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The character creation in the first part is very good, but starting from Yaliluo it is obvious that some AI assistance has been connected and there is not much continuity check. It seems that there are several chapters but in fact they are all repeating the exact same topic. Forgot that Yaliluo has been closed off for a long time, emphasizing that he does not know the professional words, forgetting Yaliluo, emphasizing that he does not know the professional words, repeating them over and over again Contacting the Black Tower also repeatedly repeated the communication about 47 Xi's character and why he did not resist and was laughed at by the Black Tower, and added a few different plot advancements. It is also possible that Fang Rong is not an auxiliary AI because the author likes this expression, but it is really uncomfortable and somewhat unclear. He is used in the introduction and communication with the author, but he is actually a woman. Because it was very good in the early stage, I temporarily gave it four stars.

It's pretty good. The character creation is quite successful. The character is flesh-and-blood and has personality. The author has indeed given the protagonist a soul to a certain extent. The protagonist is not an invincible or great person, but he is indeed a pure scholar. The protagonist does not start from scratch. It's exciting to the end, but it's an image of an innocent little girl with flesh and blood, real emotions, who has been loved by her parents since she was a child. The protagonist has a very soft temper. In fact, to be honest, anyone who has just arrived in a country and is caught by the local soldiers will probably be afraid and will cooperate. , Not to mention a little girl who has been loved since she was a child. If you want to read a cool article, don't come, but the protagonist is indeed a qualified scholar, because she also has an absolute desire and stubbornness for truth and knowledge. The character of the protagonist written by the author does have some conflicts with It is complicated, but it is this conflict and complexity that makes the protagonist in the author's writing come alive and has a soul. I am really looking forward to the next plot. The author's writing style gave me a strong desire to continue reading. It is a very good novel so far.

The writing is beautiful and the rhythm is graceful. The protagonist is placed on a higher narrative level, overlooking everything that happened in the original work. The whole thing makes people feel relaxed and the reading is easier. As for the word "useless" of the protagonist mentioned in other reviews, it is slightly inappropriate. I think the author writes the protagonist as an "observer" to see and experience the future that is destined to happen, thereby perfecting her "existence theory". Instead of personally intervening, as for self-explosion of identity, wouldn't that become the well-known "pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger"? But if the author really doesn't want it to be like this, he really should reduce the number of words in "47 seats". I read the current chapter in one go, and it is still very smooth. There are some slight flaws, but they are innocuous. It has a sense of literary youth, but it is not too heavy. It can be ranked as a fairy among tomato fans.

At first, I always thought that the protagonist's character was introverted and weak, but later I discovered that these were just the surface. What was really underlying was the indifference of a genius, indifference to other subjects and academics, and indifference to items that were judged to have no research value.

The writing is very good, and the inner activities of the characters are described in detail. It just makes me feel frustrated.

The author really writes superbly. The plot has a strong sense of substitution. The character of the protagonist is also well described. The plot is fascinating. Well... Okay, it's a bit literary, but I really think this article is very interesting. I highly recommend you to read it.

It's really rare that I can emerge such a fantastic character. He is the embodiment of my fantasy.

I think she and Heita are really good at each other [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Klaas is also very awesome😋Come on, boss😋

Haha, after all, you wrote the book. After reading it, I thought it was pretty good. Come on, I hope I can write better.

The content is okay, but I don't quite understand why Silk is brought along?

It feels pretty good, but why is there so little traffic? I suggest you change the label to a male channel.

The writing is very good! The character creation was also very successful! Well, it's not a cool article!

The author's writing is great, and the plot is okay. I personally like it quite a lot. This is a personal evaluation, don't mind referring to it! ! !

Author, don't write all the time, no, no, no more [smile]

The characters written by the author are very well described. The protagonist is like a character existing in Bengtie, which also confirms her existence.

What is the protagonist's name?

Not bad, worthy of praise

I can't understand it more and more, but it looks good

It's beautiful, but the downside is that it's too frustrating

The emotions are very good and the content is not boring

Brothers, don't worry, it's shocking and delicious

One of the best novels I have ever read. It's just a bit short. I only watched it for two hours and then it was gone.

The character's heart is very well written. Well, overall it's okay anyway. I just read other people's comments, and what I mean is that the character is well created (｡ò ∀ó｡)

The author is great, will his true nature be revealed in the future? It's good to watch, the plot is very good, I love watching it [Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart] I just want to ask when will you reveal your true nature, in Ompharos or the Two Phase Paradise [Explore][Explore]

I wonder what the author's head is made of?