Journey to the West: Taking Stock of Alternative Buddhist Scriptures, Monk Tang Became Numb

It's a pretty good novel, not the same as before. I hope I won't write conspiracy theories and play tricks on heaven to discredit gods and Buddhas in the future. That'll be fine.

The Great Sage Tang Monk is also good to write about!

It's pretty good to watch, I like it a lot, but I can add a little more plot and make the Great Sage more handsome. In Black Myth, I feel like I could write one in advance about the world background of Black Myth and the inability to live forever.

Looking at this, you are planning to play a big game. After all, if you look at it from the beginning, there are many derivatives of Journey to the West. I have also seen a similar version of yours on other software before, except that it was a derivative world created by myself. The 86 version also has linkage in the main world. Basically, every disaster will trigger a parallel world. It was a novel I read almost two or three years ago. Until the end, the person wrote almost 1,000 chapters. But the other side's plot was not so protracted. People will not have the idea of ​​​​abandoning the trap. A few suggestions if you are rewriting other derivative stories. If you want to whet people's appetite, then other parts should be appropriately less watery. Because everyone knows that your main tone is nothing in the 86 moderator world, so you should put your energy into other linked worlds as much as possible. The main world of Journey to the West written by that person is an SSR-level hell-starting journey to the West, and it has a lot of quirks and flaws to whet your appetite. Then it will be linked with other Journey to the West that is not so difficult, and the ones with shortcomings will be given more space. The relatively bland ones like the Linkage 86 version were relatively passed by. You are exactly the opposite of him. Your main tone is in the 86 version, so you should devote most of your space to other worlds. Seeing that you have written more than 40 pictures and are still stuck at this difficulty, it proves that you simply want to play the sky screen. That person directly overcame the disaster and cooperated with each other until he finally got the true scripture. I don't know your follow-up arrangements, anyway, this is just a little suggestion. So far, it seems to be quite remarkable.

The writing is good, it's like looking back on childhood, and there is no conspiracy or anything like that. It's just an inventory. I hope to review everything on the market. If it's not good, I'll just write a few chapters and choose the classic Journey to the West.

Good-looking is the protagonist. What did he say when he appeared? He's a bit like a background, he just doesn't look like the protagonist. If I watch it, I just watch the reactions of these gods and so on. I don't want to say that I just watched it. Halfway through, it was over. The protagonist said that the life span was increased again.

Yes, yes, Black Myth is Black Myth. The 1986 edition of Journey to the West is the 1986 edition of Journey to the West. Although the 1986 version of Journey to the West has some plans and some underlying conspiracies, Buddha is not all a good guy. But that's not the case, ginseng fruit needs babies. That kind of thing about the Fourth Spider Sister. Wang Lingguan turned into a monster with one hand. The Three Realms and Six Paths collapsed because of immortality. It's better to distinguish clearly. Most of today's fan fiction is written by AI. If you write with AI, you will write with AI. As a result, you still can't distinguish the boundaries and all come across a gourd and fit everything into it. There are very few people like you. 100% Recommend the Lotus Lantern. Absolutely hot. And then there's that. I would like to suggest that this Black Myth is updated when it is finished. For the time being, let Sun Wukong finish learning their scriptures and cultivate to the right state before playing again. Otherwise, how could they stay in the same place all the time? I just suggest that I don't dare to give any advice.

It's okay, but the protagonist's role is a bit too much. Shouldn't the protagonists of the inventory article be tool people [Chigua]

By the way, there is another version of the love-mad sage, played by Nicholas Tse. Do you want to write or not? There is also Zhang Weijian's "Monkey King" in 2002, which ate Tang Sanzang, and the one who became the Jade Emperor himself

It's not bad. I reviewed Xingye's movie after a long time, and I want to watch Westward Journey.

So far it's pretty good, but the original plot takes up a bit too much, but it's normal and the author is very persuasive.

The author is taking his time. I just don't know if there will be the little monster from Langlang Mountain and the three-dozen white-bone demons in the movie. The white-bone demon was played by Gong Li in the movie where Tang Monk used his body to save the demon.

Well, it's good, but I want to say, why can the Tathagata see cause and effect clearly, why does the Jade Emperor still think about it? Guess, when Tathagata Buddha subdued the monkey, he said something, the Jade Emperor has practiced hard for 1,750 years, and each calamity deserves 129,600. Calculate how much suffering you have to go through to enjoy such a great way, you are a monkey in the first life... Based on my understanding of the Jade Emperor, he should have said: Don't worry about it [eating melon]

It's very interesting. Can the author write a big story called "Journey to the West? Will I Love You for Ten Thousand Years?" I want to read this [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

You can add the Monkey King who fights for hegemony between heaven and earth.

Not bad. If the author wants to write about Journey to the West, he can go to Douyin to read those in-depth explanations. It will be better to write down when the time comes.

Can we intersperse a little collection of inhumane and interesting stories in the middle?

Very good. Is there any sequel to Journey to the West? TVB version of Journey to the West. After finishing all versions of Journey to the West, I can also write about Zhu Bajie in Splendid Spring, Nezha, Yang Jian, Fengshen, Eight Immortals, etc. You know what I mean, the author

A creative novel. Unfortunately, I don't know whether it is using AI or the author has forgotten it. Neither 3 nor 4 can be connected. Very pretty,

Tianmu Wen, everyone is happy to watch it. The next few chapters are too serious. There are many videos on Douyin to watch, such as Diary of Sha Monk, Speed ​​Journey to the West, Sun Wukong's son falling in love with his own sister, funny Journey to the West, etc. [Laughing and crying] Come on!

Real and objective, clear structure, super beautiful.

I want to watch the movie Fangyuan

You can release the Jianghua version of Tang Seng. This is the holy monk.

You can write about Master Tripitaka, who hides all living beings in heaven and earth.

It's good-looking, the characters are okay, and it doesn't discredit anyone.

This canopy flow is okay, and the distribution of plots inside and outside the canopy is quite reasonable. I am looking forward to Black Myth! ! ! Black Shinhwa wrote "It's great" and received seven stars for likes.

I feel like I can write that sketch about Eighty-One Difficulties

It's okay so far. It's more comfortable among all the ones I've heard. I hope the main 86 will be enough. Don't add more events. It will be confusing and difficult to listen to. Also, don't add inventory-style characters. A question appears, and then I inventory myself and tell you all my own secrets. The key is weird. I have heard a lot of this kind of thing, but I don't like it. Come on, author

You can write about the God of War! That quotation was so domineering that it opened the eyes of gods and Buddhas!

You can write about the journey to the west with a sword in the forest.