HP: Carvis Dursley Does Not Exist

It's nice to read. I like the faint pseudo-human feeling of the protagonist, who is even better... When I read a novel, I will choose a song cycle that suits the book. For this book, I rarely chose There's Something Happening. You can listen to a very familiar song. It sounds more confusing. This basically represents my feelings towards the protagonist...

It's really very good-looking. It's my favorite among all the Harry Potter fanfics I've read. How can I put it this way? The characters are very natural and the emotions are very smooth. There is no over-blackening or whitewashing of either side. The character selection is also very novel.

This! What! Good! Look! Of! ! There are few OOC situations, and I think it is acceptable to the original author (I have not seen the movie). Because this is mainly the story of the protagonist Xiaoka, Harry and others only appear as supporting characters. Suitable for readers who like HP's world view and chaos and kindness (?) (.) But I really want to lament why not many people have watched it. I think the characters are cute... The plot is also good... I am very attentive when I occasionally stop to write details... It has a flavor of the magical world... The most important thing is why it only has a score of 7.7... I think this book deserves 9 points and up... (Purely personal opinion, don't like it, don't criticize it, don't downvote it, don't belittle it) But to a certain extent, it is also a work that hit my xp teeth! It's not that Xiaoka is so beautiful, I'm obsessed with him doing bad things. The main thing is that I have a feeling of pity for the ignorant soul that turned from chaotic kindness to absolute evil (…) (If I say any more, it's a bit inconsistent with the core values. Meow) Anyway, I recommend everyone to read it! It's not a loss to invest in shares

How can I put it, this kind of alien protagonist is so amazing. Although it is the world view of Harry Potter, this protagonist himself breaks the rules and is a rare kind. In terms of personality, he is actually a species that is already crazy. When he pretends to be a normal person and does not hinder himself, he will get along with others according to the code of conduct of normal people. Once this thing is harmful to himself, he will start to go into a black mode. He does not have the morals of ordinary people, but unexpectedly it is very refreshing to watch. I have been reading it for several days. Generally speaking, this novel can be summarized as a story about a created creature who is always looking for his mother and his origin. Overall, it is very good. The author, please be sure to finish it.

Looking forward to the follow-up development, this is the best HP fanfic I have seen recently, and it ranks among the top among all the fanfics I have seen. I really like the psychological portrayal of the protagonist, including some interactions with other beings. There is a strong sense of inhumanity. I love it so much. While this kind of character is easy to dislike, it is very reasonable for him to become evil step by step as the plot develops - so let us shout out, whose fault is it? It's fate! [Crying] It's just because it's still being serialized and the chapter events haven't been completed yet, so I'm going to take care of it first. It's too difficult to wait for more.

It's been a long time since I gave a rating. Really... I actually forgot about book reviews. I forgot about them for several years. Help... It's a very interesting book. I really like the chaotic and kind-hearted feeling of the protagonist in the early stage! I feel that the blackening in the later stage is also very cool! The author's writing is superb! The protagonist's setting is also interesting, keep up the good work and go boldly!

Psychological thriller literature welcomes new talent (not) To be honest, it feels like Xiaoka's life is very difficult. All kinds of things pile up and make him breathless. Step by step, he is moving towards a destined ending that I have seen in the copy. Is all this a link of fate? Is it irreversible? Why is he getting further and further away from everything that seems happy/healthy? He is indeed not a good person, but many things push him towards the dark side. If he wants to do good things, he will be punished, and doing bad things seems to be much easier. This feeling is so depressing. Oh, Xiaoka. Well. Being a bad guy is easy and refreshing, but there are some things that can never come back after crossing this boundary. He couldn't turn back, he was on a slippery slope without realizing it. The misunderstanding is getting deeper and deeper, and the gap with the bright side is becoming more and more irreconcilable. There is a feeling of watching everything collapse and being unable to do anything. This narrative style is also very interesting. Seriously fall in love with the author. But it's objectification. It's as dehumanizing as raising a pet to those who are interested. That's good. . I don't care if Xiaoka can get everything he wants. By the way, I would like to watch the warm interaction between Xiaoka and the pets to satisfy me xp Seeing that it is becoming increasingly impossible to look back later, I feel relieved. The blackening is indeed exciting, but it is still very sad. Ka, you are destined to be lonely, you have to fight against fate, you have to fight against God. Those who are enveloped by the light are all against you, and those who are chosen by God are all your enemies. Ka had a lot of identity crises at the beginning, and there were a lot of horrible things that he couldn't cope with, but he lacked anyone he trusted (except the store manager, maybe. Oops, mom...) He was naturally helpless to authorities because of his identity, and he was helpless, which made me so sad. Later, he gradually became stronger, but this kind of strength went against all the light. His respect for life/humanity also declined all the way, and his self-understanding was slowly groping for shape. As for the final result, I can only say that there is no guardian with normal views in his life to guide him (although this child is not very kind by nature.), And his understanding of himself is very strange. Fortunately, nothing weird happened in the end (no). I watched this process but didn't feel any violation. To put it bluntly, it made people's hair stand on end. It can be said to be discomfort. Everything seems reasonable, everything seems inevitable. Destiny... All in all, it looks very depressing and makes me feel hairy. Like to pinch! Oops, I'm seriously in love with Cam. Regarding the fuzzy part of his three views, I still restrained myself, but because of the concept of fate, good and evil, Ka must be very bipolar in his view, as if once he goes in one direction and the other, there will be nothing left and cannot be restored, and this seems to be true in his life. But who could he turn to for help? The very existence of a positive character is a threat to him. Alas, I also hope that I can look back anytime. Hope this guy is happy. .

Ah, is this God? Perfectly adding your own settings into the fan fiction, it's not too out of the ordinary, just like the world should be like this, or in other words, it's more perfect this way. I think the real author is God. . It's no longer in the realm of humans. The writing is so good, the rhythm is so good, and the plot is so good. It's like a god who can write a book that is a hit. The setting is very novel and imaginative, and the author also has terrifying energy in writing. Oh my God, this is God. . Great, the serialization even highlights the vitality that is different from the article style, God. . . .

It's nice to watch, I like the setting very much, the plot is well developed, and it feels like there's a lot of foreshadowing

It's a great article. There's not a lot of fighting power. The new setting also has the author's own understanding. It seems that he wrote the article with great care [Blow a kiss]. I'm really looking forward to the plot in the future when Xiao Ka becomes the Dark Lord and raises a ferret. The character of the protagonist is so cool [Eating Melon]

It looks good now, let's take a closer look😋😋

The male protagonist has a very interesting character. As long as you don't step on my bad side, I can tolerate you 10,000%. But he will be extremely irritable after being stepped on. And his personality is that of a normal person on the surface, but actually epileptic. The portrayal is very good, with a normal appearance suppressing a very twisted heart.

I highly recommend it. It is my favorite HP fanfic I have read so far. The author is not the kind of mindless fanfic. The writing is very good and the narrative is smooth without any sense of embarrassment. Slytherin is not full of malice (I really like the prefect sister). And Carl is really cute and not obvious. I occasionally feel cute in some small links. He is not weak. He is venomous and smart. Every character feels very alive. I love you so much, teacher. I will propose to you directly with a bouquet of roses. [Adoration] [Adoration]

My Thunder Mamma Mia, the writing is so good, I just want to take some health care👁👅👁

Overall, I like the protagonist's epileptic character. I hope the teacher can make more chapters.

This is the first hp fanfic I have read. The protagonist looks very charming. Please keep updating the author. I like this book very much and am looking forward to the future plot. I will always support and follow the author! It's delicious. I love eating www. This Xiaoka and the store manager must have good teeth and be happy! ! And it's not black at all (whispering. Ing)

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

It feels good, it suits my taste, I really like this style and the character of the protagonist

I don't know, it looks good, looks good? Is it the same as writing an essay? I am too lazy to write, so I say: Wonderful[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

God specially asked me to click on this article before school started. It's so delicious... Even if it's a deprived meal, I'll die without regrets!

It's really good-looking. Now that I see it, it's basically just the secret feeling of getting XP. I'm a little short of it. Really nice to look at. This is the one that I think suits my taste the most among the Harry Potter fanfics besides the Professor one.

It's been a long time since I read such an interesting article. Originally, Wen Huang couldn't find Wen Kai for a long time, but when he saw the interesting content in this article, he clicked in. Then I saw that the teacher was following me more closely now. I felt that the setting and the direction of the story were very interesting, and the progress was faster and more out-of-the-box.

The teacher's writing is really good, the writing is very smooth, and the story development is logical. These descriptions can describe every excellent novel, but just using them to comment on the work written by the teacher is too thin. There are many attractive points about this book, among which I think the most outstanding point is the grasp of the character's personality. The protagonist is undoubtedly the core of the development of every story. Whether it is a bright and one-sided character like the protagonist in most fairy tales and fables, or a complex and multi-faceted character like the protagonist in a novel, it requires painstaking efforts to portray. The teacher's shaping of little Kavis is undoubtedly successful. As the story develops, we can clearly feel his growth and changes in his mentality (the second brush will feel more clear), and all of this is traceable and reasonable. From his childhood living environment to his later experiences, it is gradually and clearly shaped around the core character traits of Xiaoka itself. Supporting characters also play an important role in the story, especially in fan works. It's normal for everyone to have different understandings of characters, and it's normal for fan creations to be OOC, but many fan creators really make people doubt whether they have actually read the original work, and many even just regard a certain character as a cover to highlight their own protagonist. The teacher's portrayal of each character is great. In addition, the teacher's writing style is also very good. The success of the story development and character creation is absolutely inseparable from the teacher's writing style. There are not too many gorgeous descriptions or word stacking, but it can well show the characteristics of the characters or the atmosphere of the environment. The teacher's book is simply a masterpiece. The quality is one of the best among fans. Teacher, I can believe that this book will become popular as long as you give it some time.

Very very very beautiful The subject matter is very fresh, the writing is online, and the logic is amazing. The protagonist's character is very strong but not fluffy in the reading. The interpersonal relationships are also written very well. The transformation of the relationship with Malfoy is particularly smooth and reasonable, and there is no OOC Snake Yard characteristic at all. The Lezi person written in the introduction is a real Lezi. Benefiting from the author's strong writing style, the humor is natural and not greasy at all. All in all, it's really good-looking. The author must work hard and update it🫰

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is great and the protagonist's character and over-the-top personality are great, but I really can't bear the darkening process. It's a bit of a knife, so I decided to fatten up and see the results [please update]

Good looking ˗ˋˏᰔᩚˎˊ˗ Just cut the black and green tea man😋 This protagonist feels so inhuman. He looks normal on the surface... But is horribly twisted at the core. It's like a ceiling!

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It's so beautiful and there's basically no OOC.

Very beautiful and very British.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging, ah they they are so pretty! ! ! I wish I could lock the author in a dark room and give me a hundred more chapters! Just like this smell! Cool! Xiaoka works hard to live well, Xiaoka is a good author, and the author works hard to write, and the author is also good