Honkai: Star Rail: At the Crime Scene, I Work for Yaoguang

One of the characteristics of Star Iron is that many characters are over hundreds of years old, but in the plot, they only have a few words with the Pioneers, and Star Iron officials only give a rough background and personality of the characters, such as Fu Xuan Lingsha Mirror Style. I think a good fanfic can supplement the background stories of the characters without affecting the main storyline of Xingtie at all (or slightly changing a certain chapter so that they will not be backstabbed), making it enjoyable for readers, without affecting the characters' origins at all. This is the case with this book. The past of Yaoguang and Fuxuan does not affect the plot after Jingtian's death at all, and the characters of Yaoguang and Fuxuan are completely consistent with the existing characters without OOC. It would be no problem if you put this story into the plot of Star Rail

The emotional grasp is very good, making readers unable to extricate themselves from the book. I don't play Bengtie, but I like Yaoguang. In the article, whether the protagonist is funny, serious, or sad, it is all immersive. Luo Xiaoyou's suicide was unexpected. Just like the protagonist, we had no idea that such a cute little girl would choose the path of suicide. Maybe a copper coin doesn't mean anything, but because of this copper coin, we and the protagonist have some sympathy, some connection, and some empathy. In addition, the author will update it quickly, it is not enough to read 🤭🤭🤭

I am deeply sorry for what you said about Yunxi being soft and turtle. I blame me for not being able to do it like Long Aotian, and I blame me for writing too slowly so that you can only see the fragile side of a human being. If the emotions are seven emotions and six desires, then the person in front of you is not complete. When a person slowly goes through all the emotions in a strange world, then is this person still a simple person? Or maybe he doesn't know what kind of person he is, and how he will choose whether he is a human or a god in the end. The mask has too many meanings, but the most discussed meaning is always whether the mask is put on or taken off, and it is still you or not. I am sorry that my short knowledge can only allow me to write about the daily lives of two people in this way. From my perspective, for a person who has just arrived in this world and understands that he has no ability except to live for a long time, learning to find attachment is the right answer. What I also want you to see is how a coward slowly turns gray. As for the frustration you mentioned, I'm sorry, I can't change it. Part of it is my own experience, although it has an ending with her story, but I still wrote it unconsciously. Some of the things I read and thought about after experiencing related things led me to write this book, and I decided to put them together because of playing this game. I can't be perfect and I don't need to be perfect. I just need to write the story I have thought of and show it to you. This is the job that an author should do. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. Good and bad coexist. Good reviews and bad reviews are the result of the logical expression of different people's thinking. I will not deny or evaluate. What you see from this book is entirely up to you. Whether you see soft, brittle, black and white, good, evil, or gray, it's all your own conclusion. After posting this comment, it is natural whether you disagree, agree, or refute. My comment on this is: Welcome Because no matter good or bad, the evaluation he gave me after you read it is affirmative rather than derogatory.

This book "Beng Tie: I'll ask Yaoguang if I have something to do, and I'll eat my soft rice" is really right! The perfect fusion of Xianzhou's sense of fate and joyful nonsense is simply a source of happiness. The protagonist, Taoist priest Yun Xi, is very funny in his daily routine. His outrageous operation of selling a driver's license ten times a month is coupled with the famous line "Look for a girl when you have something to do", which instantly creates a comedy effect. And when the detective combination of "Yun tide speaks and Yao Guang takes action" is formed, the contrast is full of cuteness. On one side is the Xianyu tenant's mischief, on the other side is General Rong Tao's strategizing. This kind of interaction between happy enemies is both funny and annoying. The fairy boat murder case and sinister plot in the plot are full of suspense, and combined with the absurd style of Happy Life, the reasoning process is full of variables. The author portrays the mystery and power of Yao Guang, and the laziness and intelligence of Yun tide very deeply. It is both relaxing and suspenseful to read. It is definitely a masterpiece among Beng Tie fans! Do you want me to write a shorter "one-click copy" version for you that is suitable for posting in the comment area?

Seeing that now it is different from the ordinary Bengtiewen. This book is a real volume when it is connected from the first volume to the second volume. Luo Xiaoyou's sentence "You are also a murderer" is the cause, and Yun tide's take on Bai Jinshan's heart is the result. The real theme of the two volumes is human nature in the gray area. Because humans are complex creatures, the protagonist's fate is the happy one, which represents complex uncertain factors. But Luo Xiaoyou's sentence in the first volume: "Wolves are greedy. They always shed foul-smelling saliva, and stare at the prey with their protruding eyes. Then, they swarm up until they tear the prey into pieces and are full, without even wiping their mouths. But because of this, they huddle in the darkness, fearing the fire, and fearing that if they get a trace of it, they will be burned completely and fall into the abyss." It's really awesome. This sentence is talking about the person who killed her brother. Those who hide behind and enjoy the benefits are also talking about herself. Chen Chen seems to be a mastermind. He thinks he is right but choosing to surrender is questioning himself. However, betting that Yunxi will kill someone is also a gray area. Because Bai Jinshan had no money to treat his wife and squeezed those people, their hearts changed and then he killed Hua Deming to satisfy his desires, which was also gray. Shen Han is a tool used by people to make the difference between a destiny and a lifeless path. Yun tide is also gray, but I don't see his evil side and I feel that there is a big wave. There is a detail in Chapter 54 that the author feels is: I pretend to be sweet when Yao Guang is here, but you try when Yao Guang is not there. Yun tide has begun to change. On the surface, he is still the little Taoist priest who was bullied by Yao Guang. But as he goes on, he becomes less and less defined. It feels like the two of them definitely have a lot of power. There is only one sentence written in the two volumes: People walk in black and white, but they cannot define black and white because when they are at the fork in the road between black and white, some people choose the road that does not exist in the middle, gray. People are both the question and the answer. Because Yun tide didn't just kill Bai Jinshan, he also took Bai Jinshan's heart, turning the original answer of "I am a human being" into a question. So when reading this book, what you really want to see is these and the details of the characters' interactions and burials. It's really awesome. Those who can't understand the reading and talk about it in less than thirty minutes are outrageous.

It's super good-looking, and you can also learn some knowledge. I also like to watch the plot of this kind of criminal detective case, and writing it slower can make the characters more delicate. Come on, the author, and look forward to the subsequent plot development [Love][Love][Love]

Respected by: Gong Shuo It has been three hours since you stopped writing the previous chapter. Every time I recall the unresolved matter at the end of the chapter, I feel like there are a hundred claws scratching my heart, thinking about it over and over, and I can't sleep peacefully. In the morning and dusk, I often look at the screen, hoping to see traces of new works. However, as far as I can see, there are only old scrolls, which make me feel as if I have lost them. The characters in the book are either in crisis or facing disaster, and they are all in critical situations. For example, a lone boat encounters a stormy sea, or a strong man encounters a powerful enemy. The ups and downs of his life and the entanglement of his emotions are unforgettable. We speculated day and night, and even composed a continuation chapter in our dreams, but in the end it was not your master's writing, and it was difficult to achieve the subtlety. I am well aware of the difficulty of writing, and it takes a lot of effort to carefully consider each word and sentence. However, the story here is just like the wine is about to be cooked, and the arrow is on the string. Everyone is looking forward to it, eager for the new chapter for a long time! If you don't give up and use your time to make the follow-up see the light of day, then we are very lucky. We are willing to follow the example of the dog and horse, pray for the stars to shine high, and the pen to drop the pearls to display the splendid chapter again! Fu Wei cherishes it.

The idea is very good, the case is also good, but the writing skills are a bit poor. The most impressive thing is that in Chapter 43, when the boss kicks Yun tide and then the colon is Yun Xi, the normal language logic should be separated. But overall it's excellent

It's super good-looking. It feels better than the Bengtiewen I've read before. The text is smooth and comfortable to read. It's currently non-toxic. I like it.

The author's writing is very consistent with the character. Moreover, I think this writing method is very novel when writing detective stories in fan fiction, and as Yaoguang is a new character, writing on this subject can avoid being backstabbed to a large extent. Also, there are a lot of laughs in this book written by the author, and it is actually very similar to Detective Chinatown. Finally, although not many people have read this book so far, I hope the author can continue to read it.