After Practicing for a Hundred Years, I Built a Computer

This author is invincible. This theme is a hit at first glance. As long as you keep writing, the fire will come sooner or later.

It's a pretty good setting, and to be honest it's quite novel. The writing is also very smooth, and the protagonist has a good personality. He is a normal person who is physically and mentally healthy. The only shortcoming, I think, is that the integration of technology and immortality is average, and there is no linkage. I have an idea. The "Spirit Atomic Bomb" spirit stone veins are divided into upper, middle and lower grades. Only in the upper grade veins can the best spirit stones be produced sporadically. After being absorbed, the spiritual energy can be slowly filled for up to a hundred years. It is the foundation of the great sect. However, the best spiritual stones cannot be stored together or they will explode, and the best spiritual stones cannot be absorbed for a long time, otherwise the foundation will be damaged. The protagonist discovers that ordinary spiritual stones also contain extremely low-quality spiritual stones. After purification, a spiritual energy atomic bomb is created. A medium-range spiritual energy turbulence that can cause physical damage in a small area and cause physical damage, making the monks' spiritual energy disordered and unable to use spiritual energy and become mortals. The extremely wide range of spiritual radiation can slowly and fundamentally destroy all the foundations of the monks. Spiritual roots, golden elixirs, and spiritual energy Nourished body parts. The higher the level of cultivation, the greater the dependence on spiritual energy. The pain in the body every moment cannot be considered light. The more serious the cultivation level, the faster the body will collapse. This is the protagonist's biggest trump card for ordinary people, a weapon that can compete with immortal cultivators.

Why are the books that I'm interested in and able to read all contain no data? Is my reading hobby so niche?

It's very interesting and interesting, focusing on the bottom and promoting red ideas. I just wonder if the protagonist can still maintain his original intention and remember the things before time travel after a hundred years of cultivation and research at the beginning... Maybe he has been thinking blindly for a hundred years alone, which is understandable. I quite agree with the protagonist's thoughts and actions. The world shouldn't be like this! This world is not beautiful at all!

This book has good results as a newbie, at least it has everything it should have, but there are also some minor problems. For example, the plot and world setting need to be improved, the conflicts between the characters need to be polished to be more real and intellectual, and the fourth wall is broken in many places in the article. These are the author's thoughts and writing ideas. This method speeds up the author's advancement of the plot, but sometimes it is a little abrupt, affecting the continuity and immersion of the plot. However, it can be seen that the author has a certain understanding of the rhythm of the article. Then there is the issue of basic setting. It is undeniable that the subject matter of this book is relatively new and there are not many books of the same type. The author has a certain degree of imagination. However, some character settings are old-fashioned. For example, the personality of this AI is better to be more serious. Sometimes things and ideals are not suitable for an overly naughty image. There are also some deficiencies in the author's knowledge accumulation, and the boundaries of realm and inner operating power are slightly blurred. But this is not a problem, most of it can be solved with time. The portrayal of several supporting characters is still okay. The most important point is the author's lack of foreshadowing in order to quickly advance the plot. This is a very important issue. Writing is not about the author's own entertainment. Just thinking about it has taken shape, and the later period is very satisfying, but he is still writing the early stage. Writing is different from thinking in his mind. I hope the author can be more careful and have some patience to write the foreshadowing and preparation. When building a house, you always lay the foundation first. In short, as a novice, the exploration of writing is qualified, and all aspects are taken care of, but there are only some shortcomings. It deserves my support. It is recommended that everyone take a look.

For normal authors, this is relatively good, but for novices, it is very good. After all, the author is a newbie. The main problem is that some problems in the front are very strange, but they are set to be corrected very later, which makes it easy to abandon the pit and run away. It is recommended that the author move the dimensionality power forward, otherwise everyone will run away directly. And I suggest that the author do a search before writing about coal or oil, otherwise strange problems may arise.

The writing is very good, and the setting is quite interesting. The main content is about the development of technology in the world of cultivators. The combat performance in other realms has been downplayed. The main focus is on the super productivity of the protagonist's golden elixir, which makes the protagonist's equipment look like the power of An Si, pushing the technology tree like a dragon.

Yeah, yeah, yeah [I learned it] I want to see an endless army of space carrier fighter robots Countless high-energy particle cannons, laser cannons, rail guns, electromagnetic weapons, and plasma weapons I want to see the immortal cultivators sink into the vast sea of people Countless immortal science and technology products are put into the battlefield Engage in an eternal, endless war with cultivators on the ground, in the sky, in the universe, and between galaxies Forget the front, forget the middle, forget the back, Anyway, let the galaxy burn [angry] The Great Expedition begins!

It's really good. I'm almost tired of watching so many plots about cultivating immortality. I didn't expect to read this author's novel about cultivating immortality about production reform. I'm quite addicted to it, but I just can't get enough of it [Blow kiss]

It is a rare novel that lays the foundation for [productivity] in the world of immortality.

The setting is novel, the plot is excellent, and the writing is excellent

Can the protagonist be a boy and girl?

The plot is good and the writing is okay, but the details are missing. I suggest the author to read "My Magic Weapon is the Computer" for reference.

There is no poison at the moment and the protagonist is very upright.

Finally got a big guarantee

Protagonist: Immortal noble being, saving lives immeasurably!

Why do I see someone writing a book about leading mortals to advance in science and technology in the world of immortality? I hope that I can build a psychic empire and break out of the world of immortality later. I thought of a particularly interesting plot. I would broadcast the coordinates of the world of immortality to the universe to see if I would be attacked or receive a response.

It doesn't overwhelm the combat power, and it feels very cool to show your head in seconds. Later, the protagonist builds a two-spined salamander artificial intelligence and finished it in one go, which is comparable to the comprehensive comic novel ten years ago.

It's not bad, I'm quite optimistic about this book so far.

It's growing on a daily basis and looks pretty good. ㇏The protagonist is born at level 38. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

[Note] There are new ideas and ideas. Although the theme is about cultivating immortals, the routines are not cliche. [Learned] is worth watching.

Not bad, very beautiful

The subject matter is novel and the writing is good

Very good book and news

Kakakakagan turns over to another world

Finally got the guaranteed money

Very special spirit!

The subject matter is quite interesting

Okay, just a little slow

The fight between sons has always been like this