Honghuang: The Senior Disciple of the Chan School

Firstly, the hostility is too strong. I don't want to cultivate immortality. It's more like highlighting the protagonist's strong character. Secondly, fighting in front of outsiders is speechless. How much face have you made Sanqing lose? To put it bluntly, it's just a mindless and cool article. Hey

It feels pretty good, at least it's not mindless, and the description of cultivation is okay. When I open a sect later, I can have the feeling of being a powerful immortal. As the first disciple of the Chan Cult, I can later become a capable senior brother.

Daozu didn't even dare to kill the ancestral witch, how dare Sanqing? Pangu can come out

What is this mess? You said there was a ferocious beast. Didn't Hongjun destroy the ferocious beast? Where did the beast come from? Moreover, is it okay to divide the gourd after the first sermon? The timeline is a mess

The writing is super good, not stupid, especially the three clears create reality

I can only say that it's okay, but I'm too tired to read the punctuation marks. Two words, three words, and four words are jumping out. My eyes are tired and my heart is tired, so I stopped reading.

Even if you read two more fics, you still wouldn't write like this

It's hard to describe in one word

Edit randomly and write in a mess.

Anyone can ride on the protagonist's head and shit. Anyone who provokes the protagonist will be punished by the protagonist. It's hilarious.