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The Two Male Protagonists Who Cultivate Immortality Can Make People's Eyes Brighter Again and Again, Don't Let the Writing Style Be Awkward
I want to read a book like "Stop chasing the hero, you will be unhappy if he dies".
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Two Male Protagonists Upgraded to a Cool Novel
Please recommend! The plot is very exciting, a more ancient and traditional kind of story about training, upgrading and fighting monsters!
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There are 100 chapters in total. I saw 68 chapters and suddenly felt something was wrong. Why did the word "extremely" appear so many times? I searched for this word in the entire text. Guess what? This word appeared 81 times in this chapter (I counted it myself). Who knows how uncomfortable I feel? Is it the number one AI? I wrote about such lively and three-dimensional characters before, but I have made it to this point, read 68 chapters and written more than a dozen paragraphs. I am so full of enthusiasm that I have fed the dog. I just wanted to recommend this book to everyone around me who reads novels. Now my mind is filled with the words "extreme" and "cold"... After all, I made a mistake. I even gave the author a comment and encouragement, saying that I feel that it is comparable to the top two male protagonists on Tomato. What do you think of a sincere reader? I'm desperate, I'm broken, I'm helpless. If it's really not AI, I'll apologize to you, but it's really hard to have more than 80 "extremes" in a real person chapter. Putting aside a few chapters that are suspected of being AI, the overall story is pretty good. However, do you feel that the whole later part is too heavy? It is recommended to look for the early feelings. It may not be attractive enough if it is always suppressed, and the relaxed parts in the later stages are not that funny. I still recommend it
This is really good to watch, the plot is clever, the characters are well created, and Shou has a growth-type personality. Every time I see him being beaten, I feel distressed and happy. However, there are too few updates, and I can't get enough of it [crying] [crying]
This is the kind of time travel I like to watch. It's not a regression. The protagonist still retains his modern oral habits and his brains, but it seems that others don't pay much attention to the protagonist's modern oral habits? I still hope to see a collision between ideas from different civilizations
It's good to watch, and the dialogue between the two protagonists has a dry sense of humor, which really poked me. And I can feel that the protagonist is growing up little by little, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. In terms of love, our Junior Brother Ye is also very possessive. Although this kind of relationship is not a Taoist couple, it is a plot where he is very possessive of another person. I'm really looking forward to the future development, but I feel like it's a bit underwhelming.
I really think it's well written, keep up the good work! And this protagonist is indeed a growth type. He is not particularly strong at the beginning, and then gradually becomes stronger after receiving special training from another protagonist. I think this process of slowly becoming stronger is more interesting [Like]
When I wrote something, it really poked me every bit! It was really shocking and delicious, and every plot was specially integrated. It was very funny. It is the kind of person who suddenly gives you a thunderous speech and makes you cry with laughter when you are a little bit sad. The character is also very cool, but the protagonist is really fragile in the early stage. This is called a growth type, and it takes time to grow. Because he is not the kind of person who is favored by heaven, so the protagonist is quite hard. And the villain is quite powerful. Not so flat! The other supporting characters are also written with great care. They are also very flesh-and-blood. The plot is also foreshadowing. There are many contrasts, many shocking and delicious. I simply can't imagine how someone can understand me so well. The author is simply my soulmate! It's scary that a person who has never met me can write such a story that fits my feelings. I can only say that I met my soulmate in the mountains and rivers. The Boya and Zhongzi period was the time when I had the worst relationship with the author.
The author writes the growth-type protagonist very directly and wonderfully.
I think it's pretty good [Sending Hearts], but the two of them are having a hard time, I hope the plot behind it will be sweet [Blowing Kisses]
Okay, I don't really like this kind of novel where the protagonist is a bit depressed, but the writing is still good (is this rental house literature?) Come on, author, I believe your book will become a hit.
Nice! Watching Xiao Gu grow up slowly, our little Gu is very smart. This thing and that thing happened one after another, and the two male protagonists just helped each other. But I just watched the early part. I watched it for two hours and fell asleep.
I like this secret favorite
Quite funny. Haha, the protagonist gave me a miserable feeling. Also, it's too little. The author is great, come on, give more.
Very nice book! Come on!
Nice! ! ! So pretty! !
Gu Qingzhou Vs Ye Jinghong [Eating Melon] Samsara Mirror, not bad
I'll go, I'll go, it's super delicious! Two people just fall in love with each other unconsciously, it kills me! ! Madam, you are so great! !
It's so delicious 😋
I'll go, I'm happy that my enemies are awesome
The story is wonderful. But there are only stories, no people.
Very nice, looking forward to the upgrade. By the way, when Gu Qingzhou becomes stronger, can he absorb the power of the Demon Lord and become stronger?
It looks good, please come on author [laughs]