The System in the Siheyuan Is a Little Stingy

The protagonist thinks like an ordinary person, but he is a time travel + Goldfinger owner. The plot will push him forward. Although he has a flat-footed mentality (you may be angry when you first watch it, but after watching it, most people may just find it easy to adopt the protagonist's mentality), but he doesn't panic when things happen and he has heavy responsibilities on his shoulders, and he can handle things (the force is worth the leverage, and the brain is not bad). One thing to say, this book is not suitable for people who only like to read Long Aotian's cool writing, nor is it suitable for readers who like to read the kind of protagonist who is ambitious and has a strong career ambition. (The protagonist is really a gold finger, and he takes a steady and steady route. As mentioned above, the protagonist is relatively salty, and the protagonist described in the early stage really has no ambition.) The protagonist does not loosen his grip, and supplies and other materials will only be given to relatives and business elites. Even if he is sending supplies, he has his own considerations. He has a golden finger, but he won't treat others as if he is a fool and spend money without concealing it (he is just a little too cautious. Regarding this part of the plot, the author does not describe it well. When we read the novel, we know that the protagonist is the protagonist, what he has done, and what he has. But in reality, who would inexplicably suspect a stranger who has done nothing). The plot is generally a steady flow, life is ordinary, there are no outrageous and absolute bad guys, the characters in the article are all real, and the protagonist and his family can survive the occasional ups and downs in life. When cheap parents meet the protagonist, they won't bother or ask too much (cheap mom will want to ask a few more questions at first, but cheap dad is very sensible and says that as long as the child doesn't go astray, it doesn't matter where the supplies came from. Later, cheap parents will know what they are doing and won't ask more questions). Even if you know that the protagonist has money, tickets and supplies, you will not blindly ask for them. For example, the protagonist's bicycle and the renovation of the house bought by the protagonist are all paid for by the cheap dad... The protagonist's marriage is also very good. The woman's family is in good condition, the family is harmonious, she is good-looking, she is a college student, and she and the protagonist are attracted to each other, and they fall in love on the premise of marriage. The author's plot about their relationship is quite good. The protagonist's career is as a police officer, and the sign-in system is quite good. It was given a lot of skills to enhance the investigation and finding clues, and even signed in to get a photographic memory. I was really envious when I saw this section.

The author's writing about family is very warm and has a strong visual sense. The male and female protagonists are pretty good so far. However, there are some areas where the author's writing is quite contradictory. You don't need to emphasize it otherwise it will feel verbose. Generally speaking, it is good. I hope the plot will get better and better in the future [Love]

What does Browning pay when he signs in? How do you explain what you get by signing in? Isn't it good to keep it?

Everything else is acceptable, but the Su family sister's shrewdness is annoying. I don't want the heroine to be Su Wanyu. The two of them are not suitable. I saw him with the boss of the Su family and abandoned the article.

<It looks great, keep up the good work!

It has a delicate flavor and is unconventional

It's pretty good. It's much better than the bullshit story in the Siheyuan. Come on, come on.

It looks good, but there are too few updates. The author will update more.

It's not a courtyard house, it's a daily life

It feels like the author is not writing about an era, but rather a romantic drama.