[Multiple female protagonists + game cultivation + quasi-chat group + invincibility]
Xie Linyuan, a hard-working college student. In order to unlock the "special CG" of the cold fairy Su Nianxue in "Tianxu", he spent a lot of money to buy the "True Love Gu", and his favorability level was increased with one click.
Just when he was about to see the special CG he had dreamed of - a white light flashed and he traveled through time.
When he woke up, a sword was already on his neck.
The red-faced, ashamed and angry girl in front of him was Su Nianxue, whom he had just "speed-passed".
"You bastard! Die!"
At the critical moment of life and death, Xie Linyuan had an idea: "Wait! I am your future husband!"
... Then he discovered that this excuse seemed to make him suffer even more.
The moment the sword tip was about to pierce the throat, a mechanical voice sounded in his mind:
[Ding—Player Xie Linyuan has been detected, welcome to the world of "Tianxu". The chat channel has been automatically opened for you]
Xie Linyuan saw the savior.
World Channel
Xie Linyuan: Jianghu comes to the rescue! @ Su Nianxue, what's your favorite meal made by your mother? !
Fairy Su Nianxue:?
Xie Linyuan: Fairy, don't ask! Tell me quickly! Otherwise I will reopen it!
Fairy Su Nianxue: ... Egg fried rice, because this is the only one that can be eaten.
The sword stopped one centimeter in front of the tip of his nose.
The girl Su Nianxue's eyes widened: "How do you know this?! This is a secret that I haven't even told my mother!"
Xie Linyuan breathed a sigh of relief, luckily escaping.
Then he suddenly realized a serious problem——
He seems to be more than just one person's husband!
Behind him are the innocent and cute little princess, the sickly and sick girl Qingmei, the eldest lady disguised as a man, and other fairies waiting for him to conquer.
Reader comments
Mark "Soul Penetration" in the introduction, thank you. I read dozens of chapters before explaining. If others don't give you bad reviews, you have a good temper [face covering] Anyway, I'm leaving first [laughs]
In fact, I think it's okay. It's called soul travel. It's actually the kind of game where you travel through time and become the main controller. It's acceptable. In terms of plot, I think it's pretty good. There's nothing bad about it. It's just that sometimes the sentences aren't very fluent. Come on, author, don't stop updating.
Although the way to deal with Shura Field is simple and formulaic [laughs awkwardly] (I feel like I could have confessed at a better time), at least I feel a sense of responsibility [like]. The whole book looks bland and soft, and the water flows slowly. I feel that the pressure can be increased in the big competition part, allowing the girls to work together. On the one hand, they can build fighting friendships and harmonious relationships, and on the other hand, they can continue to correct the protagonist's mentality of doing everything by himself. Just waiting for the update [laughing]
"The Mahayana Fairy Taught Me How to Defeat My Childhood Self" received five-star reviews to encourage new authors. It is an interesting idea to extend the be world line into a parallel world.
It's quite interesting. I remember reading a fairy tale that seemed to have been separated by hundreds or even thousands of years. The female protagonist is in the past and the male protagonist is in the future. At the beginning, the male protagonist goes to find the female protagonist and finds that the female protagonist's sect is gone. Later, the female protagonist also leaves something in the past for the future male protagonist. I forgot her name.
Very nice! The writing is also good! There are basically no poisonous points. After watching it for a few hours, I didn't find any problems. The content is also good, but I don't know how to deal with the heroines in different world lines. Personally, I still prefer a happy ending. I hope that the heroines in each world line can come to the main world. For example, the same heroine in the two world lines can combine memories. I think it is good!
It's interesting, but it's a pity that so few people watch it
The realm is similar to cultivating immortals in online games. The bad guys are all mass-produced NPCs. It's not like ordinary people cultivating immortals, where a small realm can kill countless people.
It's best not to write those numerical data, otherwise it will become unreasonable like Dragon Ball.
The second plot is too overwritten. The villains are just passers-by. These low-level ants are playing games in front of high-level monks, just like playing house, but these high-level monks just don't care. A novel about cultivating immortals is written like a martial arts novel. The emotional scenes are so awkward and awkward, and they also have to sleep. It's hard to attract people.
Overall it looks pretty good
The theme and ideas are good. The writing is poor, but it doesn't hurt. The world line is quite confusing, I hope I can finish it.
I've been watching it for a long time, but I don't feel the poison. At the beginning, it said something about wearing a game, saying that the body has no soul, etc. I thought that if I traveled to the game world, I could return to the real world, and then the body in the game world would act on its own. After a long time, I just traveled through the past and was still alive. I was stunned for a while while reading in the comment section.
It's pretty good. The emotional lines are pretty good, but some readers may think that the protagonist's soul travels to the game character is a little bit poisonous. There's nothing else poisonous about it. It's just a cool story.
It's a very interesting harem story, with delicate emotions and a non-dragging plot.
The writing is okay, but there are some flaws in the details, which are visible. As a novice, it is already excellent. If it continues to settle down, the future will be promising.
Even though I only looked at it a little bit, I still felt the body was warm.
You must see the small theater, Azheng is so cute (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.
Come on [Sending Hearts] I like this [Top Post][Top Post][Top Post]
When the protagonist clicked on Su Nianxue's CG time travel, he thought it was Su Nianxue's line, but it turned out to be Shen Shutang's be follow-up [Learned]
It looks good, but not enough [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates]
Come on, well written.
You can't forget about chat groups. The main purpose of your book is not to guide future bosses now, but there is only one Su in the group, which is too little.
The routine is okay, it's the first time I've seen it
The writing is quite normal, maybe it's the problem with Volume 1, it's just like a story and it's too short.
It looks good, I want the (big) version of Nian Xue to regret it for life and to suppress my mouth for thousands of years.
Why are there suddenly fewer people and no previous comments?
It must be praised with five stars, pure love is invincible, and the relationships between various characters are not hidden. I am honest and sincere. I hope I can continue writing. Come on, this book must be praised with five stars.
In the past few days, I found a green and poisonous book on Tomato. It was so disgusting that it caused great harm to my weak heart. Seeing this kind of pure love book really saved me [crying]
It's beautiful, but pure love comes first!
Just like this
[Laughing evilly] How should I put it, just force it.
Good-looking, good-looking and plump
It looks good, and the emotional line is also very good
Yes, it will be better if you correct the flaws. Please support [love]
It's okay, nothing exciting, just a bit bland
There is a sweet feeling, even though there are multiple female protagonists, it does not affect this feeling.
This book is very good, I look forward to the follow-up
Mark "Soul Penetration" in the introduction, thank you. I read dozens of chapters before explaining. If others don't give you bad reviews, you have a good temper [face covering] Anyway, I'm leaving first [laughs]
In fact, I think it's okay. It's called soul travel. It's actually the kind of game where you travel through time and become the main controller. It's acceptable. In terms of plot, I think it's pretty good. There's nothing bad about it. It's just that sometimes the sentences aren't very fluent. Come on, author, don't stop updating.
Although the way to deal with Shura Field is simple and formulaic [laughs awkwardly] (I feel like I could have confessed at a better time), at least I feel a sense of responsibility [like]. The whole book looks bland and soft, and the water flows slowly. I feel that the pressure can be increased in the big competition part, allowing the girls to work together. On the one hand, they can build fighting friendships and harmonious relationships, and on the other hand, they can continue to correct the protagonist's mentality of doing everything by himself. Just waiting for the update [laughing]
"The Mahayana Fairy Taught Me How to Defeat My Childhood Self" received five-star reviews to encourage new authors. It is an interesting idea to extend the be world line into a parallel world.
It's quite interesting. I remember reading a fairy tale that seemed to have been separated by hundreds or even thousands of years. The female protagonist is in the past and the male protagonist is in the future. At the beginning, the male protagonist goes to find the female protagonist and finds that the female protagonist's sect is gone. Later, the female protagonist also leaves something in the past for the future male protagonist. I forgot her name.
Very nice! The writing is also good! There are basically no poisonous points. After watching it for a few hours, I didn't find any problems. The content is also good, but I don't know how to deal with the heroines in different world lines. Personally, I still prefer a happy ending. I hope that the heroines in each world line can come to the main world. For example, the same heroine in the two world lines can combine memories. I think it is good!
It's interesting, but it's a pity that so few people watch it The realm is similar to cultivating immortals in online games. The bad guys are all mass-produced NPCs. It's not like ordinary people cultivating immortals, where a small realm can kill countless people. It's best not to write those numerical data, otherwise it will become unreasonable like Dragon Ball. The second plot is too overwritten. The villains are just passers-by. These low-level ants are playing games in front of high-level monks, just like playing house, but these high-level monks just don't care. A novel about cultivating immortals is written like a martial arts novel. The emotional scenes are so awkward and awkward, and they also have to sleep. It's hard to attract people. Overall it looks pretty good
The theme and ideas are good. The writing is poor, but it doesn't hurt. The world line is quite confusing, I hope I can finish it.
I've been watching it for a long time, but I don't feel the poison. At the beginning, it said something about wearing a game, saying that the body has no soul, etc. I thought that if I traveled to the game world, I could return to the real world, and then the body in the game world would act on its own. After a long time, I just traveled through the past and was still alive. I was stunned for a while while reading in the comment section.
It's pretty good. The emotional lines are pretty good, but some readers may think that the protagonist's soul travels to the game character is a little bit poisonous. There's nothing else poisonous about it. It's just a cool story.
It's a very interesting harem story, with delicate emotions and a non-dragging plot.
The writing is okay, but there are some flaws in the details, which are visible. As a novice, it is already excellent. If it continues to settle down, the future will be promising.
Even though I only looked at it a little bit, I still felt the body was warm. You must see the small theater, Azheng is so cute (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.
Come on [Sending Hearts] I like this [Top Post][Top Post][Top Post]
When the protagonist clicked on Su Nianxue's CG time travel, he thought it was Su Nianxue's line, but it turned out to be Shen Shutang's be follow-up [Learned]
It looks good, but not enough [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates]
Come on, well written. You can't forget about chat groups. The main purpose of your book is not to guide future bosses now, but there is only one Su in the group, which is too little.
The routine is okay, it's the first time I've seen it
The writing is quite normal, maybe it's the problem with Volume 1, it's just like a story and it's too short.
It looks good, I want the (big) version of Nian Xue to regret it for life and to suppress my mouth for thousands of years. Why are there suddenly fewer people and no previous comments?
It must be praised with five stars, pure love is invincible, and the relationships between various characters are not hidden. I am honest and sincere. I hope I can continue writing. Come on, this book must be praised with five stars. In the past few days, I found a green and poisonous book on Tomato. It was so disgusting that it caused great harm to my weak heart. Seeing this kind of pure love book really saved me [crying]
It's beautiful, but pure love comes first!
Just like this
[Laughing evilly] How should I put it, just force it.
Good-looking, good-looking and plump
It looks good, and the emotional line is also very good
Yes, it will be better if you correct the flaws. Please support [love]
It's okay, nothing exciting, just a bit bland
There is a sweet feeling, even though there are multiple female protagonists, it does not affect this feeling.
This book is very good, I look forward to the follow-up