My Little Pony: A Bond to Another World

The greatest strength of this novel. The author's writing style is not the type that piles up rhetoric, but relies on details and actions to convey emotions. 😏 The author is very good at writing "what he did" in terms of "what he didn't do". There is less inner drama. This kind of blank space allows readers to experience the character's mood. It is much better than writing "she was moved" directly. It lays the groundwork and can pave the way for subsequent emotional dramas. 😏 The original characters of My Little Pony each have distinct personality labels. The most difficult thing for fandom is to not make the characters OOC (deviate from the original work), but also not to write them too flat. The original characters do not transcend the original work: such as Princess and Deswell 😄 Writing style: clean, restrained, graphic, with rich and long emotional lines. 👍👍👍👍 Some people think that the Crystal Empire will collapse and there are too many characters involved. I think this will be the climax of the book. 🤭

A very good Xiao Ma article. At first, I was a little worried about whether the author's writing style could be controlled because of the "first person" point of view. After all, most online articles are described from a third person perspective. However, after reading a few chapters, I can feel that the author's writing power and control are still very good, and it doesn't feel like a drama. The most important thing is that the emotional line of the two princesses has been described very well, and there are a few hidden touches. The emotional line is advancing at the right speed. It is now in a period of high ambiguity, and it is estimated that there are only one or two key events before the relationship is officially confirmed. At present, it seems that the protagonist may have experienced something later, which caused Luna to become Nightmare Moon according to the original work, and then it is estimated that it will be the M6 ​​chapter. I hope the author can continue to update it. This little horse story is ranked in the top three on Tomato. If it can be updated to the end with this quality and there are no surprises, it will probably be ranked first (currently the first and second place is a story about a million-word horse story and three sisters).

This is a "slow but worthwhile" book To be honest, the beginning of this book is not very friendly. A human who lost his memory traveled back to Equestria a thousand years ago. He doesn't know magic, has never read the original work, and doesn't even know why he is here. The first ten chapters are almost uneventful, except that the protagonist is slowly adapting to a strange world. If you are a reader who is spoiled by "cool articles", you will most likely quit in the first three chapters. But if you are willing to survive that seemingly ordinary daily life—— You will see how a person slowly finds his own place in a world that does not belong to him. You will see how a sun princess built a railway network connecting the entire kingdom alone during a thousand-year watch, just to wait for one person to wake up. You will see how a moon princess, because she loved too deeply and was too afraid, was eventually swallowed up by her own fear and turned into a nightmare. You will see a princess trapped in a political marriage, guarding a folding fan throughout her life, and before she died, she wrote, "I hope that when you return, you will smile and watch the chess game come to a successful conclusion." You will see a changeling queen, pushing her people into the abyss in order to find one person, screaming at the Sun Princess in the crater: "Where is he?!" This is not a story where the protagonist becomes stronger along the way. This is a story about "loss" and "waiting" - losing memory, losing home, losing loved ones; and then waiting for a thousand years, waiting for the prisoner on the moon to return, waiting for the person in the crystal coffin to open his eyes. If you are looking for a quick thrill, this book may not be suitable for you; if you are willing to slowly watch a person come to life, and are willing to shed tears for those characters who are destined to be unfulfilled—— So? See you in our story The first volume of Walking with the Sun and the Moon has been completed. The second volume of Walking with Friendship has been opened. (There are still many female protagonists)

This is a very good novel among the pony fans I have read, but it is not what I expected. It is undeniable that the author handles emotional relationships very well, as if he is watching a long drama, and the description is very detailed. But it's like a pony fanfic I reviewed before. It's good to watch but not suitable for people like me. The first volume is very well written. For this kind of second creation that is not part of the official plot, my evaluation is excellent. In the emotions and daily descriptions between the princess and the princess, it really made me experience the beauty. But in the second volume, half good and half inexplicable? In the second official plot, the writing is the same as in the first volume. My evaluation is excellent, but in the second official plot, the emotional descriptions in the second official plot, and the daily descriptions outside the official plot, I feel, uh, a little embarrassed, just like watching those long love TV dramas, making you sweet, but eating weirdly. Overall, this is a very good pony fanfic. The description of emotions, daily life, and plot creation are very good, but it is not suitable for me.

A very good original drama. The timeline goes back to a period when the country was just founded. The protagonist, as an ordinary person, constantly releases and returns kindness to this strange but warm world, and establishes a non-love bond with the character. As a slow-paced daily novel, it is very suitable for reading. It is rare in the current environment where formulaic novels are common and then discontinued. This work has a good control of the ratio of knife to sugar until the appearance of disorder in the first chapter, which deserves full marks, but here we still inform readers in advance to avoid possible surprises: 1. This article does not deviate from the scope of a cool article. The protagonist who is a traveler still has superhuman strength and resilience, and is also a container for the mixed magic of the harmonious and chaotic sun. He is not an ordinary person, so it is a bit uncomfortable to read (of course, if you are reading this kind of online article, don't worry) 2. Regarding the love between Centaur and Horse, although the outside world also likes to do this, it is a pity that I am not the third brother. Even though I like this kind of intimate interaction, I still can't accept the behavior of life insurance that I don't like Furui Kong. Moreover, I took it all and split the CP (Rhythm handled it very well) The image is a rare nanny form so that it can be separated from the princess form) In addition, I prefer the quality of pure friendship over love. The highest level of friendship and above is not enough lovers, which is also in line with the theme of the original drama, but these are not important, just skip this paragraph when reading. 3. The protagonist in Chapter 2 has become too perfect since he has absorbed all life. From the time he deliberately danced the most difficult dance and later sang on the same stage, he has surpassed the top of ordinary people and will not have any growth. It has become a collection of settings. Coupled with the publicity and acceptance, at this time, as a reader, I have long been unable to substitute the Mary Sue-style protagonist for myself. The above is not a problem for most people. After all, if you can combine the slow-burn healing novel with the harem pleasure novel, it has surpassed more than 90% of the tomato novels. I will still watch it selectively in the future, and it may become a new inspiration for my Anke. I hope the work will get better and better.

I haven't seen much of it yet, but the immersion from this first-person perspective is incredible. From the very beginning of the introduction, I felt that I would especially like this kind of slow-paced but extremely detailed pony novel, and I am honest. I have read the first volume completely word for word, and now I can clearly tell my former self, Hey! You tnd are really a genius. You read it right, the further you look at it, the better it gets. The emotional entanglements with the four heroines during the period and the last dance thousands of years ago are absolutely amazing (not just the protagonist). Tian is a real sweet knife and a real knife, but the knife is thorough and enjoyable! The characters will not be forced together for the sake of a happy reunion, just like a real thing that happened, which greatly enriched my impression of the two princesses from a thousand years ago. The images of Tia and Luna were finally complete. You will definitely make a profit after watching it! I can guarantee it! [Learned]

Recommended, a very pure pony fanfic, kindness, gentleness and sincerity are always the surefire skills. Maybe the reality is cruel, but if the world is kind to me, then I will respond gently with my existence: 'I am here, full of surprises, and I will turn around and give this light to the next morning. '

Many fanfics tend to neglect the description and portrayal of the original characters' personalities because they are based on the original work. However, this book spares no effort in describing this. I believe that even readers who have not read Baoli's original work will appreciate its charm. The adaptation and originality of the original plot can well reflect the author's writing skills. The author has carefully described the story of a thousand years ago instead of talking about m6 at the beginning, and built a parallel world with his own characteristics, which shows the author's ambition. The author's detailed descriptions, including character movements, language features, scene descriptions, etc., Are rare in many fan fictions nowadays. The characters and world outlined in this way are very vivid and three-dimensional.

I am not giving this book five stars randomly. I have read a lot of My Little Pony fanfics. Among them, there are many subtitles that are inexplicable. I fell in love with the protagonist in a day or two. It is very inexplicable. There are not so many emotional scenes. But this book is different. He writes about Xiao Ma's emotional drama in a more delicate way, filling in a lot of blanks. It doesn't mean that he fell in love with the other person within a day or two, and he also uses different personal pronouns to write about this thing which I think is very novel. It's not like I imagined that he might not understand it if he used another person's pronoun. I feel very comfortable watching the two princesses soaking up the rain and dew 🥰🥰[Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

Highly rated, I'm really looking forward to the story between the protagonist and Pinkie Pie in the second volume. Pinkie Pie, an optimistic pony, has all the basic values ​​too high. I don't know what kind of story will tempt her. I also hope that the author can give the protagonist a chaotic magic form, with some of the physical characteristics of an alicorn (which can also be said to be the result of gradual integration and assimilation with this world). I remember in the Siren Sisters movie, the M6 ​​in Pony High School would reveal its magical form under certain requirements.