Girls Band: Shoko Toyokawa's Blade

The subject matter is novel. Although most of the plot is a retelling of the plot, it is not said to be particularly boring. As for the main characters, the author can actually say that he has changed some characters, especially Meow Dream. The look and feel is much better than the original show. However, I don't know how the author will stop the Meow Dream part later in the plot. If he wants to make a big explosion, he will actually fall into the strange logic of the original show. Some of the early text can be modified appropriately. Part of the logic, such as the tuition fee, is a bit tricky. After Mizuho has paid the tuition for the protagonist, will he not pay it to his daughter? I stayed up late and read a lot of it. Overall, this is a fanfic that makes me feel sick to my stomach and has good literary quality.

The writing is smooth and well-written. The auspicious animal is still the same auspicious animal. It feels right. The other characters are also well-written. The only shortcoming in the plot is that the author doesn't seem to want the protagonist to be too involved in the non-Bang band. In terms of the plot, most of the gbc side still follows the original plot, and some places are not suitable. It's a pity that the author said that it will be finished after the manuscript is saved. Apart from feeling a little irresponsible, I can only wish the author happiness. Because I really don't feel that being tired of the community rhythm is a valid reason for quitting the game. I feel that I am tired of writing; and I don't think that Bang's voice actor cannot be separated from Bang's character. Otherwise, do all the people who watch the show on site B really care about the collapse of the house of the person they love? I don't think so. It is normal for most people not to care about the people in the concert, not to have seen it, or not to care about Bang's concert after watching it. If the author really gives up because he can't distinguish this point, then I can only say that the value of Kao Ge's speech many years ago is still rising.

At present, the manuscript has been written to 400,000 words, so please feel free to read it. After absorbing the lessons of the previous book, I feel that the writing rhythm of this one is better. The bands involved are gbc, mygo, Hen Card + Lonely Rock, and there may be other guest appearances. I will make up for the abrupt parts of the plot, such as the sudden acquaintance, in the extras, because writing it directly in the main text will look too watery. Finally, please help me remind me to update more. If you have any suitable ideas or anything you think is unreasonable, you can put it forward. I will correct it and write an extra chapter using your ideas.

The writing is very good, especially the relationship with Nina and Nina. The relationship is very wonderful, and cb is really good. The existence of the heroine also has a reasonable impact on the establishment and dissolution of Ku Laixi Cry. At present, the heroine and Xiangzi are still in a cold war. I don't know how the author will write it later, but it looks very good so far. However, I felt that the heroine and Ai Yin were a little too forceful in handling the conflict over joining the band, and it was a bit strange that Ai Yin and Su Shi later discussed the band in front of the heroine. So far, this book is a top-notch work on the band and is well worth reading. [Blowing kiss]

The writing is quite good, the plot is not too stomach-churning, the emotional outpouring is just what I like, and the age and seniority design of the characters is also very clever. The only thing that is relatively weak is that Dahui, the radio series, is not easy to deal with. Also, please recommend novels with the old Bang Bang team and more scenes. After that, the level of creation dropped significantly, and people lost their soaring interest in reading. The plot began to align with the original work, losing its original vitality. (The content in the original part is really much better than participating in the original part)

Temporary record: The plot is good, the writing is plain, the characters are okay, and there are no poisonous points yet. Except for the slightly faster pace, it doesn't hurt. Good book, come and read

It's so beautiful, update soon, don't make me beg you😡Don't make me beg you😡Don't make me beg you😡Don't make me beg you😡Don't make me beg you😡

It's not bad that there are not many articles about the band. I found a better one. Keep up the good work (˵>ㅿ<˵)♡

I feel pretty good after reading the first few chapters, so I'll give it a five-star rating first [take a closer look]

So pretty! I said that girl band members must be girls, do you understand?

How can I put it? It feels okay, but if I look closely, I feel that the logic needs to be a little smoother.

Mouth melon! It's so painful! It's so painful! ! I just want to watch "Large Documentary: My Captain and My Sister Are Dating" [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out]

Very, very good band fanfic

Five-star support

Wuhu Still Lily Niu Fu

Very good, very emotional

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's a strange read. It has no obvious shortcomings and is not very attractive. It does not deviate from the original plot and does not have the gravity unfolding in the imagination. Let's take a look at it later.

Needless to say, I give the boss a five-star rating.

Thank you Tomato for allowing me to read such a delicious book, come on Hajisu, wow [shy][shy]

Yoxi Yoxi, a rare type that I like

It's really good-looking, and it's one of the best-looking movies I've seen.

This is a very good band fanfic. To be honest, I really like the character of Meowth, but the plot of the anime is hard to explain in one sentence. This book allowed me to see the Meowth in my heart. Anyway, good luck to the author.

It seems okay so far, not too bad. Who is the main character CP? 🤔