The Everyday Life of a New Mom, Starting from Scratch

This book is suitable for calming down and reading carefully. It is a story about a gentle person. This is a young author trying his best to express. From a boy to a girl, the changes in the family environment make the protagonist feel conflicted and self-blame, and constantly ask himself. This is a journey after rain and clear skies, and a cup of bitter but fragrant warm tea. There is nothing earth-shattering, and there are no strange things. Some are just a pregnant mother, looking for the ordinary thing called happiness and beauty.

The writing is quite delicate. It is most likely that AI was not used for handwriting, and the language is relatively simple. Overall, it is a relatively novel and thoughtful work. Let's talk about why I didn't give it five stars. ① The Japanese light novel style of the article is too obvious (the psychological description is too detailed, and memories are often inserted in the beginning to establish the character, and I often like to talk about a few irrelevant contents as narration). It can be reflected in the character design. The protagonist is indeed gentle, but he is always indecisive and willful. Not to mention boys who are not like this, my best friend, other friends in life, and myself are not like this🤦 It just so happens that the original owner is such a good girl, but he is criticized by someone who doesn't know how to love. The original owner's boyfriend and mother are so good, but the protagonist always likes to show off his temper. If the protagonist is a female, I won't say anything because some characters are indeed different in different genders, but the protagonist just gives me a willful, want-and-want feeling. On the one hand, he forces Jiang Chen's sister to make her not hate him, and on the other hand, he always demands from others and is often heartless. In short, if I see such a spoiled, controlling and egotistical person in my life, I will definitely stay away... 🙂 But the most important problem is the whereabouts of the original owner. The original owner is quite happy to be replaced by a top guy in life. I would feel very uncomfortable if he becomes single like this. ②The limitation of the first person perspective is caused by the previous point, because I don't like the character of the protagonist, but the perspective of the article is relatively narrow, and I have to face the first perspective, which cannot be brought in. Later, it is more comfortable to read Jiang Chen's perspective. In fact, looking at this dialectically, it is true that the first person enhances the sense of immersion, but I personally prefer third-person novels. 🤔 ③The subject matter is really novel. I have read a lot of bianwen (bianbai, biandan, bianwen) on multiple platforms. Biandan is usually because you can't accept boys at all, so in fact, biandan is slightly frivolous, and there are almost no biandan who prefer to change to marry. But the protagonist is dressed like a pregnant college student. Whether she plays the original protagonist in the front or reveals herself later, the interaction with the original protagonist's boyfriend is a bit ambiguous. It doesn't feel like the personality is like a girl. Normal boys and girls should have a sense of boundaries towards strangers. I feel that this kind of "changing orders" is not pure enough, and I am a little concerned about it. 🙂 ④ It may be a shortcoming caused by the lack of writing. I always feel that one second the protagonist is sad about spring and autumn, and the next second he can play games. One second he is worried about the future and role playing, and the next second he is discussing whether fruits can be used for hot pot. If this is the character design, I reserve ① point of view. If this is what the author wants to express, to be honest, I feel a bit fragmented. Chapter transitions are not natural enough. In other words, the ability to grasp the rhythm of the plot needs to be improved. In short, that's it. If you are a newcomer who doesn't read much online articles, this book can be regarded as a kind of food. If you are a person who has read more than 20,000 hours on multiple platforms and read 2k+ books, I think my suggestions have a certain reference value. Sorry, I think I'm just speaking from my heart, purely subjective, and adhering to the principle "Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables." If anyone has different opinions, you are right if Wu is not the second and the article is not the first. Long live understanding, I can't argue.

The emotional writing is very delicate, but both Jiang Chen and the protagonist's mother are too tolerant of the heroine. The original body is not reborn after death. Is it so easy to accept a good girl being replaced by another man? If there is an if line of be, Jiang Chen resents the protagonist after finding out that his girlfriend has been taken away from him, but he has to bear everything for his original girlfriend and children. The protagonist sees Jiang Chen in pain every day because of her appearance and ruining his future for her selfish desire to feel love, and the mother also sheds tears every day because of the disappearance of her daughter. The protagonist lives in pain every day, plus a little self-blame and a little jealousy of "it turns out Gu Lulu is so loved", it will feel delicious😏😏😏 I accidentally wrote so much because of my divergent thinking. I hope the author can deal with the problem of how the protagonist possessed Gu Lulu in the future.

The writing style is very good. Although the content is about daily life in college and the plot is relatively simple at present, it has a literary flavor. I feel that the author should be someone who likes to read some Japanese novels?

The writing is good, and the emotional scenes are pretty good, but I guess I won't change my marriage. If I write the story about my mother well, it's a potential stock.

It's very good. The plot is very interesting and emotional. The writing is also very good. The most important thing is that the logic is relatively strict. I found out that the heroine's personality was very strange after she passed through the soul. I thought it was another logical problem due to the author's limited cognitive perspective. After reading it later, I realized that there was a reason and it was intentional in the plot. The book's logic is self-consistent. It feels really good. Otherwise, it would be easy to make people feel that it is a drama, which would be very confusing. Secondly, the strong Japanese light flavor is also a major feature. It is different from most domestic online articles and does not fall into the problem of poor Japanese imitation. In short, it is very unique. Finally, the thoughts expressed in the article and the delicate description of emotions are really good. I hope that I can do my best to support and encourage the author. I hope this book can be promoted to a certain extent. To be honest, the height of this work should not stop at tomatoes. Even as a physical book, it is an excellent work.

The heroine is so gentle, so gentle, so gentle

The author is definitely a woman. I'll go, it's like a diary. The tone and narrative are really similar to my sister's diary. It's so filling.

It's rare to come across this kind of gentle and delicate transgender literature, especially when you're pregnant. It's like a gentle cool night at the end of the world, calm and beautiful.

I just read Chapter 13, so I'm just telling you what I've seen so far. The subject matter and content are novel. After all, in transformation novels, motherhood usually ends at a later stage. The style of this book is quite special, with a Japanese feel, but the details are somewhat sparse, and part of the content is briefly mentioned, such as Gu Lulu's adaptation process to new interpersonal relationships, a new body, and a new life after her body was taken away. It is a pity that these are not described in detail. The author may not think it is important, but readers generally read these.