Elf: I Use Elf MC as a Pokémon Master

I took a closer look at the plot that the author has revised. After the revision, there are some plot conflicts. The last time it was about Steve's power, this time it is about the power of items. However, it can be seen that the author is trying his best to satisfy the readers. Let me make the most important comment, that is, as an author, you cannot satisfy all readers, so you can selectively refer to your wishes for injection. You have written well, but there is a little problem with the plot. Since you are in the Invincible stream, you must not forcefully emphasize the combat effectiveness. The author writes well. Although there is some hard-pressed combat, the author will consider the readers' opinions, so I give this book five stars. First, the author has potential in writing books, at least more potential than most foreign authors; second, he really put his heart into writing the book; third, the author has a good attitude and will at least refer to the opinions and make revisions; fourth, encourage him.

Dear author, the world you write about is touching the heartstrings of countless readers, who are looking forward to the new chapter blooming day and night. Those vivid characters are waiting anxiously in the time and space of the story, eager to continue to perform the unfinished excitement; those ups and downs of the plot are like vines hanging in the air, eager for your wonderful pen to guide their growth direction. Every message urging updates is the most sincere call from readers, and every refresh of the page is full of their deep affection and expectation for the story. Please come back to your desk as soon as possible, let the river of words flow again, and let the stories that have been sleeping in your imagination come to life again, and live up to this eager waiting across the screen. [Shy]

Emperor Huang Tian was worthy of everyone, but he was only sorry for Yun Yun in the Star Forest. They all blamed Yun Shan for the arranged marriage and insisted on marrying Xiao Wu. Tang San snatched Shi Hao's million-year soul ring in order to save Xiao Wu. Otherwise, Shi Hao would have been nine reds and one blue gold. In order to save Shi Hao, Feng Qing'er used the Infatuation Curse to block Tang San's magical skills and never returned. However, Shi Hao finally succeeded Yan Emperor. Practicing the Burning Technique for both punishment and protection, he obtained the Divine Seal Throne of Eternity and Creation, and was recognized by the Immortal Killing Sword and the Shura Demonic Sword. Mikami Yunlan Sect beheaded Tang San, the god of death, and took back the million-year soul ring. Shi Hao retreated to attack all forbidden spells for the sake of the sentient beings in the eight realms. He used Fulong Xiangtian to give the fourteen-winged archangel Sariel a dragon head, and then used Ten Thousand Swords to return to the sect. Angel Holy Sword, Seven Killing Sword, Shura Demon Sword, Zhuxian Sword The remaining swords of Lord Gui merged into one and killed the Archangel Sariel. Although the Evil Condensation Pearl was shattered and the demon system was destroyed, there was no god in the world. Finally, Shi Hao peeled off the tenth soul ring, resurrected Feng Qing'er, and created the Endless Fire Realm, realizing the eternity of one thought. From then on, Wei Young Turtle guarded the Fire Realm and protected all beings in the eight realms. Shi Hao looked at the lower world and left a sentence: Once a bad person, he will always be a bad person!

Kill what needs to be killed, open what needs to be killed, the protagonist himself is invincible alone

It's so awesome, no need for more salt [blowing kiss]

I have a friend who was so angry that the author was too slow to update. He cried and fussed, so pitiful, so the author should update quickly!

How to say it? It's well written, but there are many problems, but it's still worth reading.

It's good to watch, the beginning is so attractive, keep reading later

Needless to say, it looks good. He just has the qualifications to become a titled Douluo [laughter]

Not multiple heroines? I've seen one now, when will the second heroine appear?

Beautiful, beautiful, wonderful book

Come on, come on, come on

It looks good, the writing is good, and the content is exquisite and vivid

A nice elf novel, very well written

The more I read, the more excited I am. It's a pretty good novel.

Elf's novel is so wonderfully written

It's okay, the writing is superb and the story is so beautifully written.

The writing is superb and the content is beautiful.

It's a very interesting book, it's so exciting

Really good story, beautifully written

I seem to have seen something similar somewhere

Those who read this novel are really lucky [OK][laugh][laugh][laugh]