Mingchao: Start by Saving Classmate Xiao Ai

I would like to thank you all for supporting my book. If you have any questions, you can ask them. I will read them one by one and I will change any bad things. Here I see some problems that everyone has reported. First of all, it is too bland, right? Well, I'm not very good at writing combat stories. I will solve this problem in the follow-up, and I won't blindly write about daily life. There is also the issue of multiple female protagonists and single female protagonists. This is not clear. I will use Q&A to listen to readers' opinions in the follow-up. There are also too few or too many words in the Drifter. Yu Jingjian, this is the emotional progression process I wrote. I also realized that it is indeed a bit uncomfortable. I will change the character in the future. I would like to thank all readers again for your support and criticism. I will seriously read your suggestions and make changes. I hope readers can enjoy reading it!

"Meeting you that day in the sky full of snowflakes was the most beautiful thing that ever happened to me." It's a very good little love story. Although there is a flaw in the middle that suddenly adds to the character, it's good to realize that it can be corrected. Come on, author, you must keep writing it!

I'll give it four stars. The daily writing is very detailed. Please tell me the reason why I deducted one star. The world view is not developed. At the beginning, it was mentioned that other things were used to replace Aemi to block the door. This seemed to imply that the world view was still Solaris in the game, but later there was no mention of Biaozi running around as a savior. In the game, Biaozi was not idle while taking in Amis, and had been promoting salvation-related work at Star Torch Academy. This leads to the fact that the daily life with Aemi is very sweet, but there is no description of what Piaozi did besides accompanying Aemi. It feels like a daily urban novel written with the characters of Aemi and Piaozi.

It looks good, I like to read it, but if you, the author, dare to write about knives, you are screwed, just wait. 666, The author actually made a big change, and asked me to read it again, so let me lose one star from the five stars.

I love you, author. You must keep writing. I'll support you by watching the ads [blowing kiss]

The damn prison finally took out the original version \^O^/

It's a good time. Although I always like to read harem stories, this time I really feel that Xiao Ai deserves all the love of a wanderer. I praise the great God of pure love🤚😭🤚

The description is very beautiful, with the beauty of prose, and it makes my body feel warm when I look at it. There is also a yandere Shura field, too strong and mouthy But at the same time, because it is a Mingchao fanfic, not many people will read it, and because it is in the first person, some people will be discouraged. If you can accept the first person, then this book is a masterpiece

Generally speaking, there is no problem. In the early stage, I felt that the protagonist was like a human-machine who only said "hmm". Later, I felt that the protagonist would be more "live". However, I personally think that Amis could be more lively.

Great, this is the article I like, this is the author I like [blowing kiss]

Okay, so far the writing is very good and sweet. I'm looking forward to the plot after starting the main story [laughing] Things have changed a bit in the next few chapters. When opening other character lines, it was too perfunctory and gave me a sloppy feeling. I hope it can be completed later.

Isn't it possible to have a single heroine named Aemi? Can't you raise Cassia as your daughter? You can't have a female protagonist, right?

It's pretty good, the writing is very good, and it's very comfortable to read. To be honest, I thought you would just give up on this book, but I really didn't expect you would just rewrite the previous overturn. I remembered that I still had this book today, so I came back to take a look at it, but this glance made me discover a new world. I also read the author's letter of apology. Even if the results of your book are not good later, I will recognize you, at least you are a real author [Like]

It's Amis who's interested in me, come on! ! ! Author

Very nice, I like it very much

It's good to watch. I'd love to see more (＾ω＾)

I read it as prose

Needless to say, just five stars.

Author, I promoted Kouya to you on my channel [salute]

It's beautiful. I like the content and must give it five stars.

A peaceful life is the most precious and very good. [Blowing kiss]

Let me give you another good review∠( ᐛ ∠)＿, keep up the good work

It's beautiful, first person, so I gave it four stars.

It looks good, I just like watching this kind of bland stuff [laughs]

Give you a good review ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿

If I hadn't looked at the back, I almost would have been heartbroken.

I don't know why, I only feel sad, not sweet... I feel like the main character's speech is a bit monotonous, giving me a bland, indifferent look. It could be changed.

Yes, the daily writing is quite good. Xiao Ai is very cute like this.