Evolving from a Salamander into a Dragon

The writing is okay, the enemies are not brainless, they are not slanderous, and it is not a systematic story. There is nothing wrong with the plot so far.

There are too few good dragon articles. Although the number of words is small now, there is nothing too stupid in the early writing. I will stay steady later [currently working on the manuscript]

Absolute strength, resulting in loneliness, then what teaches you to write is...

Very good looking

Come on, write more [I understand] [I understand] punch to the core

Okay, okay, looks good

The plot is reasonable, it does not overwhelm the combat power, it is pure beast style, not the Holy Mother, this book is closer to the wisdom of normal beasts and human beings. Like other alien beast novels that are inexplicably close to humans, you can understand if you want to say that you want that kind of mountain god or that you are still on the original earth, and hope that one day you can become the same and reunite with your relatives. You travel to another world. It's hard to say whether humans today are the same kind of humans as humans on Earth in the past.

Encourage [Chigua] to persevere and finish the book

Very good, very good

A very good novel, Dragons, as good as Feast.