Dressed Like a Loser! Being Taken Back and Pampered by Senior Brother!

The emotional connection is natural and smooth. It's very good for a new author to write like this. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] Come on, big brother who can write books!

The writing is good, the emotional line is very natural, I can really feel the charm of the protagonist, and I can understand why the veterans fall in love with him, and I can also see that the author does not just use Xiu Xian as a background, but really describes it with intention. This is very good, and I will continue to support it in the future~

Not bad. Although it's a bit awkward in some places, it's still good overall. Good luck, author.

Actually, I don't like NP very much, but the author writes it very well. So far, it has both a monastic plot and emotional progress.

It's a good-looking movie [Sending Hearts] The emotions and plot are all natural. The golden finger is not opened very much. The only possible lightning protection point is: the protagonist is constantly being provoked/looked down on - slapped in the face in a cycle. It is a male video (the author is a boy). It is not recommended for those who don't like the style of male videos, but I personally like it [Sending Hearts]

The career line and the emotional line are very natural, the protagonists and supporting characters are all flesh and blood, the plot is not bloody, the author's writing is good, I still feel unfinished after reading it, it feels a bit short, and I still want to read their subsequent stories. I really want to read it. The author will give it some thought and continue writing.

I really feel unfinished after reading the latest chapter. I hope the author will tell this story slowly, and we will accompany you all the way to the end! (No need to write articles! Arrange three small advertisements every day!)

It's so beautiful, I love it. I wish we could meet each other in the flower market [crying]

The writing style is a bit green and the characters are a bit flat. It's okay to just read it as a sweet article. I hope the author will work hard and write better and better [I understand]

It looks good [laughs] I finally found an article that matches my XP

I'll give you four points first, just in case you're too proud. No one should be able to surpass you at this time in this kind of fantasy and otherworldly two-male theme. [Hold face][Hold face] I hope it becomes popular.

Nice! Author, please update! ! ! [Lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

Please support me, thank you!

The Shura scene between the male protagonists is really fun

It's well written and very exciting to read. One-to-many really fulfills the fantasy. Come on~ [Adoration]

It's very comfortable to watch. Although I like Shura Field very much, this kind of frank love is also very 🉑

The emotional line of the protagonist in the article is a bit stiff, the emotion advances quickly, and the ability to choose words and sentences needs to be further improved... But overall it is worth reading.

So sweet to me. Invest in Linxiu stocks. The plot is relaxed and relaxed.

Blessed are those who like to give wood to nooks and crannies

The storyline is lively, with no draggy nonsense. Come on!

I didn't have much expectations at the beginning, but the result turned out to be unexpectedly good [note]

It's so cool hahahahaha

Very traditional rhythmic writing

Very very beautiful🤩

It looks good, you can come and see it

You can tell at a glance that it was written by a boy, hahaha, it's so funny

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I really can't do it anymore! ! ! ! ! Cool, cool, cool! ! ! ! This n, p is so cool! ! ! ! !

The feelings seemed to come a bit quickly, but in chapter 12, the feelings were different, and it felt a bit like male porn (especially the name)🤔The book cover could actually be changed to a better-looking one! I like the subject matter

Come on, I must keep updating [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh I like it so much, author, come on, don't give up, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.