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After reading about 20 novels, one thing that puzzles me is why no one reads such a good novel? At present, the overall atmosphere of this article is relatively depressing. But combined with the story, this depression just embellishes it. The experience of the laboratory is briefly mentioned but also reflects the inhuman treatment of the experimental subjects. The depression of college life and the portrayal of the character are very good. This section reflects human nature very well, whether it is the roommate's efforts to slander the protagonist for points, or the efforts and inheritance spirit of the seniors to escape from the college, the rapid transformation of the juniors later, and the information left by the seniors and key items for escape. (Why didn't you mention the name? It's because I forgot all about it and can't remember it. [Smile][Smile][Smile]) Overall, the general trend of this article is that the first 20 chapters are very depressing, and I will continue to review it before I read it. All in all, this article is highly recommended. The writing is excellent, and it does not use AI. It is very smooth and unresponsive whether reading or listening.

It's okay in Tomato. I give it a 7.8. I hope the synopsis is good and the plot logic is good. Why did the old Americans go to Hengshui Middle School? [Thinking] It's a bit strange.

It's okay, but I feel it's a bit off, and I'm not sure what the shortcomings are. Is it because Sesu doesn't have more descriptions? Not entirely, but I feel like if I mentioned it a little more, it might not be so boring at the beginning and I could make it clearer whether it happened. Specifically, it should be that the readers lack something to look forward to happening. I think it can be said that I felt that it was a bit overwhelming when I read it. There is also the problem I mentioned at the beginning. The world setting needs to be explained a little bit in the first three chapters, otherwise many people may not be able to stick with it or just can't stand it. This will also help the previous chapters to shape what they expect to happen in the minds of readers. It is still recommended to describe it more clearly, otherwise you may not understand it. After all, I feel a little confused.

Surprisingly, it's quite good-looking. It comes from fans of transformation stories and torture stories. It's not the kind of pure sadism that goes all the way down (I don't like this kind of sadism after watching it too much), it's the kind of ups and downs, the feeling of struggling in a serious world view. Part of the plot is written in a fog to avoid review, but there is really no way to do this, so no points will be deducted. All in all, I like it very much

If the Hell dungeon at the beginning is okay, but if it doesn't work, just use the experience card to see an unknown fire.

I think the title of this book should be changed to Rebirth in the Cyberpunk City

Very nice, support it

Why are all your previous books gone?

Chapter 9 It's so hellish

It's okay, I hope to write it down

Too bad I lost it at the end of Chapter 4

Very beautiful but too short. I decided to keep it longer [thinking]

I can add my own, because the work is interesting enough

Good-looking, the transformed girl has to go through hardships to find happiness. Kuchiya [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]