Mortalchronicle of Immortal Cultivation Through Mei Ning

The writing is really good, the characters are not OOC at all, things develop very naturally, the relationship between the two is really good, and I can see the story of Mei Ning and Han Li developing into a more determined person.

Good looking and recommended! The development of the plot is reasonable, but it's a pity that it's only just started, so it's not enough to watch.

It's super well written, the best of all the fanfics I've seen so far. Unfortunately, the only shortcoming is that there are too few. It would be nice if I could write more. I particularly like the large writing style. I really like this style. It is natural and smooth, real and warm, and there is no mess. I really want to continue writing it!

Very well written, not OOC at all [shy] It's not enough to read. It would be better if it could be longer. Could the author please open another book [crying][crying]

Very well written, I like it

It's quite reasonable and you can read on.

This fanfic is so beautiful, the author is great, you have to work hard, keep writing, and don't make it bad.

When I first watched the anime, I felt that Mei Ning was too cowardly. If she had been more determined, would the outcome have been different? Thank you to the author for showing me a different Mei Ning and different results.

Good, the character design is consistent with the original work

It's very well written.

Super pretty, not inconsistent at all

Although it is very short, it is well written. This Han Li is not OOC at all, he is still the calm and cautious Han Li.

It's so beautiful, it fits the characters, the sweet love, the lovely Mei Ning, the restrained Han Laomo, and the smooth plot