Arknights and Midnight's Children

The writing is very good, the Midnight Lord, peeling the skin for decoration, and the shameless cloak. You can try to get one later. You must persevere. Author It looks great and I think it has great potential.

The Midnight Lord's sadness at Loli Pass is vividly described

Overall, it's pretty good. It can be seen that the writing and narration are well-written and well-detailed. I didn't give it full marks because I think the only bad point, and the one that I'm quite dissatisfied with, is the shaping of the protagonist. The great purge of the aliens and the traitors who colluded with the aliens during the Great Far Era was in full swing. As a cold-blooded Night Lord, a Terran legionnaire veteran has long been formed in his long fighting career. A set of codes of conduct and style based on Legion tactics and traditions should not be too tolerant or benevolent to these demi-humans, and Grand Astartes is still more or less a very typical and common part. Not to mention the distant dark and ignorant 40k period, or the glorious 30k period that believes in the truth of the Empire. Grand Astartes is still prevalent, but I don't see this in the protagonist, or too little. In addition, I know that the author should have more or less intentionally substituted the famous lolicon theme of Prince of Crows, but in fact not all Night Lords have this trait, and this point reflected in the article is very abrupt. Why and why is he only so kind to Ellie and not tepid to others? Ellie doesn't do anything special in the article. This kind of differential treatment makes people very confused. In addition, there is basically no so-called love among Astartes. So in summary, I have never been able to figure out this issue. What does it really mean [face covering] Putting aside this poisonous point in my opinion, I think the rest can be said to be a pretty good work. Of course, I think this poisonous point may seem small, but it brings some fatal problems that affect the perception of an important part of the protagonist's characterization. Of course, some people will not think so, and some people I would think that since they are all time travel fanfics, it is acceptable for Warhammer characters to be less hammer-y. This issue is a matter of opinion. I think that since we are going to write about the Astartes, we should put more effort into studying and polishing the narrative about the Astartes as much as possible, so as to keep it close to the setting of the original work. I haven't played it before and don't understand it, so I can't comment.

Author [crying] I have read every one of your books! The writing style is very good [Sending my heart] As long as you persist, there will be a complete story line and it will be a good book starting at 8.5 [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The description of the Night Lords needs to be improved [Thinking] Now it seems that the protagonist is like Sun Wukong who was crushed under the five-finger biscuits. How can he be threatened after living for such a long time [face covering] I hope he can do something serious, don't be afraid to kill the plot characters

Good book, if you Warhammer demons want to see the Warhammer in your heart, please go here. The protagonists in the book are not the lunatics who throw themselves into chaos. For example, the "normal people" in the Terran War just use fear as a weapon instead of fear for the sake of fear.

Excellent product, nothing to say This book is mainly the same as the Necron book Terra. You have to press it or it will be over after a few chapters. If everyone doesn't accept that the combat power is overwhelming, we can only suppress the wildness and make it more humane in terms of plot. As for not being like a bat... Emmm I think there aren't many people talking about other fan fiction OOC, not to mention it's not the kind that has completely changed. Anyway, I think it's another excellent book for Arknights fans.

What a pretty mouth! What I want to see is this mouth tooth! 365-Degree flying small animals with no blind spots [laughing evilly] [Like]

Very good book [crying] [crying] [crying] Why does the Night Lord even exist? When can we Alphas go to Terra to find the Beast-Eared Girl? By the way, what would the members of the Rainbow 6 team do if they see the Night Lord?

The writing is quite good, but the decorations on the body are a bit lacking. As a normal child of midnight, shouldn't the body be covered with "people" [sneaky laugh]

Although I only played Porridge for a few days and gave up, and I don't know much about the specific settings, it looked pretty good. Not everyone in the Night Lords is evil, so there's no need to write it in such a harsh way. If you really want to watch Dark and Deep, you can go find a book called I Sell Pancakes and Fruits in Warhammer, it's curious enough [shy]

It's pretty good, and the author said it's Yun Wan, so just write a book you like. If you don't write it, don't call it! The Night Lords use fear and don't just know how to create fear. I only criticize certain people. You might as well go and see what they are saying. Here's Shuang Wen'er, who is decisive in killing!

Gua! Awesome, this is the kind of fanfic I want to read😍

Come on, author, it looks good, but I feel like there are too few weapons. The Night Lord's Lightning Claw and Chain Halberd are also quite classic.

The story is really good, the writing is good, but the update is slow and the rating is low. I feel that the rating should be 8 points.

Very good, not too outrageous

I hope we can see Rhode Island scenes later

Nice! Write quickly! That's it, I won't say too much

It's really good-looking, both the story and the emotions are ridiculously good, please don't stop updating.

You face a, captain, pioneer, traveler, doctor, commander, administrator, ropemaker, drifter, teacher, I will read your book

There are some shortcomings, but I think it's okay if I don't dig into it [star] I usually look at it, it's okay

Using superhuman organs

Come on! Author, don't stop suddenly

Awesome

Again, update quickly, otherwise I will have to keep a book [smile]

It's pretty good, at least it's not toxic for people like me who are confused about both sides.

Perfect, the Night Lord blends into Terra very well.

Not bad, minor flaws, does not affect use, looks good, I love watching it

Gua! Midnight Lords are mostly lolita fans! Fighting is fun! Nice! Love watching! I want to reward you with a wave of words!

Very nice, highly recommended