Journey to the West: A New Master and His Disciples Leave the Three Realms Stunned

It's a pretty good novel, not the same as before. I hope I won't write conspiracy theories and play tricks on heaven to discredit gods and Buddhas in the future. That'll be fine.

The Great Sage Tang Monk is also good to write about!

It's pretty good to watch, I like it a lot, but I can add a little more plot and make the Great Sage more handsome. In Black Myth, I feel like I could write one in advance about the world background of Black Myth and the inability to live forever.

Looking at this, you are planning to play a big game. After all, if you look at it from the beginning, there are many derivatives of Journey to the West. I have also seen a similar version of yours on other software before, except that it was a derivative world created by myself. The 86 version also has linkage in the main world. Basically, every disaster will trigger a parallel world. It was a novel I read almost two or three years ago. Until the end, the person wrote almost 1,000 chapters. But the other side's plot was not so protracted. People will not have the idea of ​​​​abandoning the trap. A few suggestions if you are rewriting other derivative stories. If you want to whet people's appetite, then other parts should be appropriately less watery. Because everyone knows that your main tone is nothing in the 86 moderator world, so you should put your energy into other linked worlds as much as possible. The main world of Journey to the West written by that person is an SSR-level hell-starting journey to the West, and it has a lot of quirks and flaws to whet your appetite. Then it will be linked with other Journey to the West that is not so difficult, and the ones with shortcomings will be given more space. The relatively bland ones like the Linkage 86 version were relatively passed by. You are exactly the opposite of him. Your main tone is in the 86 version, so you should devote most of your space to other worlds. Seeing that you have written more than 40 pictures and are still stuck at this difficulty, it proves that you simply want to play the sky screen. That person directly overcame the disaster and cooperated with each other until he finally got the true scripture. I don't know your follow-up arrangements, anyway, this is just a little suggestion. So far, it seems to be quite remarkable.

The writing is good, it's like looking back on childhood, and there is no conspiracy or anything like that. It's just an inventory. I hope to review everything on the market. If it's not good, I'll just write a few chapters and choose the classic Journey to the West.

Yes, yes, Black Myth is Black Myth. The 1986 edition of Journey to the West is the 1986 edition of Journey to the West. Although the 1986 version of Journey to the West has some plans and some underlying conspiracies, Buddha is not all a good guy. But that's not the case, ginseng fruit needs babies. That kind of thing about the Fourth Spider Sister. Wang Lingguan turned into a monster with one hand. The Three Realms and Six Paths collapsed because of immortality. It's better to distinguish clearly. Most of today's fan fiction is written by AI. If you write with AI, you will write with AI. As a result, you still can't distinguish the boundaries and all come across a gourd and fit everything into it. There are very few people like you. 100% Recommend the Lotus Lantern. Absolutely hot. And then there's that. I would like to suggest that this Black Myth is updated when it is finished. For the time being, let Sun Wukong finish learning their scriptures and cultivate to the right state before playing again. Otherwise, how could they stay in the same place all the time? I just suggest that I don't dare to give any advice.

Good-looking is the protagonist. What did he say when he appeared? He's a bit like a background, he just doesn't look like the protagonist. If I watch it, I just watch the reactions of these gods and so on. I don't want to say that I just watched it. Halfway through, it was over. The protagonist said that the life span was increased again.

It's okay, but the protagonist's role is a bit too much. Shouldn't the protagonists of the inventory article be tool people [Chigua]

Author, can you write more about Saber Journey to the West? I beg you, I will give you a gift to urge you to update [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Saber Journey to the West [almost crying] Saber Journey to the West [almost crying]

The author is taking his time. I just don't know if there will be the little monster from Langlang Mountain and the three-dozen white-bone demons in the movie. The white-bone demon was played by Gong Li in the movie where Tang Monk used his body to save the demon.