(The ratings have just come out) [Multiple female protagonists] [Anti-routine] [The protagonist is decent, not brainless] [Relaxed and happy] [Slower and hotter] [Cultivation as an immortal is not only about fighting and killing, but also about being humane and worldly]
Traveling through time inexplicably?
A good news and a bad news.
The good news is that he has become a child of luck and can have a beautiful master, a sect's genius, a god sister and a series of other beauties.
Bad news is the child of luck in villain novels.
Lin Qiuhan was shocked. Isn't this pure leek? Nowadays, who is a good person who would be willing to be the son of luck? Only villains are popular, right?
Lin Qiuhan felt like crying when he thought of the cruel, self-centered, destined villain with an invincible system, and then looked at his own useless tag system.
But fortunately, the child of luck is not in vain, at least the luck of heaven is with him. Lin Qiuhan decided to strengthen himself before the destiny villain appeared. He believed that as long as his luck was high enough, he might not be unable to compete with the opponent.
But enhancing luck is not easy, so he made a decision to go against his ancestors and capture the Daughter of Luck as much as possible.
As for the other children of luck... Just don't hold back.
Reader comments
Very nice! Very top!
It's easy to forget the characters in fast-paced novels. I think the pace of this book is just right, a little too slow, and the characters are full and three-dimensional. And some detailed explanations are also in place, enriching the world view and various settings.
The logic of the plot is smooth, and it will not be forced to show off in order to deliberately promote events. The protagonist has his own thoughts and opinions.
No poisonous points have been found so far, and it feels very comfortable to listen to the book! Nowadays, AI novels are so popular, it's so hard to find one that suits your taste!
The author will update soon! ! !
Good. It's my type
The protagonist still grabs the opportunities of other protagonists. On the surface, the protagonist is one, but the other side is different. The women will accept it, and the men will seize the opportunity. This is the opposite of the routine [face covering] Others say that the protagonist is good and the protagonist is stumbling behind the scenes, and they are very high-minded. In essence, it is still refined egoism. Compared with other villain novels, it is nothing more than more hypocritical [vomit][vomit][vomit]
The writing is quite good, there is no very poisonous or brainless plot, but the pace is relatively slow. Maybe I am used to reading fast-paced books. The heroine hopes that there will be more descriptions in the book, otherwise I would feel that it would be a pity.
Yes, it suits my taste. I have long wanted to read this kind of novel about the son of destiny who is a villain. I have read a book about the same type of white-haired Tiandao Stone before, and this one is much better. It seems to have a brain text, but there are a few points that I don't like. The first one is that I think it is a good habit in the world of immortality to not mind speculating others with the greatest malice, especially in brain stories, but the protagonist lacks this, I hope in the future To complete the story, I was not very satisfied with the protagonist's reaction when he knew that his future fiancée wanted the protagonist's biggest opportunity. I thought it would be better to guess that the previous concern was an act and then be more vigilant and analyze it more, instead of just passing it off. The second point was that I couldn't accept the real name of the lucky chance encounter when they met by chance. As a result, the real name was reported, and the impression dropped a bit. When I saw it later, I felt that it didn't matter what name I gave, so I hope the author would change it to no registration or pseudonym, otherwise it felt like the foreshadowing was quite good. The third point is that the protagonist is a bit merciful, but not to the level of the Virgin. The protagonist has always said that he should have less contact with the children of luck, but to tell the truth to the boss lady, the impression is very bad. And the receptionist at the Zhenbao Pavilion, I hope not to do it again This happened. In the world of immortality, it is normal for a mortal to die. People who are kind and soft-hearted cannot go far. In the end, I felt that the protagonist was not ruthless enough. Also, the author described the children of destiny other than the protagonist as smart and positive, which is good, but I hope they will all go offline in the end. I originally wanted to deduct one star, but thinking about the history of the book, I decided to encourage the author. Overall, this book is very good, and I recommend everyone to read it.
Let me give you five stars first. I watched this a long time ago. The son of fate in a villain story [laughs evilly] But you still have a system. It's so fun. As long as the plot is not bad or outrageous, I will keep following you if you keep updating.
Give it 5 stars. It seems to be good so far. The character portrayal is relatively average. You can add a few more scenes for the heroines, especially the remnant soul. Don't always want to make friends with or escape from the children of destiny. I think it can be properly fought. Mainly because in the later stage, if it is really against the big villain, I prefer that the protagonist can have more children of destiny alone. It will be a bit messy. However, the author's setting is very novel. It is a villain novel with a counter-routine. The plot is also quite interesting. However, the portrayal of some brainless villains can be less, and then they can arrange system upgrades or something, or have more tags, or change other people's tags and change them to different colors, which can be divided into different prices. It doesn't seem to have any bad points at first. I hope the author will continue to write more and not stop working harder to finish this book. I think this book currently has too few words and has a low rating. I can't see the author on Tomato recommendations. Maybe try updating 3 chapters a day, but then don't write Jackie Chan Aotian Shuangwen. I hope the author can write this book well [smile]
Counter-routine, interesting!
Interesting! But not much! !
It's very well written, has no shortcomings, and is logically coherent. The villain only appeared three years later. At this rate, it would be at least a hundred chapters later, right? It's better to just go and collect it. [Laughing]
Although the subject matter is just a variation of the villain novel, the author's writing is still acceptable. The protagonist's current idea is to find a few more Daughters of Luck to fight against the villain without offending other Sons of Luck. But there are a few small problems.
One is that apart from the protagonist, I have only written one Son of Luck, and there are already at least four Daughters of Luck. If there are too many characters in the later period, I am afraid that the author will not be able to grasp it and they will be ruined. The other is that although the protagonist keeps complaining that Ye Lingtian causes trouble no matter where he goes, the author's writing style probably does not intend to turn him into a passerby or an enemy. So, I hope the author can grasp the scale of whether he should be a friend, brother, or younger brother.
[Laughing evilly]
[laughing evilly]
Do you think it's over? No not yet. [Laughing evilly]
Hee~
I've read so many villain articles on Tomato. This book is also considered a relatively new one. Give it a five-star support.
✭✩✩✩✩
I don't know why it gets shorter and shorter the more I watch it.
The writing is very nice, I beg the author not to stop updating [laughs awkwardly] [laughs awkwardly] [please update more] [like] [laughs]
The writing is very good. It must be updated continuously. It definitely has potential [laughs][like][like][like]
The writing is very detailed. I haven't read a book so carefully in a long time. There are many wonderful moments that are really hard to hold back [face covering]. I won't say much, but it is a good book that suits my taste and allows me to follow more chapters! [Like][Like][Like][Like]
I've finished reading it, and it seems pretty good so far. It can be seen that the author wants to write a protagonist that is different from other Luck Child or villain stories on Yangshizi. The villain hasn't shown up yet, so you can observe
8 Points, good grass, but the writer's pace can be speeded up. I have read many novels before and the author will slow down the pace, and then it will be a bit delayed. There is still a long time before Wei Changsheng appears three years later, and the first breaking point is delayed a bit long.
It's great. I've only read two books about the son of fate who travels through time and becomes a villain of destiny.
At present, I have more than 70 chapters. The subject matter is novel, but the overall pace is slow. As the author said, it is slow to heat up. Personally, I feel good about it. The plot is currently relatively bland and there are no highlight moments, so I give it four stars.
It's okay, it's worth 7 or 8 points. There is too little updated content at the moment. It feels like the big villain will have to appear in another hundred chapters. Moreover, the female protagonist of the family, Mu, has not appeared. The pace feels a bit delayed.
This book is good
It's written very logically
Much better than the traditional villain flow or luck flow
The rhythm is also good
I have finished reading 85 chapters so far. It is an anti-routine system of cultivating immortals. The protagonist behaves quite decently. There are many female protagonists, but they seem to be classic early stages of development, middle stages of emotional development, and later stages of relationship confirmation or ending. The point deduction is for the villain in the family who wrote six or seven chapters around sixty or seven chapters.
I came here from your last book, don't let me feed you to death again.
Don't turn off the flames, author. I really like the image of this protagonist.
The writing is very good, the plot is fun, and the protagonist is very smart [Like] [Please update]
It's quite interesting, but the pace is a bit slow at the moment. I feel like the author could speed up the pace a bit [Blow kiss]
This is an excellent anti-"villain system" novel. I hope the author will not fall ill in the middle and later stages of the novel.
Not a cool article, slow pace
Nowadays, the more I write online articles, the more I go back. The book shortage is over, and the Internet literary circle is declining. I asked my friends, and they also felt it [face covering]
Nowadays, most books are boring in the early stages and interesting in the early stage, and then after this period, they immediately become boring. This book almost falls into this category. There are very few online articles that are only boring for a few chapters occasionally, and then become interesting again immediately.
This is one of the best novels of this type that I have ever read. The narrative is better, but why does it feel like the author is a bit of a lolita?
The logic is clear and the plot is reasonable. It seems that there are no poisonous points yet, which makes people feel comfortable to watch. Of course, there are relatively few highlights and it is very dull, but it can make people watch it.
The writing is quite interesting. I hope the author has sufficient reasons for accepting the harem. Don't just accept a girl without thinking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
I have read the whole chapter so far. The content is quite interesting. I just hope there won't be too many harems [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
The routine is okay, it's the type I like
I think it's pretty good, why is the rating so low?
Very nice! Very top! It's easy to forget the characters in fast-paced novels. I think the pace of this book is just right, a little too slow, and the characters are full and three-dimensional. And some detailed explanations are also in place, enriching the world view and various settings. The logic of the plot is smooth, and it will not be forced to show off in order to deliberately promote events. The protagonist has his own thoughts and opinions. No poisonous points have been found so far, and it feels very comfortable to listen to the book! Nowadays, AI novels are so popular, it's so hard to find one that suits your taste! The author will update soon! ! !
Good. It's my type The protagonist still grabs the opportunities of other protagonists. On the surface, the protagonist is one, but the other side is different. The women will accept it, and the men will seize the opportunity. This is the opposite of the routine [face covering] Others say that the protagonist is good and the protagonist is stumbling behind the scenes, and they are very high-minded. In essence, it is still refined egoism. Compared with other villain novels, it is nothing more than more hypocritical [vomit][vomit][vomit]
The writing is quite good, there is no very poisonous or brainless plot, but the pace is relatively slow. Maybe I am used to reading fast-paced books. The heroine hopes that there will be more descriptions in the book, otherwise I would feel that it would be a pity.
Yes, it suits my taste. I have long wanted to read this kind of novel about the son of destiny who is a villain. I have read a book about the same type of white-haired Tiandao Stone before, and this one is much better. It seems to have a brain text, but there are a few points that I don't like. The first one is that I think it is a good habit in the world of immortality to not mind speculating others with the greatest malice, especially in brain stories, but the protagonist lacks this, I hope in the future To complete the story, I was not very satisfied with the protagonist's reaction when he knew that his future fiancée wanted the protagonist's biggest opportunity. I thought it would be better to guess that the previous concern was an act and then be more vigilant and analyze it more, instead of just passing it off. The second point was that I couldn't accept the real name of the lucky chance encounter when they met by chance. As a result, the real name was reported, and the impression dropped a bit. When I saw it later, I felt that it didn't matter what name I gave, so I hope the author would change it to no registration or pseudonym, otherwise it felt like the foreshadowing was quite good. The third point is that the protagonist is a bit merciful, but not to the level of the Virgin. The protagonist has always said that he should have less contact with the children of luck, but to tell the truth to the boss lady, the impression is very bad. And the receptionist at the Zhenbao Pavilion, I hope not to do it again This happened. In the world of immortality, it is normal for a mortal to die. People who are kind and soft-hearted cannot go far. In the end, I felt that the protagonist was not ruthless enough. Also, the author described the children of destiny other than the protagonist as smart and positive, which is good, but I hope they will all go offline in the end. I originally wanted to deduct one star, but thinking about the history of the book, I decided to encourage the author. Overall, this book is very good, and I recommend everyone to read it.
Let me give you five stars first. I watched this a long time ago. The son of fate in a villain story [laughs evilly] But you still have a system. It's so fun. As long as the plot is not bad or outrageous, I will keep following you if you keep updating.
Give it 5 stars. It seems to be good so far. The character portrayal is relatively average. You can add a few more scenes for the heroines, especially the remnant soul. Don't always want to make friends with or escape from the children of destiny. I think it can be properly fought. Mainly because in the later stage, if it is really against the big villain, I prefer that the protagonist can have more children of destiny alone. It will be a bit messy. However, the author's setting is very novel. It is a villain novel with a counter-routine. The plot is also quite interesting. However, the portrayal of some brainless villains can be less, and then they can arrange system upgrades or something, or have more tags, or change other people's tags and change them to different colors, which can be divided into different prices. It doesn't seem to have any bad points at first. I hope the author will continue to write more and not stop working harder to finish this book. I think this book currently has too few words and has a low rating. I can't see the author on Tomato recommendations. Maybe try updating 3 chapters a day, but then don't write Jackie Chan Aotian Shuangwen. I hope the author can write this book well [smile]
Counter-routine, interesting! Interesting! But not much! !
It's very well written, has no shortcomings, and is logically coherent. The villain only appeared three years later. At this rate, it would be at least a hundred chapters later, right? It's better to just go and collect it. [Laughing]
Although the subject matter is just a variation of the villain novel, the author's writing is still acceptable. The protagonist's current idea is to find a few more Daughters of Luck to fight against the villain without offending other Sons of Luck. But there are a few small problems. One is that apart from the protagonist, I have only written one Son of Luck, and there are already at least four Daughters of Luck. If there are too many characters in the later period, I am afraid that the author will not be able to grasp it and they will be ruined. The other is that although the protagonist keeps complaining that Ye Lingtian causes trouble no matter where he goes, the author's writing style probably does not intend to turn him into a passerby or an enemy. So, I hope the author can grasp the scale of whether he should be a friend, brother, or younger brother.
[Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Do you think it's over? No not yet. [Laughing evilly] Hee~ I've read so many villain articles on Tomato. This book is also considered a relatively new one. Give it a five-star support. ✭✩✩✩✩ I don't know why it gets shorter and shorter the more I watch it.
The writing is very nice, I beg the author not to stop updating [laughs awkwardly] [laughs awkwardly] [please update more] [like] [laughs] The writing is very good. It must be updated continuously. It definitely has potential [laughs][like][like][like]
The writing is very detailed. I haven't read a book so carefully in a long time. There are many wonderful moments that are really hard to hold back [face covering]. I won't say much, but it is a good book that suits my taste and allows me to follow more chapters! [Like][Like][Like][Like]
I've finished reading it, and it seems pretty good so far. It can be seen that the author wants to write a protagonist that is different from other Luck Child or villain stories on Yangshizi. The villain hasn't shown up yet, so you can observe
8 Points, good grass, but the writer's pace can be speeded up. I have read many novels before and the author will slow down the pace, and then it will be a bit delayed. There is still a long time before Wei Changsheng appears three years later, and the first breaking point is delayed a bit long.
It's great. I've only read two books about the son of fate who travels through time and becomes a villain of destiny.
At present, I have more than 70 chapters. The subject matter is novel, but the overall pace is slow. As the author said, it is slow to heat up. Personally, I feel good about it. The plot is currently relatively bland and there are no highlight moments, so I give it four stars.
It's okay, it's worth 7 or 8 points. There is too little updated content at the moment. It feels like the big villain will have to appear in another hundred chapters. Moreover, the female protagonist of the family, Mu, has not appeared. The pace feels a bit delayed.
This book is good It's written very logically Much better than the traditional villain flow or luck flow The rhythm is also good
I have finished reading 85 chapters so far. It is an anti-routine system of cultivating immortals. The protagonist behaves quite decently. There are many female protagonists, but they seem to be classic early stages of development, middle stages of emotional development, and later stages of relationship confirmation or ending. The point deduction is for the villain in the family who wrote six or seven chapters around sixty or seven chapters.
I came here from your last book, don't let me feed you to death again.
Don't turn off the flames, author. I really like the image of this protagonist.
The writing is very good, the plot is fun, and the protagonist is very smart [Like] [Please update]
It's quite interesting, but the pace is a bit slow at the moment. I feel like the author could speed up the pace a bit [Blow kiss]
This is an excellent anti-"villain system" novel. I hope the author will not fall ill in the middle and later stages of the novel.
Not a cool article, slow pace Nowadays, the more I write online articles, the more I go back. The book shortage is over, and the Internet literary circle is declining. I asked my friends, and they also felt it [face covering] Nowadays, most books are boring in the early stages and interesting in the early stage, and then after this period, they immediately become boring. This book almost falls into this category. There are very few online articles that are only boring for a few chapters occasionally, and then become interesting again immediately.
This is one of the best novels of this type that I have ever read. The narrative is better, but why does it feel like the author is a bit of a lolita?
The logic is clear and the plot is reasonable. It seems that there are no poisonous points yet, which makes people feel comfortable to watch. Of course, there are relatively few highlights and it is very dull, but it can make people watch it.
The writing is quite interesting. I hope the author has sufficient reasons for accepting the harem. Don't just accept a girl without thinking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I have read the whole chapter so far. The content is quite interesting. I just hope there won't be too many harems [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
The routine is okay, it's the type I like
I think it's pretty good, why is the rating so low?