for the sake of fear.

Excellent product, nothing to say This book is mainly the same as the Necron book Terra. You have to press it or it will be over after a few chapters. If everyone doesn't accept that the combat power is overwhelming, we can only suppress the wildness and make it more humane in terms of plot. As for not being like a bat... Emmm I think there aren't many people talking about other fan fiction OOC, not to mention it's not the kind that has completely changed. Anyway, I think it's another excellent book for Arknights fans.

What a pretty mouth! What I want to see is this mouth tooth! 365-Degree flying small animals with no blind spots [laughing evilly] [Like]

First of all, I agree with the positive evaluation of the book by the book friend The Last Cryer (please check it out in person for details). I think the content in the book is the embodiment of the author's inner will. The protagonist Saiya seems to be a symbol of something in the author's heart. Through the perspective of the protagonist, we travel in the author's inner world. I agree that the violence he inflicts on the unjust things in his heart, or on his enemies, is reasonable. This is indeed consistent with the character, but do we really need a tool? A machine that does its job (kills) to fulfill its contract? He will execute the contract signed with Kelsey in order to obtain the Source Stone inhibitor and obtain information about Terra, and then he will kill. Is it going to continue like this? Until Ellie dies, and then what? Can he make some changes and reduce the conflict with Rhode Island (this conflict is not occasional or accidental, but more like a string that is always stretched, existing at all times, ready to go)? Does he really want to do this to every operator on the island? Bringing fear, apathy, or something else (besides the kids and Ellie)? Could it be more toned down in the rest of the story? The mark of the Night Lord is indelible on his soul, but can the next story add something new? Like, love? He doesn't need to be gentle to everyone like Theresa during the Tower of Babel period, at least he shouldn't show his scary side to Rhode Island and other people all the time. On Rhodes Island, even if you have the majesty of a Space Marine, can you occasionally provide some help to others? When dealing with children, even if you don't play with them or tell them stories, can you teach them not to go astray? The reason why this book is not good is in the creation of the protagonist. The Night Lord side of him is very good, but it does not seem to describe how he goes from the dark side to redemption. In the book, you will see the author's foreshadowing, and he seems to be going to a better side, but in the subsequent story, what I expected never happened. If you have read the story of Warhammer 40k, is it the endless killing that you like? Or the blasphemy of Chaos? I don't think so. Aren't we pursuing loyalty, courage and persistence? What's the point of it if our protagonists wallow in carnage on Terra, coming back in blood again and again, just like they did before in the Night Lords? To him, what's the difference between this Terra and that Terra? But it is a journey full of blood. There is no way to wash away the blood on his body, but can he return to the right path? Become a Grand Inquisitor or an arbiter of civilization on Terra? Or protect the lives of teammates during the mission. This is the first time I have written such a long book review. There may be some problems with what I express. If you have different opinions on this, it may be that my writing is not good enough. You can point it out first and I will explain it. The top priority of this book is to create the protagonist and lead him to redemption. Anyway, it is to let the protagonist move towards some good side. In terms of specific performance, don't treat the people around you with an extremely bad attitude. If you can still communicate to a certain extent, don't take action. For example, a girl had a conflict with Kelsey over a trophy. The protagonist's next mission is a very important point in time. If the author does not seize this opportunity (Volume 5) to reshape the protagonist, then the story will end here. I hope my review will receive a personal response from the author. Next are some extra words. I think the reason why we read fan fiction is to enter that world in a different way. Whether you enter as an ordinary person or from the perspective of a space warrior, you participate in the process of the world. The different changes that result are very interesting. In the game, our identity as a doctor can take on many different identities in fan fiction. The resulting changes are a wonderful thing. Contact with the people involved and using different characters will yield different results. Everyone has a love or dislike for a certain character in Arknights, so they will imagine what will happen if they come into contact with them, and the protagonist is born. Some people like this role, then your identity or the relationship between you two will be lovers, friends, and partners; some people hate this role, then the relationship between you two will be betrayal, slavery, and hatred. We may fall in love, we may get married, we may meet each other on the battlefield, or we may plot against each other in the dark corners. It all happens.

Although I only played Porridge for a few days and gave up, and I don't know much about the specific settings, it looked pretty good. Not everyone in the Night Lords is evil, so there's no need to write it in such a harsh way. If you really want to watch Dark and Deep, you can go find a book called I Sell Pancakes and Fruits in Warhammer, it's curious enough [shy]