(Change order + first person + daily life + single mother)
A teenager accidentally turns into another pregnant teenager.
Under the pressure of countless problems, the mother finally decided to give birth to the child and raise it.
Reader comments
This book is suitable for calming down and reading carefully. It is a story about a gentle person. This is a young author trying his best to express. From a boy to a girl, the changes in the family environment make the protagonist feel conflicted and self-blame, and constantly ask himself. This is a journey after rain and clear skies, and a cup of bitter but fragrant warm tea. There is nothing earth-shattering, and there are no strange things. Some are just a pregnant mother, looking for the ordinary thing called happiness and beauty.
The writing is quite delicate. It is most likely that AI was not used for handwriting, and the language is relatively simple. Overall, it is a relatively novel and thoughtful work. Tell me why I didn't give it five stars.
①The Japanese light novel style of the article is too obvious (the psychological description is too detailed, memories are often inserted in the beginning to establish the character, and I often like to talk about a few irrelevant contents as narration). It can be reflected in the character design. The protagonist is indeed gentle, but he is always indecisive and willful. Not to mention boys who are not like this, my best friend, other friends in life, and myself will not be like this [face covering]
It just so happens that the original owner is such a good girl, but he is criticized by someone who doesn't know how to love. The original owner's boyfriend and mother are so good, but the protagonist always likes to show off his temper. If the protagonist is a female, I won't say anything because some characters have different perceptions according to different genders, but the protagonist just gives me a willful, want-and-want feeling. On the one hand, he forces Jiang Chen's sister to make her not hate him, and on the other hand, he always demands from others and is often heartless. In short, if I see such a spoiled, controlling and egotistical person in my life, I will definitely stay away... [Smile]
But the most important problem is the whereabouts of the original owner. It's a good idea for the original owner to have his life replaced by a top account like this. I would feel very uncomfortable if he just became single like this.
② The limitation of the first person perspective is caused by the previous point, because I don't like the character of the protagonist, but the perspective of the article is relatively narrow, and I have to face the first perspective, which cannot be brought in. Later, it is more comfortable to read Jiang Chen's perspective. In fact, looking at this dialectically, it is true that the first person enhances the sense of immersion, but I personally prefer third-person novels. [Thinking]
③The subject matter is really novel. I have read a lot of Bianwen (bianbai, biandan, bianwen) on multiple platforms. Biandan is usually caused by a complete inability to accept boys, so in fact, biandan is slightly frivolous, and almost no biandan is biased towards changing to marry. But the protagonist is dressed like a pregnant college student. Whether she plays the original protagonist in the front or reveals herself later, the interaction with the original protagonist's boyfriend is a bit ambiguous. It doesn't feel like the personality is like a girl. Normal boys and girls should have a sense of boundaries towards strangers. I feel that this kind of "changing orders" is not pure enough, and I am a little concerned about it. [Smile]
④ It may be a shortcoming caused by the lack of writing. I always feel that one second the protagonist is sad for spring and autumn, and the next second he can play a game. One second he is worried about the future and playing a role, and the next second he is discussing whether fruits can be used for hot pot. If this is the character design, I reserve the opinion ①. If this is what the author wants to express, to be honest, I feel a bit fragmented, and the chapter transition is not natural enough. In other words, the ability to grasp the rhythm of the plot needs to be improved.
In short, that's it. If you are a newbie who doesn't read much online articles, this book can be regarded as a kind of food. If you are a person who has read more than 20,000 hours on multiple platforms and read 2k+ books, I think my suggestions have a certain reference value.
I'm sorry, I think I'm just speaking from my heart, purely subjective, adhering to the principle "Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables." If anyone has a different opinion, you are right if Wu is not the second and the article is not the first. Long live understanding, I can't argue.
The emotional writing is very delicate, but both Jiang Chen and the protagonist's mother are too tolerant of the heroine. The original body is not reborn after death. Is it so easy to accept a good girl being replaced by another man?
If there is an if line of be, Jiang Chen resents the protagonist after discovering that his girlfriend has been taken away from him, but he has to bear everything for his original girlfriend and children. The protagonist sees Jiang Chen in pain every day because of her appearance and ruining his own future for her selfish desire to feel love, and the mother also sheds tears every day because of the disappearance of her daughter. The protagonist lives in pain every day, and if you add a little self-blame and a little jealousy of "it turns out Gu Lulu is loved so much", it will feel delicious [smile][smile][smile]
I accidentally wrote so much because of my divergent thinking. I hope the author can deal with the issue of how the protagonist possesses Gu Lulu in the future.
The writing style is very good. Although the content is about daily life in college and the plot is relatively simple at present, it has a literary flavor. I feel that the author should be someone who likes to read some Japanese novels?
The writing is good, and the emotional scenes are pretty good, but I guess I won't change my marriage. If I write the story about my mother well, it's a potential stock.
It's very good. The plot is very interesting and emotional. The writing is also very good. The most important thing is that the logic is relatively strict. I found out that the heroine's personality was very strange after she passed through the soul. I thought it was another logical problem due to the author's limited cognitive perspective. After reading it later, I realized that there was a reason and it was intentional in the plot. The book's logic is self-consistent. It feels really good. Otherwise, it would be easy to make people feel that it is a drama, which would be very confusing. Secondly, the strong Japanese light flavor is also a major feature. It is different from most domestic online articles and does not fall into the problem of poor Japanese imitation. In short, it is very unique. Finally, the thoughts expressed in the article and the delicate description of emotions are really good. I hope that I can do my best to support and encourage the author. I hope this book can be promoted to a certain extent. To be honest, the height of this work should not stop at tomatoes. Even as a physical book, it is an excellent work.
The heroine is so gentle, so gentle, so gentle
It's rare to come across this kind of gentle and delicate transgender literature, especially when you're pregnant. It's like a gentle cool night at the end of the world, calm and beautiful.
The author is definitely a woman. I'll go, it's like a diary. The tone and narrative are really similar to my sister's diary. It's so filling.
This book is really well written. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into writing it.
The Japanese smell is very strong, but not annoying. This narrative style is very natural, and I personally like it. I would like to see the male protagonist accept it quickly, but there are some ups and downs, but cl is still chasing me
I just read Chapter 13, so I'm just telling you what I've seen so far. The subject matter and content are novel. After all, in transformation novels, motherhood usually ends at a later stage. The style of this book is quite special, with a Japanese feel, but the details are somewhat sparse, and part of the content is briefly mentioned, such as Gu Lulu's adaptation process to new interpersonal relationships, a new body, and a new life after her body was taken away. It is a pity that these are not described in detail. The author may not think it is important, but readers generally read these.
The author is suitable for writing stream of consciousness
The writing is really detailed and delicate, but there is one point I want to know, did the protagonist take away Gu Lulu? [Cover face]
A Japanese flavor
I said it's really beautiful. Do you understand?
The person who listens to the story will eventually become the person telling the story, and the person telling the story will inevitably become the person in the story.
Soft, very light, but also a bit heavy
Needless to say, this is a book that is suitable for emotional people and needs to be read calmly. The author writes so well.
Surprisingly, it's not bad. The overall atmosphere is depressing, but also quite real. Keep up the good work, author!ヾ(^▽^*)))
I saw a new theme again! !
Become a single mother
This subject is very interesting
I hope the author can finish it!
Support support
The writing is very good and beautiful.
So far so good
The writing style is very good and the writing is very delicate.
It's still too difficult for three people to dance
A very nice book
Sincere feelings and smooth writing
Really, really good, look.
Like it, hee hee.
Beautiful, no need to say more
On Tomato, it has surpassed 90% of books
I'm so confused and looking forward to the author's follow-up creations.
This book is suitable for calming down and reading carefully. It is a story about a gentle person. This is a young author trying his best to express. From a boy to a girl, the changes in the family environment make the protagonist feel conflicted and self-blame, and constantly ask himself. This is a journey after rain and clear skies, and a cup of bitter but fragrant warm tea. There is nothing earth-shattering, and there are no strange things. Some are just a pregnant mother, looking for the ordinary thing called happiness and beauty.
The writing is quite delicate. It is most likely that AI was not used for handwriting, and the language is relatively simple. Overall, it is a relatively novel and thoughtful work. Tell me why I didn't give it five stars. ①The Japanese light novel style of the article is too obvious (the psychological description is too detailed, memories are often inserted in the beginning to establish the character, and I often like to talk about a few irrelevant contents as narration). It can be reflected in the character design. The protagonist is indeed gentle, but he is always indecisive and willful. Not to mention boys who are not like this, my best friend, other friends in life, and myself will not be like this [face covering] It just so happens that the original owner is such a good girl, but he is criticized by someone who doesn't know how to love. The original owner's boyfriend and mother are so good, but the protagonist always likes to show off his temper. If the protagonist is a female, I won't say anything because some characters have different perceptions according to different genders, but the protagonist just gives me a willful, want-and-want feeling. On the one hand, he forces Jiang Chen's sister to make her not hate him, and on the other hand, he always demands from others and is often heartless. In short, if I see such a spoiled, controlling and egotistical person in my life, I will definitely stay away... [Smile] But the most important problem is the whereabouts of the original owner. It's a good idea for the original owner to have his life replaced by a top account like this. I would feel very uncomfortable if he just became single like this. ② The limitation of the first person perspective is caused by the previous point, because I don't like the character of the protagonist, but the perspective of the article is relatively narrow, and I have to face the first perspective, which cannot be brought in. Later, it is more comfortable to read Jiang Chen's perspective. In fact, looking at this dialectically, it is true that the first person enhances the sense of immersion, but I personally prefer third-person novels. [Thinking] ③The subject matter is really novel. I have read a lot of Bianwen (bianbai, biandan, bianwen) on multiple platforms. Biandan is usually caused by a complete inability to accept boys, so in fact, biandan is slightly frivolous, and almost no biandan is biased towards changing to marry. But the protagonist is dressed like a pregnant college student. Whether she plays the original protagonist in the front or reveals herself later, the interaction with the original protagonist's boyfriend is a bit ambiguous. It doesn't feel like the personality is like a girl. Normal boys and girls should have a sense of boundaries towards strangers. I feel that this kind of "changing orders" is not pure enough, and I am a little concerned about it. [Smile] ④ It may be a shortcoming caused by the lack of writing. I always feel that one second the protagonist is sad for spring and autumn, and the next second he can play a game. One second he is worried about the future and playing a role, and the next second he is discussing whether fruits can be used for hot pot. If this is the character design, I reserve the opinion ①. If this is what the author wants to express, to be honest, I feel a bit fragmented, and the chapter transition is not natural enough. In other words, the ability to grasp the rhythm of the plot needs to be improved. In short, that's it. If you are a newbie who doesn't read much online articles, this book can be regarded as a kind of food. If you are a person who has read more than 20,000 hours on multiple platforms and read 2k+ books, I think my suggestions have a certain reference value. I'm sorry, I think I'm just speaking from my heart, purely subjective, adhering to the principle "Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables." If anyone has a different opinion, you are right if Wu is not the second and the article is not the first. Long live understanding, I can't argue.
The emotional writing is very delicate, but both Jiang Chen and the protagonist's mother are too tolerant of the heroine. The original body is not reborn after death. Is it so easy to accept a good girl being replaced by another man? If there is an if line of be, Jiang Chen resents the protagonist after discovering that his girlfriend has been taken away from him, but he has to bear everything for his original girlfriend and children. The protagonist sees Jiang Chen in pain every day because of her appearance and ruining his own future for her selfish desire to feel love, and the mother also sheds tears every day because of the disappearance of her daughter. The protagonist lives in pain every day, and if you add a little self-blame and a little jealousy of "it turns out Gu Lulu is loved so much", it will feel delicious [smile][smile][smile] I accidentally wrote so much because of my divergent thinking. I hope the author can deal with the issue of how the protagonist possesses Gu Lulu in the future.
The writing style is very good. Although the content is about daily life in college and the plot is relatively simple at present, it has a literary flavor. I feel that the author should be someone who likes to read some Japanese novels?
The writing is good, and the emotional scenes are pretty good, but I guess I won't change my marriage. If I write the story about my mother well, it's a potential stock.
It's very good. The plot is very interesting and emotional. The writing is also very good. The most important thing is that the logic is relatively strict. I found out that the heroine's personality was very strange after she passed through the soul. I thought it was another logical problem due to the author's limited cognitive perspective. After reading it later, I realized that there was a reason and it was intentional in the plot. The book's logic is self-consistent. It feels really good. Otherwise, it would be easy to make people feel that it is a drama, which would be very confusing. Secondly, the strong Japanese light flavor is also a major feature. It is different from most domestic online articles and does not fall into the problem of poor Japanese imitation. In short, it is very unique. Finally, the thoughts expressed in the article and the delicate description of emotions are really good. I hope that I can do my best to support and encourage the author. I hope this book can be promoted to a certain extent. To be honest, the height of this work should not stop at tomatoes. Even as a physical book, it is an excellent work.
The heroine is so gentle, so gentle, so gentle
It's rare to come across this kind of gentle and delicate transgender literature, especially when you're pregnant. It's like a gentle cool night at the end of the world, calm and beautiful.
The author is definitely a woman. I'll go, it's like a diary. The tone and narrative are really similar to my sister's diary. It's so filling.
This book is really well written. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into writing it.
The Japanese smell is very strong, but not annoying. This narrative style is very natural, and I personally like it. I would like to see the male protagonist accept it quickly, but there are some ups and downs, but cl is still chasing me
I just read Chapter 13, so I'm just telling you what I've seen so far. The subject matter and content are novel. After all, in transformation novels, motherhood usually ends at a later stage. The style of this book is quite special, with a Japanese feel, but the details are somewhat sparse, and part of the content is briefly mentioned, such as Gu Lulu's adaptation process to new interpersonal relationships, a new body, and a new life after her body was taken away. It is a pity that these are not described in detail. The author may not think it is important, but readers generally read these.
The author is suitable for writing stream of consciousness
The writing is really detailed and delicate, but there is one point I want to know, did the protagonist take away Gu Lulu? [Cover face]
A Japanese flavor
I said it's really beautiful. Do you understand?
The person who listens to the story will eventually become the person telling the story, and the person telling the story will inevitably become the person in the story.
Soft, very light, but also a bit heavy
Needless to say, this is a book that is suitable for emotional people and needs to be read calmly. The author writes so well.
Surprisingly, it's not bad. The overall atmosphere is depressing, but also quite real. Keep up the good work, author!ヾ(^▽^*)))
I saw a new theme again! ! Become a single mother This subject is very interesting I hope the author can finish it! Support support
The writing is very good and beautiful.
So far so good
The writing style is very good and the writing is very delicate. It's still too difficult for three people to dance
A very nice book
Sincere feelings and smooth writing
Really, really good, look. Like it, hee hee.
Beautiful, no need to say more
On Tomato, it has surpassed 90% of books
I'm so confused and looking forward to the author's follow-up creations.