I'm Doomed: I've Become the Chosen One in a Villain Novel

Very nice! Very top! It's easy to forget the characters in fast-paced novels. I think the pace of this book is just right, a little too slow, and the characters are full and three-dimensional. And some detailed explanations are also in place, enriching the world view and various settings. The logic of the plot is smooth, and it will not be forced to show off in order to deliberately promote events. The protagonist has his own thoughts and opinions. No poisonous points have been found so far, and it feels very comfortable to listen to the book! Nowadays, AI novels are so popular, it's so hard to find one that suits your taste! The author will update soon!!!

Good. It's my type The protagonist still grabs the opportunities of other protagonists. On the surface, the protagonist is one, but the other side is different. The women will accept it, and the men will seize the opportunity. This is the opposite of the routine 🤦 Others say that the protagonist is good and the protagonist is stumbling behind the scenes, and they are very high-minded. In essence, it is still refined egoism. Compared with other villain novels, it is nothing more than more hypocritical 🤮🤮🤮

Yes, very good. It is an innovation of the classic villain plot. It has a new perspective that I have never seen before. I did not find any big poisonous points after reading it. Every decision of the protagonist has an explanation. He did not enter the sect more than 120 times ago, so I did not rewrite the cultivation of immortals, but the layout of the protagonist. However, I felt that the weight distribution was unbalanced. I almost forgot that I was watching a fantasy. I hope I can change it after entering the sect. The only thing I don't like is that there are multiple female protagonists in the label, but because the pace is very slow, all of them are now confiscated [] I hope the author will speed up the pace later, in short, keep up the good work

The writing is quite good, there is no very poisonous or brainless plot, but the pace is relatively slow. Maybe I am used to reading fast-paced books. The heroine hopes that there will be more descriptions in the book, otherwise I would feel that it would be a pity.

Yes, it suits my taste. I have long wanted to read this kind of novel about the son of destiny who is a villain. I have read a book about the same type of white-haired Tiandao Stone before, and this one is much better. It seems to have a brain text, but there are a few points that I don't like. The first one is that I think it is a good habit in the world of immortality to not mind speculating others with the greatest malice, especially in brain stories, but the protagonist lacks this, I hope in the future To complete the story, I was not very satisfied with the protagonist's reaction when he knew that his future fiancée wanted the protagonist's biggest opportunity. I thought it would be better to guess that the previous concern was an act and then be more vigilant and analyze it more, instead of just passing it off. The second point was that I couldn't accept the real name of the lucky chance encounter when they met by chance. As a result, the real name was reported, and the impression dropped a bit. When I saw it later, I felt that it didn't matter what name I gave, so I hope the author would change it to no registration or pseudonym, otherwise it felt like the foreshadowing was quite good. The third point is that the protagonist is a bit merciful, but not to the level of the Virgin. The protagonist has always said that he should have less contact with the children of luck, but to tell the truth to the boss lady, the impression is very bad. And the receptionist at the Zhenbao Pavilion, I hope not to do it again This happened. In the world of immortality, it is normal for a mortal to die. People who are kind and soft-hearted cannot go far. In the end, I felt that the protagonist was not ruthless enough. Also, the author described the children of destiny other than the protagonist as smart and positive, which is good, but I hope they will all go offline in the end. I originally wanted to deduct one star, but thinking about the history of the book, I decided to encourage the author. Overall, this book is very good, and I recommend everyone to read it.

Let me give you five stars first. I watched this a long time ago. The son of fate in a villain story [laughs evilly] But you still have a system. It's so fun. As long as the plot is not bad or outrageous, I will keep following you if you keep updating.

I saw "A Breath of Clear Stream" on the recommendation list and was attracted by the title and introduction. I felt that the title and introduction were quite interesting, but to be honest, when I opened it, it was not as good-looking as I thought. The settings were too many and complicated, and the plot unfolded too slowly. Almost all of them were about settings. The first few chapters, this really made me wonder if it was the author of Tomato? I have been reading it on Tomato for a few years. This is the first time I have seen a slow-burning work. Fortunately, the setting is good and the author is reading it well. Could it be that Tomato can really accommodate slow-burning works? It was a miracle that he came out.

😏 😏 Do you think it's over? No not yet. 😏 Hee~ I've read so many villain articles on Tomato. This book is also considered a relatively new one. Give it a five-star support. ✭✩✩✩✩ I don't know why it gets shorter and shorter the more I watch it.

Give it 5 stars. It seems to be good so far. The character portrayal is relatively average. You can add a few more scenes for the heroines, especially the remnant soul. Don't always want to make friends with or escape from the children of destiny. I think it can be properly fought. Mainly because in the later stage, if it is really against the big villain, I prefer that the protagonist can have more children of destiny alone. It will be a bit messy. However, the author's setting is very novel. It is a villain novel with a counter-routine. The plot is also quite interesting. However, the portrayal of some brainless villains can be less, and then they can arrange system upgrades or something, or have more tags, or change other people's tags and change them to different colors, which can be divided into different prices. It doesn't seem to have any bad points at first. I hope the author will continue to write more and not stop working harder to finish this book. I think this book currently has too few words and has a low rating. I can't see the author on Tomato recommendations. Maybe try updating 3 chapters a day, but then don't write Jackie Chan Aotian Shuangwen. I hope the author can write this book well 🙂

Counter-routine, interesting! Interesting! But not much!!