[Two vests + falling in love and killing each other + villain couple sweeping the world]
After Su Qinghan was bound to the Demon Lord System, he "worked hard to do evil" every day to extend his life:
Steal Shaolin secrets today, destroy the martial arts marriage tomorrow.
But the more evil she did, the more people praised her for her "deep understanding of justice" and "chivalrous heart".
Su Qinghan:? Did I fail too much as a villain?
Until she discovers that every flaw left behind will always be covered up by "coincidence", and every frame-up will always "accidentally" uncover the real culprit.
The man behind the scenes turned out to be the sickly fiancé Ye Xuanyi.
He was coughing up blood while cleaning up the mess for her: "As long as Madam is happy."
Later, there was a battle between good and evil, and Su Qinghan was forced to reveal his identity as the devil.
The Wulin leader shouted hoarsely: "Fairy Qinghan, why did you fall into the devil's path?!"
Ye Xuanyi walked slowly to her side, held her hand, and smiled softly to everyone in the world:
"Let me introduce you again. This is my wife, the mistress of Nether Palace."
"As for the demonic path you are talking about?"
When he raised his hand, thousands of swords were fired.
"This is me."
Reader comments
Chapter 1 is fast-paced: three fronts advance simultaneously, information is dense but not chaotic
Three clues were laid out in just two thousand words:
· Bright line: Bible stealing mission, three-day time limit, survival countdown
· Hidden line: Why did Wudang kill her? Did the father know? Mother's last words
· Heartline: Personality transformation from "honest and aboveboard" to "this moon is going to be stained with blood"
I can only see these lines? [Roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes]
I don't know if there are any others
The three lines are staggered and advanced without any redundancy. Especially at the end, "Who did my mother meet in the years before she died?" - The vendetta in the world suddenly turns into a suspense of life experience. Is this the biggest hook in the whole story? ? ? ? [Shy][shy][shy][shy]
Chapter 1 is fast-paced: three fronts advance simultaneously, information is dense but not chaotic Three clues were laid out in just two thousand words: · Bright line: Bible stealing mission, three-day time limit, survival countdown · Hidden line: Why did Wudang kill her? Did the father know? Mother's last words · Heartline: Personality transformation from "honest and aboveboard" to "this moon is going to be stained with blood" I can only see these lines? [Roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes] I don't know if there are any others The three lines are staggered and advanced without any redundancy. Especially at the end, "Who did my mother meet in the years before she died?" - The vendetta in the world suddenly turns into a suspense of life experience. Is this the biggest hook in the whole story? ? ? ? [Shy][shy][shy][shy]