The ratings have just come out [The heroine is stunningly beautiful + seduces people + does not change the original character + immersive + career-oriented heroine + is unfriendly to the original heroine]
The protagonist's three views do not represent the author's three views. If you don't like the second story, don't criticize it.
My first half of life Ling Ling ✓ Beautiful people are scheming ✓ Step by step Jade Tan ✓ Joyful Ode to Fan Shengmei ✓ The Legend of An Lingrong ✓ Returning Princess Zhihua ✓ Living Buddha Ji Gong Qiu Swan The Condor Heroes Guo Fu Prince Lanling Zheng Er Sun Xiaojing of Xia Family Three Thousand Golds Sun Xiaojing From South to North Yao Yuling Jade House Chun Tao Yao Do you know Mannia Changyue Jingming Ye Bingshang The Fairy Princess Ma Fuya (orders are welcome), I hope you all like it, your attention is the motivation for my writing! I have a lot of manuscripts in my collection. If you like it, you can add a bookshelf. If you don't like it, you can point it out. Thank you all.
Reader comments
It's okay, but the book is worth reading. Although the heroine is played in an immersive way, no matter what role she is, she turns into a gentle and tolerant character in the end. Especially after she really gets together with the male protagonist, there are various gentle descriptions and average personality transitions. In the end, she is still the same mold, which is annoying.
Let's give it three stars. The author said in the text that he would not change the original character, but in the end he changed it to a good wife and mother. The description of the "brilliant motherhood" after pregnancy in several worlds is too repetitive. It can appear several times in one chapter. The more you read, the more the same it becomes. It is not recommended to read the different worlds consecutively.
The role of Ling Ling is very novel. It is rare to see someone write about this character. The author's description of Ling Ling extends from the plot very cleverly, and is gentle and steady. I am very much looking forward to the author's subsequent plots and characters. I also hope that the author can choose more novel characters [Love] [Love] [Love]
It is hard for anyone to reject a woman who is gentle and considerate, does not fight or fight, is neither noisy nor quarrelsome, has outstanding abilities at work, and has good taste and understanding of life. It is hard for anyone to reject such a woman, especially a person who has read thousands of congratulatory letters and wants stability.
I like Ling Ling from the first world, the writing is very beautiful [Adoration][Adoration]
And Tang Jing has also stepped out, which is a very cool choice. Tang Jing can live a good life no matter where she is [Adoration][Adoration]
The author writes well. The character Ling Ling is rarely seen in You Are My First Half of My Life, and even You Are My First Half of My Life fan fiction is rare. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on, come on, come on. Anyone who wants to see the character will submit it to the author. [Send heart][Send heart]
The writing is pretty good, it's an immersive performance, the heroine has a God's perspective but doesn't act like a drama. It's not like they fall in love with each other as soon as they meet, but the male guests have a basic affection for the female protagonist. In addition, the female protagonist is very smart and can figure out the male character's heart step by step. This kind of step-by-step approach itself has the feeling of not making the wrong choice in the game with a perfect score. I respect the original character's character, especially the "morally flawed" female counterpart. I particularly like the feeling of having done bad things, but you just can't figure it out [heartfelt] Overall, the heroine has not been bullied in any real way. Luo Zijun quickly slipped into another world without a chance to confront Ling Ling. Tang Jing didn't stalk her after they broke up. Miao Ren's forced "punishment" was rewarded with ten times the positive feedback, so she didn't feel too aggrieved.
For some people, the reason why they feel "frustrated" is probably because the heroine's beauty is not a gold medal to avoid death, and it will not make people fall in love and lose their minds after just one glance. But what makes me happy is that the heroine uses her beauty and scheming to the extreme "with ease". God's perspective knows the chess game in advance, and works step by step to make every flag fall in the right place. There is no "spiritual victory" but real benefits are in hand.
The logic is rigorous, the steps of the strategy are smooth but not lengthy, the heroine is thoughtful and does not collapse the character, she is not a vase with nothing but beauty. I have seen too many fast-traveling heroines with nothing but a face, as if everything is fine with a face, and they don't put any thought into the strategy. The male protagonist who falls in love at first sight every day has no charm at all, he just feels like a pervert, and the plot writing is also greasy. . . This article is very well written. The male protagonists in each world have their own charms. The sexual tension between the male and female protagonists is also strong. It is very enjoyable.
She seems to be quiet and taciturn, but in fact she has a lot of troubles in her belly. She is noble and proud, and hates having no control over herself. She has a hidden meaning in every word she speaks, and she is so smart that she does not hesitate to use everything in order to survive. She is our heartthrob heroine Shen Ling [Adoration]
See how she binds the system, travels through various film and television worlds, helps the female supporting characters achieve life reversal, and ends their regrets in this life, and lives a happy life [Sending Hearts]
The article is very fluent and not just a cool article. Can the author Li Miaoren write Guo Fu after finishing the story? I want to read it [shy]
So far I have only watched Li Miaoren's Plane, and the overall impression is very good. However, there are two small regrets: first, there are too many descriptions of appearance, often in large paragraphs. Although it is understandable that it is to satisfy the readers' imagination of the character, it is still a bit complicated to read; second, in terms of the creation of the heroine, her "secret" eyes and mouth corners are described several times. It can be felt that the author wants to highlight her intelligence, but if used too much, it will be a bit deliberate.
Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and maybe my highlight will be other people's cute points.
I hope that the author will write better, more people will like it, and more will be added. After all, the current ratings are a bit unworthy of the author's writing [laughs]
After watching "Ode to Joy", every character in it is particularly vivid and three-dimensional.
The author will not judge the characters with subjective bias or colored glasses, nor will he deliberately discredit anyone based on his personal likes and dislikes.
The final destinations of the five girls are all satisfactory, and the ending of the extra chapter is not limited to simply having a good partner, but letting the little girls have their own careers, independent and bright.
The author especially listens to readers' suggestions, and I haven't seen any insulting words so far, which is really great!
I also want to see Xu Yingying, Jiang Yuyan, Tong Layue, Liu Wumei, Ma Xiangyun, Li Changru, Er Qing, Zhihua, Ye Bingshang... (◍＞◡＜◍)
It's great to watch. Both stories are super cute. My first half life is Ling Ling. The heroine started by changing herself, changing her personality and work attitude to make herself better. The beauty has a scheming mind and created an image of an innocent, lively, frank and lovely little palace maid, which made Prince Liu Qi feel the light. It's very beautiful.
So far I have only read the world of Ling Ling. The writing is very good. There is no Mary Sue description. The writing style is very simple! It's my favorite style. There's no awkward appearance! ! Big cheers for the author!
The details and environment are all there, as gentle as water, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is connected link by link. Except for the sloppy ending of the first story, the overall story is very good. (Actually, I haven't seen enough, Li Miaoren ꉂ ᳐˶'ᜊ'˶ ྀིಣ) Please update it quickly, I am so anxious that I am scratching my head and head.
The writing is very good and beautiful. Everyone has different preferences. This is normal. Nothing is perfect, so you can follow your own ideas. There is no need to impose other people's ideas.
This book is really good! ! I've read the Lingrong chapter several times. The character design is really nice and not OOC. It's a matter of course and I'm slowly falling in love with it. The author's writing is so good! Why was it taken off the shelves? There's no outstanding c-drama, right?
Damn, can you @me? Still updated? Will it be relisted? Where can I find you?
Beautiful! Great writing style! I just finished watching the first world, and the heroine is very charming! Just can you add a little more ambiguity~ It would be a bit clear to me, a carnivorous reader [shy]
It's very interesting. I like this article by Li Miaoren very much. The only drawback is that the number of chapters is a bit small. I hope you can keep writing. I will keep up with updates every day (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
It does, but it's too long.
The writing is okay
However, it looks rather frustrating and not suitable for me.
Leave a mark to remind yourself next time you come in.
It's so good that it's the first book?
Contributed by Ye Bingshang [Sending Hearts] It's so miserable for her on Douyin
When everyone thinks it is logical, the heartthrob has some scheming and methods. A normal person's thinking can be picked up and put down. The three views are correct and the description is multi-dimensional.
Very good, I like this kind of heroine who has brains and golden fingers and is not exaggerated
Good-looking articles are popping up like bamboo shoots after a rain.
Author, I have loved you for ten thousand years, your writing is very good! ! !
Very good, very good, a touch of gentle feeling [top post]
A very good book, with clear logic and well-founded facts. It is not a brainless text.
Five out of five, super nice, super nice
It's quite good. Li Miaoren's article is good... Ling Ling's is also good.
I quite like the heroine's character. Each world is integrated very naturally. The author's writing style is also good. Come on.
It's okay, but the book is worth reading. Although the heroine is played in an immersive way, no matter what role she is, she turns into a gentle and tolerant character in the end. Especially after she really gets together with the male protagonist, there are various gentle descriptions and average personality transitions. In the end, she is still the same mold, which is annoying. Let's give it three stars. The author said in the text that he would not change the original character, but in the end he changed it to a good wife and mother. The description of the "brilliant motherhood" after pregnancy in several worlds is too repetitive. It can appear several times in one chapter. The more you read, the more the same it becomes. It is not recommended to read the different worlds consecutively.
The role of Ling Ling is very novel. It is rare to see someone write about this character. The author's description of Ling Ling extends from the plot very cleverly, and is gentle and steady. I am very much looking forward to the author's subsequent plots and characters. I also hope that the author can choose more novel characters [Love] [Love] [Love] It is hard for anyone to reject a woman who is gentle and considerate, does not fight or fight, is neither noisy nor quarrelsome, has outstanding abilities at work, and has good taste and understanding of life. It is hard for anyone to reject such a woman, especially a person who has read thousands of congratulatory letters and wants stability.
I like Ling Ling from the first world, the writing is very beautiful [Adoration][Adoration] And Tang Jing has also stepped out, which is a very cool choice. Tang Jing can live a good life no matter where she is [Adoration][Adoration]
The author writes well. The character Ling Ling is rarely seen in You Are My First Half of My Life, and even You Are My First Half of My Life fan fiction is rare. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on, come on, come on. Anyone who wants to see the character will submit it to the author. [Send heart][Send heart]
The writing is pretty good, it's an immersive performance, the heroine has a God's perspective but doesn't act like a drama. It's not like they fall in love with each other as soon as they meet, but the male guests have a basic affection for the female protagonist. In addition, the female protagonist is very smart and can figure out the male character's heart step by step. This kind of step-by-step approach itself has the feeling of not making the wrong choice in the game with a perfect score. I respect the original character's character, especially the "morally flawed" female counterpart. I particularly like the feeling of having done bad things, but you just can't figure it out [heartfelt] Overall, the heroine has not been bullied in any real way. Luo Zijun quickly slipped into another world without a chance to confront Ling Ling. Tang Jing didn't stalk her after they broke up. Miao Ren's forced "punishment" was rewarded with ten times the positive feedback, so she didn't feel too aggrieved. For some people, the reason why they feel "frustrated" is probably because the heroine's beauty is not a gold medal to avoid death, and it will not make people fall in love and lose their minds after just one glance. But what makes me happy is that the heroine uses her beauty and scheming to the extreme "with ease". God's perspective knows the chess game in advance, and works step by step to make every flag fall in the right place. There is no "spiritual victory" but real benefits are in hand.
The logic is rigorous, the steps of the strategy are smooth but not lengthy, the heroine is thoughtful and does not collapse the character, she is not a vase with nothing but beauty. I have seen too many fast-traveling heroines with nothing but a face, as if everything is fine with a face, and they don't put any thought into the strategy. The male protagonist who falls in love at first sight every day has no charm at all, he just feels like a pervert, and the plot writing is also greasy. . . This article is very well written. The male protagonists in each world have their own charms. The sexual tension between the male and female protagonists is also strong. It is very enjoyable.
She seems to be quiet and taciturn, but in fact she has a lot of troubles in her belly. She is noble and proud, and hates having no control over herself. She has a hidden meaning in every word she speaks, and she is so smart that she does not hesitate to use everything in order to survive. She is our heartthrob heroine Shen Ling [Adoration] See how she binds the system, travels through various film and television worlds, helps the female supporting characters achieve life reversal, and ends their regrets in this life, and lives a happy life [Sending Hearts]
The article is very fluent and not just a cool article. Can the author Li Miaoren write Guo Fu after finishing the story? I want to read it [shy]
So far I have only watched Li Miaoren's Plane, and the overall impression is very good. However, there are two small regrets: first, there are too many descriptions of appearance, often in large paragraphs. Although it is understandable that it is to satisfy the readers' imagination of the character, it is still a bit complicated to read; second, in terms of the creation of the heroine, her "secret" eyes and mouth corners are described several times. It can be felt that the author wants to highlight her intelligence, but if used too much, it will be a bit deliberate. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and maybe my highlight will be other people's cute points. I hope that the author will write better, more people will like it, and more will be added. After all, the current ratings are a bit unworthy of the author's writing [laughs] After watching "Ode to Joy", every character in it is particularly vivid and three-dimensional. The author will not judge the characters with subjective bias or colored glasses, nor will he deliberately discredit anyone based on his personal likes and dislikes. The final destinations of the five girls are all satisfactory, and the ending of the extra chapter is not limited to simply having a good partner, but letting the little girls have their own careers, independent and bright. The author especially listens to readers' suggestions, and I haven't seen any insulting words so far, which is really great!
I also want to see Xu Yingying, Jiang Yuyan, Tong Layue, Liu Wumei, Ma Xiangyun, Li Changru, Er Qing, Zhihua, Ye Bingshang... (◍＞◡＜◍)
It's great to watch. Both stories are super cute. My first half life is Ling Ling. The heroine started by changing herself, changing her personality and work attitude to make herself better. The beauty has a scheming mind and created an image of an innocent, lively, frank and lovely little palace maid, which made Prince Liu Qi feel the light. It's very beautiful.
So far I have only read the world of Ling Ling. The writing is very good. There is no Mary Sue description. The writing style is very simple! It's my favorite style. There's no awkward appearance! ! Big cheers for the author!
The details and environment are all there, as gentle as water, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is connected link by link. Except for the sloppy ending of the first story, the overall story is very good. (Actually, I haven't seen enough, Li Miaoren ꉂ ᳐˶'ᜊ'˶ ྀིಣ) Please update it quickly, I am so anxious that I am scratching my head and head.
The writing is very good and beautiful. Everyone has different preferences. This is normal. Nothing is perfect, so you can follow your own ideas. There is no need to impose other people's ideas.
This book is really good! ! I've read the Lingrong chapter several times. The character design is really nice and not OOC. It's a matter of course and I'm slowly falling in love with it. The author's writing is so good! Why was it taken off the shelves? There's no outstanding c-drama, right? Damn, can you @me? Still updated? Will it be relisted? Where can I find you?
Beautiful! Great writing style! I just finished watching the first world, and the heroine is very charming! Just can you add a little more ambiguity~ It would be a bit clear to me, a carnivorous reader [shy]
It's very interesting. I like this article by Li Miaoren very much. The only drawback is that the number of chapters is a bit small. I hope you can keep writing. I will keep up with updates every day (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
It does, but it's too long.
The writing is okay However, it looks rather frustrating and not suitable for me. Leave a mark to remind yourself next time you come in.
It's so good that it's the first book?
Contributed by Ye Bingshang [Sending Hearts] It's so miserable for her on Douyin
When everyone thinks it is logical, the heartthrob has some scheming and methods. A normal person's thinking can be picked up and put down. The three views are correct and the description is multi-dimensional.
Very good, I like this kind of heroine who has brains and golden fingers and is not exaggerated
Good-looking articles are popping up like bamboo shoots after a rain.
Author, I have loved you for ten thousand years, your writing is very good! ! !
Very good, very good, a touch of gentle feeling [top post]
A very good book, with clear logic and well-founded facts. It is not a brainless text.
Five out of five, super nice, super nice
It's quite good. Li Miaoren's article is good... Ling Ling's is also good.
I quite like the heroine's character. Each world is integrated very naturally. The author's writing style is also good. Come on.