From Discarded Young Master of an Immortal Clan to Supreme Immortal!

One hundred chapters, one hundred chapters were suppressed by the original enemy. According to this progress, we still have to suppress one hundred to two hundred chapters. Initial cultivation level: Early stage of foundation building Chapter 100 Cultivation: In the middle stage of Qi training and foundation building, physical training cannot build the foundation. I'm not good anymore. I've been ridiculed by the same little character several times in a row and I'm still not dead.

It's quite good to watch, the plot is solid, the design of several talents is also very enjoyable, and the setting is also very reasonable. It can be seen that the author wants to write a good work. But there are also some small problems. First, the pressure on cultivation was too harsh, and it took seventy chapters to go from the early stage to the middle stage of foundation building. The second is the differential treatment of men and women. All villains must be male, and all women will more or less side with the protagonist. The favorability of female characters comes out of nowhere. I still hope that the author can treat everyone equally and not put too many filters on female characters. After all, if this kind of control is not good, it is easy to write the protagonist as a boiling sheep. I've been poisoned by this a lot. This novel has great potential, be optimistic about the author! The author feels that there is still a lot of room for improvement. It is a pity that there is no popular book Eunuch. I will give it a five-star support.

This is what the real and fake young master stories on male videos look like. It's not just about changing the protagonist and writing another story. The obvious feature is that you can feel that the protagonist always has something to do. But there are big problems in terms of realm, relationship handling and plot. But because the pace is fast, these problems do not affect reading. It's a good experience to listen to books without your brain.

There is nothing poisonous about this book. The protagonist has a delicate mind and a good grasp of the emotional line (those who like sweet stories may not think it is good). It is very good in long-term revenge. It is a pity that Tomato mainly focuses on refreshing novels, and refreshing novels are all fast-paced. Long-term revenge is too slow. The main character The character level pressure is too heavy, and all you can do is watch the people around you pretending to fight, and the only ones who can take advantage of it are basically those side jobs, which means that those who like to read cool stories will not be satisfied, those who like slow-paced stories will not be satisfied, there is no sense of substitution, and those who like sweet stories will not be satisfied, and the emotional line is too slow. If the pace of this book was faster and the protagonist was not so cruel, then the emotional line of this book would be perfect, but it is too late to change now Give five stars to encourage the author to write a new book. Don't be so harsh on the rating. Be more relaxed and have a better grasp of the emotional line. With the author's writing style and not many poisonous points, how can he write a small hit?

This book is really good! I feel that he can be ranked in the top five of all the books I have read. In the early stage, the protagonist's brother is very strong, but the protagonist is very weak. Just bear the humiliation and practice silently. The initial improvement is relatively slow, which may be a bit uncomfortable to watch. But the first part is a bit uncomfortable, but the later part becomes more and more enjoyable [laughing][laughing][laughing] I like the feeling that the protagonist's strength is gradually improving. The female protagonist is also a good person and has a great effect on the male protagonist. You can really watch it and give it a try. This is not a mindless novel. It is a growth story in which the protagonist becomes stronger step by step. I quite like it. The further you go in this book, the more motivated you will be to read it. So be patient and read it slowly. You may also be attracted. I sincerely recommend it, it's a good book [laughs][laughs]

It's wonderfully written, I hope it's more reasonable. Why are you forming pills during the foundation building stage? Yuanying, right under your nose, is running out every day.

I would like to call it, my thoughts come true, I write whatever I dream about

It feels like I have been suppressing my realm for too long. I haven't broken through the core formation at 160 yet [laughing], but I looked at it from the front and found that it was pretty good. But when I looked at it, I realized that 160 has not formed a pill yet and the villain's realm is still high. Overall, it's still a good five-star support.

The only drawback is that the pace is too slow. At this pace, you have to wait a few years to see the protagonist beat up Su Minghuang.

The previous one was ok, but when I saw the fourth talent, I didn't understand it. It said that the clone that transforms the three pure states into one breath can transfer all the cultivation and insights to the main body, and then the main body can be upgraded to a certain level. Because once you have a permanent certificate and then return the cultivation and insights to the clone, you can upgrade yourself painlessly. , Then since this is the case, why not absorb all the cultivation of the clone into the main body to forcibly improve the realm of the main body, and then give all the realm of the main body to the clone, strengthen the realm of the clone, and then you can absorb it again and strengthen the main body, and you can become an immortal in one go.