Touch the Corpse on the Konoha Front Line, and I'll Create the Immortal Body!

The writing is good, but the conflicts feel a bit deliberate. . .

So far, it's actually okay. The protagonist has grown up quickly enough, but how can I put it, it always feels like a very urgent feeling. Someone commented earlier that it has an apocalyptic flavor. I think it's about the same. I look forward to the follow-up development.

The writing is good, and it doesn't seem like the local writing style is more sophisticated. It's just that the combat power and plot advance too quickly, and it's completely a one-man show for the protagonist, which reduces some other fun. But overall the quality is higher than 90% of similar local products.

After seeing Chapter 27, the logic is surprisingly good. At this level, it can be put on the shelves at the starting point.

It's okay, it's very unique, and it's fast to advance, it doesn't delay or stress the combat effectiveness.

The writing is indeed good. It's a pity even on Tomato. It's rare that I don't pretend to be awesome and I must support it.

The writing is good, but the author probably doesn't follow Naruto completely, nor does he have a complete understanding of Naruto's setting. Naruto fans will find it very alienating, and ordinary readers who don't know much about Naruto will find it much better. But this is fanfic, who is it intended to be written for [face covering]

It can be seen that it is a Machiavellian novel in the skin of Naruto. The timeline of the original work is a bit inconsistent. People who are interested in the original work may not like it, but overall it is still worth watching.

Add more combat chapters. The last 100 or so chapters have been too much preparation for farming. I feel that the timeline of the first 200 chapters is almost complete. The recently opened timeline can be explored again. There is a lot of material that can be used to focus on the ninja world. The alien setting in Naruto's original novel is too difficult to maintain. It's best not to introduce the new timeline too early.

Is the ability of the system useful for the reincarnation of the dirty earth? If it is useful, the strength of those who use Bai Jue as a sacrifice to absorb the dirty earth will rise in a straight line. It's getting more and more watery, and the words behind it are all "ai water". For the sake of the plot, everything is reserved. The protagonist's strength is a mystery, and he will be immortal if he is crushed in various ways.

It's very easy to open and the content is very smooth.

A history of common people's struggle, not bad, I love watching it, much better than the previous ones

Come on, author! Write a satisfying work!

You wrote about human nature very clearly. What have you been writing about these past few days? There are cheats and I'm like a turtle.

Come on 💪very good

The protagonist is finally not an Uchiha,

"The information said there are still forty-eight hours." Morikawa Ye took out a handful of dry food mixed with metal powder exchanged from the system and stuffed it into his mouth. It was to replenish physical strength, "but that information was used to deceive people." What does AI text mean? Chapter 48

The writing power is still very good. I don't understand why the score is so low. Is it not white enough?

It's hard to criticize, but it's very interesting and has a good story. The author put his heart into it.

People can read it at a glance

This book is really good on Rotten Tomatoes. Why is no one watching? . . .

It's quite interesting and well written, but I feel like the time relationship between the characters doesn't seem right.

I have seen the latest chapter and there is nothing to say. It is 5 stars. I hope the author will maintain his style and keep up the good work.

The content is tight and the road to wealth will be over in a few days.

This is the real battlefield world

The author's ninjutsu ideas are wild and unconstrained [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Traps are very useful. There aren't many detailed descriptions of tactical traps in ninja literature.

Wonderful, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise

Good-looking, very good, five-star rating

The scene is real, the rise of the little guy