My Little Pony: Alien Bonds

A very good Xiao Ma article. At first, I was a little worried about whether the author's writing style could be controlled because of the "first person" point of view. After all, most online articles are described from a third person perspective. However, after reading a few chapters, I can feel that the author's writing power and control are still very good, and it doesn't feel like a drama. The most important thing is that the emotional line of the two princesses has been described very well, and there are a few hidden touches. The emotional line is advancing at the right speed. It is now in a period of high ambiguity, and it is estimated that there are only one or two key events before the relationship is officially confirmed. At present, it seems that the protagonist may have experienced something later, which caused Luna to become Nightmare Moon according to the original work, and then it is estimated that it will be the M6 ​​chapter. I hope the author can continue to update it. This little horse story is ranked in the top three on Tomato. If it can be updated to the end with this quality and there are no surprises, it will probably be ranked first (currently the first and second place is a story about a million-word horse story and three sisters).

This is a "slow but worthwhile" book To be honest, the beginning of this book is not very friendly. A human who lost his memory traveled back to Equestria a thousand years ago. He doesn't know magic, has never read the original work, and doesn't even know why he is here. The first ten chapters are almost uneventful, except that the protagonist is slowly adapting to a strange world. If you are a reader who is spoiled by "cool articles", you will most likely quit in the first three chapters. But if you are willing to survive that seemingly ordinary daily life—— You will see how a person slowly finds his own place in a world that does not belong to him. You will see how a sun princess built a railway network connecting the entire kingdom alone during a thousand-year watch, just to wait for one person to wake up. You will see how a moon princess, because she loved too deeply and was too afraid, was eventually swallowed up by her own fear and turned into a nightmare. You will see a princess trapped in a political marriage, guarding a folding fan throughout her life, and before she died, she wrote, "I hope that when you return, you will smile and watch the chess game come to a successful conclusion." You will see a changeling queen, pushing her people into the abyss in order to find one person, screaming at the Sun Princess in the crater: "Where is he?!" This is not a story where the protagonist becomes stronger along the way. This is a story about "loss" and "waiting" - losing memory, losing home, losing loved ones; and then waiting for a thousand years, waiting for the prisoner on the moon to return, waiting for the person in the crystal coffin to open his eyes. If you are looking for a quick thrill, this book may not be suitable for you; if you are willing to slowly watch a person come to life, and are willing to shed tears for those characters who are destined to be unfulfilled—— So? See you in our story The first volume of Walking with the Sun and the Moon has been completed. The second volume of Walking with Friendship has been opened. (There are still many female protagonists)

A very good original drama. The timeline is set back to a period when the country was just founded. The protagonist, as an ordinary person, constantly releases and returns kindness to this strange but warm world, and establishes a non-love bond with the character. As a slow-paced daily novel, it is very suitable for reading. In the current environment where formulaic novels are common and then discontinued, it is rare. This work has a very good control of the ratio of knife to sugar until the appearance of disorder in the first chapter, which deserves full marks. However, readers are informed in advance to avoid possible surprises: 1. This article does not deviate from the scope of a cool article. The protagonist who is a traveler still has superhuman strength and resilience, and is also a container for the mixed magic of the harmonious and chaotic sun. It is a bit uncomfortable to read because he is not an ordinary person (of course, foreigners are here to read this kind of online article, so don't worry) 2. Regarding the love between Centaur and Horse, although the outside world also likes to do this, it is a pity that I am not the third brother. Even though I like this kind of intimate interaction, I still can't accept the behavior of life insurance that I don't like Furui Kong. Moreover, I took it all and split the CP (Rhythm handled it very well) The image is a rare nanny form so that it can be separated from the princess form) In addition, I prefer the quality of pure friendship over love. The highest level of friendship and above is not enough lovers, which is also in line with the theme of the original drama, but these are not important, just skip this paragraph when reading. 3. In the second chapter, the protagonist has become too perfect since he absorbed all of life. From the time he deliberately danced the most difficult dance and later sang on the same stage, he has surpassed the top of ordinary people and will not have any growth. It has become a collection of settings. Coupled with publicity and private life, at this time, as a reader, I have long been unable to substitute the Mary Sue-style protagonist for myself. The above is not a problem for most people. After all, if you can combine the slow-burn healing novel with the harem pleasure novel, it has surpassed more than 90% of the tomato novels. I will still watch it selectively in the future, and it may become a new inspiration for my Anke. I hope the work will get better and better.

This is a very good novel among the pony fans I have read, but it is not what I expected. It is undeniable that the author handles emotional relationships very well, as if he is watching a long drama, and the description is very detailed. But it's like a pony fanfic I reviewed before. It's good to watch but not suitable for people like me. The first volume is very well written. For this kind of second creation that is not part of the official plot, my evaluation is excellent. In the emotions and daily descriptions between the princess and the princess, it really made me experience the beauty. But in the second volume, half good and half inexplicable? In the second official plot, the writing is the same as in the first volume. My evaluation is excellent, but in the second official plot, the emotional descriptions in the second official plot, and the daily descriptions outside the official plot, I feel, uh, a little embarrassed, just like watching those long love TV dramas, making you sweet, but eating weirdly. Overall, this is a very good pony fanfic. The description of emotions, daily life, and plot creation are very good, but it is not suitable for me.

I haven't seen much of it yet, but the immersion from this first-person perspective is incredible. From the very beginning of the introduction, I felt that I would especially like this kind of slow-paced but extremely detailed pony novel, and I am honest. I have read the first volume completely word for word, and now I can clearly tell my former self, Hey! You tnd are really a genius. You read it right, the further you look at it, the better it gets. The emotional entanglements with the four heroines during the period and the last dance thousands of years ago are absolutely amazing (not just the protagonist). Tian is a real sweet knife and a real knife, but the knife is thorough and enjoyable! The characters will not be forced together for the sake of a happy reunion, just like a real thing that happened, which greatly enriched my impression of the two princesses from a thousand years ago. The images of Tia and Luna were finally complete. You will definitely make a profit after watching it! I can guarantee it! [Learned]

The greatest strength of this novel. The author's writing style is not the type that piles up rhetoric, but relies on details and actions to convey emotions. [Laughing evilly] The author is very good at writing "what he did" in terms of "what he didn't do". There is less inner drama. This kind of blank space allows readers to experience the character's mood. It is much better than writing "she was moved" directly. It lays the groundwork and can pave the way for subsequent emotional dramas. [Laughing evilly] The original characters of My Little Pony each have distinct personality labels. The most difficult thing for fandom is to not make the characters OOC (deviate from the original work), but also not to write them too flat. The original characters do not transcend the original work: such as Princess and Deswell [laughs] Writing style: clean, restrained, graphic, with rich and long emotional lines. [Like][Like][Like][Like] Some people think that the Crystal Empire will collapse and there are too many characters involved. I think this will be the climax of the book. [Laughing]

Recommended, a very pure pony fanfic, kindness, gentleness and sincerity are always the surefire skills. Maybe the reality is cruel, but if the world is kind to me, then I will respond gently with my existence: 'I am here, full of surprises, and I will turn around and give this light to the next morning. '

Highly rated, I'm really looking forward to the story between the protagonist and Pinkie Pie in the second volume. Pinkie Pie, an optimistic pony, has all the basic values ​​too high. I don't know what kind of story will tempt her. I also hope that the author can give the protagonist a chaotic magic form, with some of the physical characteristics of an alicorn (which can also be said to be the result of gradual integration and assimilation with this world). I remember in the Siren Sisters movie, the M6 ​​in Pony High School would reveal its magical form under certain requirements.

Although it is a niche, the author's writing style is really good, and the content can be seen to have been carefully thought out. The character portrayal is very profound, especially the details are handled very delicately. I guess the author has also dabbled in many acgn works.

Undoubtedly full marks, no wonder the author said that he read a lot of pony fanfics, but none of them were what he wanted, so he wrote it himself. Your writing is so good. The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too small. I can't read enough [crying] Please finish it normally. Don't be a eunuch and don't interrupt.

This novel is simply wonderful [heartfelt]! A human named Wuming who lost his memory and left his hometown in another world. He healed the Universe Princess and the Moon Princess with his kindness, but in fact he was also healed by them. At present, it seems that there are two lines of the universe and the Moon Princess. The emotional writing can be said to be very delicate. Fast forward to the little love between Wuming and the Universe Princess when the Moon Princess bumped into the Shura Field [Like]

I read the beginning of the second volume in one go and was quite impressed. The first volume is very well written. Each of the four characters in the first volume has its own characteristics. I have only watched a few episodes of Pony and am not very familiar with it, so I relied on the author's writing to keep me reading. I just didn't like the knife at the end of the first volume. I originally thought that it would be good to read the second volume of the reunion after being sealed for a thousand years. But I didn't expect that the story of the princess was over. I suddenly felt that I didn't want to read on. After all, the story was not complete. I just wanted to see a happy ending when I read the novel. The story of deducting half a star to the princess is over There is also a description of the whitewashing after the knife incident due to Discord.

It's very warm and beautiful. I just wish there were more aspects of love. I really like it.

It's good-looking (๑• . •๑), Especially the sweet moments where the protagonist gets along with the two princesses. The story of the background pony is also well depicted, including the macroscopic view of princesses governing the country, and the microscopic view of the lives of ordinary ponies. I sincerely hope that the human knowledge the protagonist brings will make Equestria's future brighter.

The author is really good at grasping the first-person perspective, and the writing is excellent, but there are some details that don't quite fit the first-person perspective. For example, in the new chapter where they eat apple candy, I'm not sure whether the protagonist saw an indirect kiss or not. It would be better if the details were more refined. Overall, it's a well-worth reading. Come on! (If it's the protagonist's memories, pretend I didn't say it)

The first volume is over, and I personally think it's pretty good so far. At first I wasn't interested in the first person narrative, but after reading it I was surprised that it was pretty good. I hope that the second volume can increase the interaction and contact between the protagonist and the heroines. The first volume has a workaholic feeling, and getting along with the princesses always ends as soon as I feel good. On the contrary, I think the original character is the one who has the most intimacy with the protagonist, and her exit is also very important (I hope there will be no resurrection or other things that will make the tears flow back). I think her departure will allow them to understand their true feelings and thoughts after meeting him again (provided that it is really written like this). Finally, I think the protagonist should confirm their relationship as soon as possible. I hope that he will do so as soon as possible after waking up in the second volume. After they have experienced so many things, they should all understand that the most suitable time never comes. I also ask the author not to delay it any longer. This is my personal opinion.

It can be said that this novel can be said to be an epic work in Xiaoma's overall novels. Even if it is placed in the overall novel genre, this book is a good wine. I hope the author can keep updating it. This can be said to be a rare novel.

I must give it 5 stars. It is the most delicate description of emotions in Xiao Ma's novels that I have ever read. Come on, author, and the writing style is also worth learning. I also plan to write an article recently. The outline is basically completed. I will start writing it when I go to college [Note]

There are very few pony fanfics in which humans penetrate Equestria, and there are even fewer people who fall in love with each other (big reviewers). There are even fewer pony fanfics from the time of the Sun and Moon Princess. I can't find another pony fanfic like this [crying] Author, you must keep updating and compose novels for a lifetime, Onegay, Watasi [crying]

It's considered an original article by Xiaoma. Although I really want to see the m6, it's nice to see this kind of daily life.

It gives full play to the advantages of first-person description and is very delicate.

The emotions are very delicate and the plot is very smooth. I would like to ask when will the plot of M6 be advanced? Finally, don't stop updating [eating melon] OK, I've finished reading the first volume. My evaluation is that it is one of the best among the Pony articles I have read. The emotional aspect is very satisfying. Worth watching.

The writing style is beautiful, the story content is interesting, and the original content is interesting The relationship between the protagonist and the two princesses progresses step by step [Like]. Dapp's gentleness and tolerance make the protagonist feel the kindness from the pony world, and bring a sense of security to the amnesiac protagonist; although Luna was wary of the protagonist at the beginning, but with many contacts and exchanges with the protagonist, she also felt the protagonist's kindness and gentleness; I also like the protagonist of this book [Send Heart] very much. He is considerate and decisive at the same time. It is his equal attitude in communicating with the two princesses that can gradually enter their hearts. The interaction between the protagonist and the two princesses is really sweet and comfortable. The book seems to be relatively slow to read at first, but if you look closely, you can feel the author's care in description and plot design. It is suitable for reading slowly [Love] Come on, author [send heart] [send heart] [send heart], I will always support you [grass has been planted] [grass has been planted] [grass has been planted]

The plot is good-looking, the updates are stable, and the review is very positive. Finally, in the first volume, the main story from a thousand years ago comes to an end. The author pays great attention to every character in the novel, not only the Sun and Moon Princess and Chrysalis in the original book, but also the original characters written by the author. Whether it is the trio in the castle at the beginning or the princess who appears later, people want to know their subsequent stories. However, the story must come to an end, and the story from a thousand years ago will eventually come to an end. In the second volume, the timeline finally comes to the familiar main line of G4. I am looking forward to the story of the protagonist, the sun and the moon, and m6. In short, I hope the author can maintain this rhythm. If you don't watch "My Little Pony: Alien Bonds", Wattasi [crying]

A great work. I am really grateful to have read this book in my spare time.

The imagination is very good 👍It's so interesting. I felt young after reading it (I fantasized again) Fortunately, it is a new book, otherwise I would have stayed up all night to read it.

Author, do you know why your books are not popular? It's just that there are too few updates every day [anger] It's not enough to read. As a mature author, you should update more every day. 2 Chapters a day is not enough to read. It makes me want to keep reading [face covering]

It's good but too little 🙁, Tomato rarely writes such wonderful books about humans and ponies

As a newcomer to Station F, I'm sure the author must have read many similar books [laughing], especially the massage plot.

It's really good-looking and worth watching. The emotional lines are perfectly done. Can you update it quickly?