I Became the Cat of the Male Supporting Character in an Apocalypse Novel, and the Plot Fell Apart

Generally speaking, it's okay, the content is quite attractive, and the characters are okay, but the author didn't control the time and space well, and the writing was very messy. Around chapter 40, I was trapped in a warehouse, and there was a wave of corpses outside the warehouse (thousands of people were blocked outside). Chapter 45 turned around and went to the company to sign articles in a suit. It was really messy. I mention this because the mess here is so obvious that I can't ignore it. The time and place were also written at random times, but it doesn't affect me so I can ignore it.

The first time I saw the Holy Father, I was so angry

It's very messy, with a lot of typos. It initially describes June 12th, when the heroine suddenly discovers that the novel is an apocalyptic novel, and says that the hero died three months after the apocalypse began. He also gave me the specific death date of September 15th. He went forward and said that the end of the world will begin on June 15th. However, he later said that there are still three months until the end of the world, and he also said that September 15th is the beginning of the end of the world. This was the first messy point, but it got over by make do. She then began to recall that the original female protagonist had never met the male protagonist before the apocalypse began, saying that they only met after it began. The heroine also suspected it was the butterfly effect, but later the original heroine came to deliver something. The heroine said there that in the original book, the original heroine gave this food to the male protagonist, which made the male protagonist bad. Why? I was still wondering if someone else gave it to me, but I have never seen it. This can also fool myself, but later on the original heroine frequently looked for the male protagonist. Then he began to recall that the heroine frequently looked for the hero in the original book because she wanted to get closer to him and prepare for the end of the world. The female protagonist has just begun to communicate with the male protagonist. With Yes and No, the male protagonist asks him some questions. The female protagonist can understand them, can type, and can tell the male protagonist that it is the end of the world. Then the male protagonist started to save things. As a result, when it came to some expressions later, the heroine started to pretend to be a cat again. Sometimes she didn't understand it, which is normal. Everyone can see that a cat can't do this. This can also be used to fool people, saying that the male protagonist may really have no suspicion. Then later on, the male protagonist has already asked the female protagonist what she is. As a result, the subsequent chapters feel like repeating this chapter and asking the female protagonist what are you? The male protagonist has already written and bought some books about zombies, and the female protagonist has also warned him that the end of the world is coming. As a result, the male protagonist started to ask what it was, and then the female protagonist typed that it was the end of the world, and then asked the female protagonist if it was a zombie or something? The logic is very confusing. The heroine brought the heroine to the company because he said he was worried about it, but when he brought the heroine to the company later, the heroine described in her mind that this was the first time she followed the hero to the company. One has 12 cards and the other has 19 cards. I remember them clearly. I think it's just starting from chapter 26 that it feels like it's resetting some of the previous chapters. It was clearly written at the beginning that the 16-day countdown to the end of the world was about to begin, and the male protagonist began to ask the female protagonist again, what do you want to tell me? I have asked this question several times before, and then I started fighting the apocalypse again. Doesn't your hero already know it? Then I asked him how many days there were left, and he was told that there were 90 days left. The three-month chapter begins again. Lots and lots. It means things that have already been done, and things that have been said will either start to be repeated or start to contradict later. Damn, I wanted to read a novel in the middle of the night, and I became excited while reading it. I think this novel should be revised forward. Really confused

The timeline is very confusing. There will be a countdown to March 1st. The plot is also very messy. After I learned that cats can turn into humans, the plot was repeated (if it was time reshaping, I didn't say it, but the repetition of the plot made the viewing experience very bad). After reading almost fifty chapters, I feel that the author is more suitable for writing short stories or quick time travels. If you want to write a long story, you should carefully adjust the timeline. The plot is not very interesting, and Gu and Mao are also pretty useless. Seeing this, I feel that apart from the interesting development of pigeon eyeliner and stray cat eyeliner for kittens, there is nothing interesting about it (personal opinion), but the stray cat just appeared and disappeared. The writing by the original heroine named Su was also okay. It's very confusing up and down. It feels like there are too many characters for the author to write. Several supporting characters appear but they have no highlights or memorable points. It might be better to focus on writing only a few characters. (The above are purely personal opinions and can be deleted)

Wc, how can I put it in a way that gives people the feeling that the protagonist can't be carried around at all? It's better to just die.

The plot is too messy, some chapters are repeated several times, some skipped a section, and the heroine clearly confessed her identity earlier and said that she was a human in her previous life and knew that she could become a human. Later, she was surprised to see the heroine become a human again. This is too strange. Later, the original male protagonist also discovered the heroine's secret. A few chapters later, it was stated that the original male protagonist thought this cat was too smart. I was confused when I saw it! We all know that the heroine used to be a human, so isn't it normal for her to be very smart? The plot is too confusing.

In fact, this kind of plot is very interesting when written normally, but the male protagonist is portrayed as a silly and sweet character, or is that the character's character? For example, if I have to go to the company for a meeting on the day of the apocalypse, I think it's very stupid. I have to write down a reason. Workaholics don't do this, right? Secondly, I don't know why I have to describe the male protagonist repeatedly confirming the identity of the female protagonist in her previous life. Is it because I don't know what to write and then forcefully sensationalizes it? The repeated topics that appeared many times even made me wonder whether it was me who had lost my memory or the male protagonist who had lost his memory. If the subject matter hadn't attracted me so much, it would have been difficult for me to keep reading to the end. I hope the author can improve upon it.

I haven't finished reading it, but I really can't help but comment on it. Why do you feel like the second male lead in each plot doesn't follow the plot of the previous chapter? For example, isn't this the first time the heroine has transformed? Isn't this the first time you have cat ears? Why do the questions he asks seem to be repeated every time? It's like seeing it for the first time. And the plot of each chapter is a bit similar. That feeling I just discovered earlier. The same question is asked again after Chapter 3. What's even more confusing is that I know it. What documents did he sign on the last day of the zombie outbreak? Don't you think it's strange? If he doesn't go, he won't be bitten. There is also a plot about going to his father's basement or something, but then, there are too many zombies to go there. But why did he have a way to go to the company to sign? It doesn't feel like the article is not connected to the previous chapter, but that chapter is the first. I looked a little confused and said it anyway. The order of the contents of each chapter is out of order, and didn't the one on the rooftop have Captain Huang from the security team at the beginning? Probably escorted up. But why were they the only two left on the rooftop? Could it be? And the assistant from the beginning. So weird. I can't understand it.

The content is confusing. It has been written in the front that Snowball's typing has been discovered. The male protagonist knows that Snowball can type and read books. However, it is written in the back as if the male protagonist has just found out. Don't you feel very contradictory? Does an event happen repeatedly? And I don't even want to talk about General Gray. When he first appeared, he brought a letter to Snowball, but when he appeared for the second time, he was named General Gray. Did AI write it for him?

It's not good-looking. The male protagonist is both trusting and suspicious. Either he always trusts or he always doubts. He really doesn't have the patience to doubt again and again. He knows that after the apocalypse, one man and one cat openly show his strangeness to warn others... And there are some others that I don't even bother to say.