Interstellar: Abandoned, I Became the Only 3S-Rank

I read it very carefully. Generally speaking, the female protagonist relies on the system and has more chats with the system. The male protagonists are all tool people, just giving resources. If you want to see the emotional line, there is basically no relationship. The daily communication has a cold and indifferent attitude. Some of the words the female protagonist says to the male protagonist are a bit harsh. (I personally feel that I am wrong and I didn't say it), and the length of the female competition is also relatively long. Maybe the character suddenly becomes stronger and has the attitude of a superior. Because it is still being serialized, I still want to follow up and see what the follow-up is like. Friends who are interested can check it out

It's good to watch. Just get a divorce. I hope the villain won't keep jumping around until the ending. Repeated slaps in the face are meaningless and will make the protagonist seem to have no IQ.

The writing is quite good, but in the early stages the heroine keeps giving in to the original heroine, which makes people feel uncomfortable and aggrieved. I hope that the heroine can grow up in the later chapters and be able to use the rules to fight back. There is still much room for improvement in the character creation of the heroine. We can still look forward to the subsequent development. I hope that we can see the growth of the heroine in the future, instead of the heroine being there all the time like being sawed off, not speaking or fighting back, or letting the heroine use the hero to fight back.

💡 Mine clearance warning! Attention, babies~ This is not a strong female/non-heroine setting. There are scenes of female competition in the article, so please proceed with caution! All the male protagonists are clean and self-sufficient, and in the setting, only the female protagonist is their only match~ The heroine is indifferent in the early stage and has no fighting spirit, but she will slowly grow in the later stage! The female protagonist has an independent personality and will not be completely dependent on the male protagonist, but this is a 1v5 story about a boss falling in love with me. The male protagonist will take the initiative to help her solve her difficulties, which makes her feel full of preference~ New authors are asking for gentle criticism online, and babies are welcome to communicate 🥰

The writing is very good, the logic is clear, the plot has ups and downs, and it is step-by-step. It is really well written. You must look back. In the early stage, the heroine was weak. The original heroine and her two ex-husbands who offended the heroine died miserably. I think the heroine can be called a big heroine. She is courageous and wise. She makes decisive decisions and uses all the favorable resources around her to protect herself and pursue the truth of the past. The heroine has emotional barriers because of the original world and is afraid to have a relationship. In the process of getting in touch with the female protagonist, the several male protagonists were impressed by the heroine's character and charm, and were willing to change for the heroine, and were willing to use their own abilities and resources to protect the heroine. (They didn't fall in love with the heroine as soon as they came out, which was really good, and it was really good to have a process like other stories.) As they got along gradually, the heroine was finally willing to accept love and establish an intimate relationship. Next, I will see that the third ex-husband also died miserably, and it was his turn. The story frame is also very tight. Finally arrived at the power center, I want to see the heroine become the king👑. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Shy]

Only after reading many novels with male protagonists can I realize how much writing skills are tested by writing each male protagonist in a three-dimensional way. Many authors are not strong enough in writing, and their character creation is more about "informing" than "showing". Let me first put a label on it. Some male protagonists are cold and distant, some have a bad temper, and some are gentle. But for a three-dimensional character, labeling is not enough. It must be reflected in every conversation and every choice, and different character backgrounds should be reflected through words and actions. The most straightforward test standard: if the lines spoken by a character would not feel inconsistent with any other person in the book, then the character creation has failed. The characters in this book are very well written. The commander speaks crisply and neatly, and suppresses the situation directly with force; the dean is calm and restrained in situations, and his love and care flow silently in the quiet place; the black market boss can even make a joke before the sky falls, and he has a sense of nonchalant relaxation. You can tell who is who by looking at their language and behavior. Focus on praising Nianxia. Personally, I don't really like Nianxia. The main reason is that many authors are not good at writing. They want to write about the contrast between a strong man in front of his lover, but they cannot write out the levels. In the end, no matter what the character is, whether they are gentle, cold and distant, or violent, when they fall in love, they are all reduced to "yingyingying" and coquettish little puppies. Seeing a group of men who are supposed to have their own styles, but after falling in love, they all turn into the same coquettish type, it is really weird, and even now I feel annoyed when I see them acting like a coquettish girl. The author's portrayal of the character made me understand that being young does not mean being incompetent. A little puppy is only a puppy in front of the people it likes. It can be coquettish and clingy, but once something happens, it can immediately switch to another face - tough, decisive, independent, and not just for show. Unlike Nianxia in some books, apart from being cute and begging for attention in front of the heroine, he will only be incompetent and furious when something happens, which is of no use at all. The heroine's growth line is also written very smoothly. It's not that I became stronger overnight, but I read all the way to the second half, and when I looked back at certain plots, I suddenly realized that the weak heroine at the beginning had unknowingly turned into the confident, calm, and strategizing person she is now. Transitions are silky smooth and unobtrusive. The only drawback is that it's too short! ! ! How come there are less than 500,000 words? Bad review! Please follow the five million word standard for such a good meal next time, thank you

In order to protect the host, the system actively kills the main system and gives the host its unique preference. It not only collects the strangled souls of the host for fusion, but also delivers the male and female protagonists of the mission world to the host to relieve the host's anger. It is a very heartwarming plot line.

It's really rare to see an interstellar novel that suits my taste [Admiration]. The writing is smooth, the plot is not procrastinating, and most of the characters in the article have online IQs. I have read many chapters several times. They are so good. I am waiting for the update. The author must keep writing [Blow kiss]

It's very well written for a novice author, but I think the rating is a little low. Personally, I don't think there is any thunder point. The heroine's inner core has grown very strong and she has absolute control. She grows slowly and learns to love and be loved. She is also very smart and can guess the core in some details. The five male protagonists each have their own characteristics, and the combination with them is not just a matter of venting. Although females are rare in this world, the aristocratic power generally belongs to males. It is normal for the military to fight against the Zerg because of their mental strength. In the empire, it is probably because the old female emperor was seriously ill and her son took over the power. There are very few S-class females and they have no offensive power. The power is in the hands of males. But the laws and rules of this world are very good to females. Therefore, it is excellent for the heroine to make reasonable use of resources and rules to build a kingdom in this situation. The logic of the whole text is clear, but there will be some errors in words and sentences. Xiaoer, this is really a great system. I hope Ah🍐 will always be happy.

I like the calm and rational character of the heroine. Although it was annoying that she repeatedly gave in to the original heroine before, but overall it is still very good. At present, it still suits my taste. I will not give it a five-star rating with a rating of just over 6 points.